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Posted: 12 years ago


that Viraj...he is so selfish...just to marry a rich girl he played with Shreya's life and now left his blind sister to look after herself...

Maan is changing after seeing Geet's courage...

precap is very interesting--Geet knows that it was Maan who attacked her...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




that Viraj...he is so selfish...just to marry a rich girl he played with Shreya's life and now left his blind sister to look after herself...

Maan is changing after seeing Geet's courage...

precap is very interesting--Geet knows that it was Maan who attacked her...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...




😃 thanx
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it...precap seems interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm update.viraj is so low.maan don't care about anybody.geet is hurt.precap interesting.how does geet know?sry 4 late richu
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fabulous part
very nicely written
liked a lot
continue soon
waiting for next
waiting⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww what happned cutieee?
Looking for an update...gving soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 7

GEET straight forwardly told him not to come to her house daily. Daima and Maan both are stunned hearing her rude words.

Daima:Geet ye tu kya keh rai hai beta?

She wants to know the reason behind this wired decision.

Maan:ek min daima bolne dijiye Geet ko.

Maan assuming the reason behind her decision.

Geet:maine jo bolna tha bol diya hai.

She said stifffly and turned to another side.

Daima:wahi main puchh rai hu beta kyu?

Geet:har kyu ka jwab nahi hota daima.

Daima was confused and Geet denying to reveal the reason. Maan step forwrd towrd her.

Maan:Daima main geet se akele me baat karna chahta hu.(Daima leave them alone and Maan start conviencing her.)Geet i know y u talk like this? Lekin Geet agar humara mann saaf hai to mujhe nai lagta ki hume logo ki bakwas pe dhyan dena chahiye.

He said softly and trying to convience her,but failed as she wont agree with him.

Geet:Maan pls aap bat ko ghumaiye mat maine jo b decision liya hai soch samjh k liya hai.waise b aap kab tak apni guilt ka bhoj uthayenge.

Maan get confused and shoked both. He trying to prediticting the hidden meaning of her words.

Maan:Geet...

He cant able to complete his words,which is struk in his throat due to his guilt concious.

Geet:Maan i know us raat aap hi the jisne mujhpe attack kia tha.

Maan's eyes widened with her revealation and step back far from her. He cant belive on his ears and feels chill through his whole body. He trembling dreadfuly.

Maan:Geet tumhe pata tha to firr..?

Before he completes Geet cuts him in btwn.

Geet:Maan i know what is running in ur mind.u wants to know na when i got to know about u? When u saved me from falling. I recognise your touch. Maan shayad tume pata nahi hai lekin hum blind log dusre sences k through dekhne ka kaam karte hai.

Maan:firr tumne sabko bataya kyu nahi.kyu itne dinno se chup ho? Tumhe mujhe usi time jail bhej dena chahiye the.

His dark lashes lowerd,cant able to glance her innocent face.

Geet:for what?meri madat karne k liye?mujhe hospital lejane k liye ya firr waha k sare bills bharne k liye? Maan main ye to nai janti ki us raat aap aisa kyu krna chahte the.lekin itna janti hu aap ne wo kiya nahi jo aap badi asani se kar skte the.(her voice stragnate in her throat)lekin apne aisa kia nai,or mujhe hospital b leke gaye.main janti hu bills wali baat pe b apne jhooth bola tha. Viraj kisi ki help karne walo me se nahi to wo kyu apko pasie dega?

Maan:Geet i m sorry.i know whatever i had done is not forgavable.

Geet:but Maan i already forgive you. Maan apne jo kiya wo galat tha lekin mayne rakhta hai jo apne nahi kiya. Apke ander k achhai ne apko roka wo important hai. Maan pls aap khud ko doshi maan kar bewajh pareshan hona band kar do. Or pls apni zindagi me wapis laut jao. Humara sath bas yahi tak tha.

Maan was alredy in guilty and whn she pleades to leave her home,he cant able to argue with her any more. Moreover she also forgive him,which gave him a relief after sevral days. He left from there and reached to his home. He slept peacefuly after many days as he get rid from the burden of his sin. On the other hands Geet's heart felt strange heaviness in her little heart. She sobbing in her pillow.

Three days passed and both not contacted 2 each other. Maan get relief from the burden of his sin but still felt restlessnes in him 3 days passed without talking to her. He wants to saw her just for once. She bcom his habbit. In start he taken it as his duty to repet but now no reason is remain still he wants to go to her.

Maan:wo darti hai par main nahi. I was not wrong. Or firr jake dekhne me haz hi kya hai. Ek kaam karta hu chup chap jake dekh aata hu. Kya pata use meri zarurat ho to.wo to mujhe batayegi nahi. Kitna fark hai dono bhai behan me. Ek itna gira hua or ek ye hai puri duniya se akele ladna chahti hai. Maan tu sahi hai dont think alot go and check how she is.

He support his thoughts while roaming restlessly in his house. These new bound he had with her is unexlainable but one thing which is sure is that he cant resist her absence for a long.

Although Maan dont love flowers so much but still he buy a small buquet like teenage lover do,for her. He silently entered in her house. A wide smile crept on Daima's lips. She bacom so happy seeing him again.but before she gave words to her expression Maan gave her a signal to stay silent. He placed a boquet on table and touched her feet for blessings. The he asked for her in signals. Daima told him that she was in her room upstairs. He wants to see her just for once.

Its not only Maan who misssed her badly,Geet was too. Being remain silent Geet's heart told her about his presence. She madly came out of her room,where fragances of fresh roses invade her sences. She can feels him. She know he is here. Its true she not able to see him but evry fibre of her body react on the vibes she recieved from his body...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wase 1st tym mai kisi ff ya ss me 1st hu comment me 😆😊

ab aapne update de dia toh socha padh ke hi jao sone😛

it saddy
geet ne maan ko aane se mana kar dia ghar pe
nd woh janti thi woh maan h phir v maaff kar dia😊
nd both are restless
want to see each other
lolzz u both are fallen in love😳
nd maan at last went to see her woh v flowers ke sath
hayeee nd geet jaan gae he is there in her house
😳 waiting for next
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awes um doll😊
geet refuses maan to cum hr home
geet knows about maan
maan felings restless
geet feels maan 's presence👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a great update.
Geet knew it was Maan from first & forgave him.
But both r restless not being with each other.
Atleast Maan has come to c her finally.
How sweet. Geet recognised him only with flowers scent.

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