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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 149: Tumult of Turmoils

Payal blinked: was it just her worry messing with her head or did Lady Manorama look a tad bit suspicious as she watched her son through her mask?

Yeah yeah… he is going to announce IT…!!
Come on Lord Aakash..!

"Thank you, father," smiled Lord Akash and he addressed the gathered, "I would like to bring to your notice that I, Lord Akash, in the view that it is time I join my sister's chosen path of matrimony, would like to put forward a proposal after my heart."

Wow… I like this royal way of announcement….

"Father, mother," he began, smiling with a shy twinkle in his eyes, "I would like to ask the hand of a woman I love in marriage: the hand of Miss Payal Gupta."

Booom… Booom…. Dhadaam…. Aur yeh futa bomb!!!

Kushi's gaze was drawn to him and she saw how tired and weary in face he looked as he moved from the shadow of the huge doors into the room lit by the chandeliers.

Read it 5-7 times to give best justice to visualization…

He walked as majestically as he always did but she could see in his eyes, he looked disturbed. Was it what happened between them that had weakened him so? Or was it something else?

Yes yes the former one dear khushi.. nothing else…!!

Holding her sister's hand, Payal looked at her aunt, at her mother and then at the man who had proposed to her, "It is not right for me to speak when my elders are here to speak for me, but in answer to what your father has told you, my lord, I wish to give an response with regard to your proposal. You already know the answer but just as you made your proposal public I would like to make my answer firm and public too."

I m proud of her…. This payal is much more better…!

Unlike everyone, he had not watched Payal when she spoke. His gaze had fallen on Kushi's probing gaze and he realized that she had cried. The traces were not evident but he knew. His gaze slid to her neck. However, her hair let loose would not permit his gaze to satisfy its search.

You are sooo sooo sooo soo good in your sentence formation… super effective!!

He looked up at Lord Akash through the wet hair falling over his forehead, "I can feel his vein but his pulse seems weak."

After reading the bold line… I lost my consciousness… yeah, itni serious situation main bhi mujhe mere Lordy ki hotness dikhai de rahi hain….

"Pardon me, Lord Raizada," interrupted a firm voice, and Lord Arnav aside to see Kushi looking fixedly at her father's face as she spoke, "We cannot let our father be nursed in your Castle. We are taking him home and since the herbalist stays closer to us, it will be easier for him to reach us too."

Tell me one thing khushi, are you guys playing ego-ego!!?? 1st time he is saying something right without his ego, so now you come in with yours.. uff… Be practical yaar….

Buaji sighed and watched the family, trying to ease the grief that was gnawing at her own heart. She had lost a husband once. And her parents had succumbed to old age long ago. She looked at her brother's pale face. Would she lose her last remaining 'bond of blood' too?

I have no words to say here on this emotional thought of yours Linny…

"We two will get in with this carriage," said Lord Arnav, nodding his head in the direction of Master Happy's carriage and then looking at the Gupta family, "Two of you can climb in with us. Who will it be?"

I can't believe this my Lordy said this… like really!!

"One more," said Lord Arnav, looking again at Kushi and Lord Akash turned to look at Payal, but Buaji said, "You two girls come with the Ram. I will go with them and see to the herbalist."

I am sorry but I smiled a bit on visualizing faces of both the Lords…

Rahim Chacha sighed and his gaze swept towards the sky that was ridden by lightning and thunder. He didn't notice, however, the winged creature that hovered in the dark heights, visible when a lightning flashed and vanishing again when darkness engulfed the vast nothingness.

Fab ending… finally Hoopoe's thought came true.. but no one has noticed flying Gen..

Chapter 150: Seeking Solace

First of all congratulation to cross 150th milestone… And I know we have many more to go…

He closed his eyes, feeling affected more by her words than by her fingers.

This is the first time khushi's words/feelings touched to his heart than her beauty to his eyes/mind.

Lord Arnav opened his eyes and they were glazed not with the rain but by his own emerging tears. He didn't know...he hadn't known...that she had lost her parents too...

Two bodies wet in rain.. whereas their souls wet in tears…
One in her own pain.. other in her pain...

He turned back at that very moment, watching her rush back in, his gaze longing, while the words crossed his mind again, I don't belong here...

his reminding his words to himself is ok,i understood why... but i am not sure about why these words?? hmmm... *deep thinking*

BG of episode.. [Those feelings which they wanna say but could not…at the time of the emotional hug]

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Arnav:

Ho Gam Ke Badal Mujhpe Tham Jaane De
Bechainiyo Ko Mujhse Takrane De
Dukhti Ho Koi Baat Mujhpe Aane De

Khushi:

Dil Sochta Tha Ke Koi Apna Ho
Koi Raaz Na Ho Jo Uss Se Rakhna Ho
Aankhein Na Kholu Main Shayad Sapna Ho

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

I am sorry I couldn't express much here…. I am speechless dear, more than writing/words this time due to the happenings, the current air of arhasia.. I am still under the feel that you have created here… I m chocked, chocked by running emotions and thoughts in each one of them and chocked with tears too…!

Very emotional update...

Enjoy
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Soul

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Posted: 12 years ago
LIn...even though i had not many words to say...yet please check out my edited comment here...if u didn't notice the changes so far...


Love, Crazy Meg 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update...liked it very much

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww..loved the update...very emotional...Arnav, Khushi's hug was simply too good...very well written...please do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I m huge follower of ur writing
Excited to know how story ll unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba vey I50th!!!!!!congrads Aqua...and u knw this is my 2000th post...hahaha i'm double happy...do u want any mention about update...cz i don't have any words...but i does want to thank you for re creating the magic named IPKKND through Linny's style... My heart felt thanks to u my young Lady... Lovvv u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dearest Lin, how happy I am to see the HUUGEEE amount of progress the FF has made! 150 narrations!!!! 🥳 🥳
When you said it would be a "looongg Ball Night" I had trouble anticipating how long the night would actually be but now, phew could a night get any longer girl?!?
I looved how the whole night just flowed together, the emtions, the feelings, the events. It all seemed soo life like and real, something that I had never even imagined to run like!!!!
ArShi's dance was magical..They really did make sparks 👍🏼!!!!!
Their little "encounter" was HOT HOT HOTT!! Temperatures were rising and I felt their chemistry just reached newer, higher, bigger heights. Keep the rabba ves coming Lin, they make me haapeee 😃
Akash and Payal's sweet, blossoming romance.. ❤️
The whole "I DONT WANT YOU TO MARRY HER!!!" drama shama with mami was embarassing but hilariouss! 🤣
Generel Shyam and Master Shashi's evil confrontation... *shudder* I am still wondering what on earth happened to him and it is sooo reassuring to know that he who deserves to die, WILL DIE!!! Moohahahahhh... 😉
Lady Lavanya's broken heart made me cryyy 😭 🥺. I felt her pain, felt her sorrow... but then again I saw Aman's love, his care and compassion was sooo nice to see! 😊
Must you make me tell you yet another time that you're writing style is phenomenal and your updates leave me speechless?? You just love praise don't you?? Bet you're blushing and lowering your eyes... I can just imagine!!
Waiting to hear moreee...
Make it sooonn!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Finally A Hug. From Khushi To Arnav. (:
Congrats On 150 Chapters.
Your Amazing Writer Lin. (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
She runs with all her might and he holds her with all the strength he has!!! They don't know this yet, but they complete each other! Ah, what love!!!

He didn't know that she had lost her parents too. How could he have known? He didn't really take an initiative to know her, did he? He always always despised her, not for who she was but for what she was doing to him.

The scene where he forces her to stay into his arms!!! There is only one word to describe that- AWESOME!

Lin, even with the pain that surrounds everyone in this tale, you create MAGIC!
Edited by Jammy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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