FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: yas23
awesome update
hmmm tracking dievice for priya
arjun was concerned fot priya about it
the case is indeed very interesting
wondering who is behind nisha
precap priya got hurt
thanx 4 pm
continue soon

Thank you so much.

Yes the whole tracking device is based on a research I read lately and I thought it was a fascinating concept yet the whole thing is very risky too, that is a cause for concern of course.

Case will be solved in the next update and it will start the revelation of the past also.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: Piyarani
Waooo dr i read part..13
now lot of ques runing in my minddd right now...!!!
kuch to bahut bura huya hai...!!
priya ke saath...
but what..??that was bothering right now..!!
u r realy grate writer...lvly update...!!!
hop arjun. solve everythink soon

Thank you.

Yes something bad did happen to her and I did mention it in one of the previous updates but not the details, basically she was assaulted by Sik's brother and his men.

Arjun will get to bottom of everything soon.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Superb update :)

The case is very interesting ...

Thank you so much.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Awesome post
I like how Arjun was concerned for Priya regarding the internal device
then the case...its similar to Roshni, Priya and Arjun...
i hope by the time the case is solved, Arjun also realizes the truth!

btw, the case is very interesting...

Cont coon!

Thank you so much Vidya.

Yes to all you said, there are similarities but differences also.😉

Oh yeah, Arjun is going to be smacked in the face with it for sure.

Thanks so much.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Originally posted by: rajvi20
Read all the parts and loved them all...

Want to know more about Arjun-Roshni-Priya entwined past...
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM!

Thank you so much, glad you like the story.

Soon things will start to unravel.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: Shomon
Update plz.. :)

Will be updating soon, just have to edit the part.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Di eagerly waiting...
congo fr 100pgs!!

Thank you so much Payal.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#719

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This is soo much fun! 😉 😃

Oh btw.. Forgotiya..

Congratulations on treading past the 100-pg mark.. We're soon going to see u at thread-2..🥳

Wish u loads of good luck!!
May BL reach a minimum of 5 threads!! Coz it soo totally deserves it! And so do you, BB 1! 😉😳

Wokay.. Moving on to the update..

Since, I am bhery bhery intelligent, I'd kinda guessed what was coming! (*ducks* Sorry! 😛)

So, Nisha had been in contact with Priyanka; probably since she'd figured out what was cooking.. *hint* : Synonymous to Sameer-Swati in the past?! Maybe! 😕

Yes I know the evidence are all pointing at her and that is what is bothering me about this case from the beginning..
Pah! Arjun Ji.. Take a hint, my dear!!

Joh dikhta hai woh hota nahi hai, right ACP Arjun?
Haaye.. Taunting, are we?!! 😉

Okay, and that bit of reasoning provided by the hotwa to Shree..
if only, you could hear yourself dude! 😕

Why do you want to know Priya?
This is what has stumped me, Shilpa!! I don't know what to make of it? Is this the part where the family got involved? Probably.. I'd wait for your next updates to know more..

Priya's take on Leena's involvement.. Bingo! 👍🏼
And Sameer realised it.. bingo 2! 😉

"This is all circumstantial still, we have no solid proof and we could be wrong about this whole thing and it could be that Nisha got greedy and decided to sell the latest designs at a higher rate." Arjun reasoned but he knew the first scenario was more likely since Nisha already had enough money to live comfortably for rest of her life.

I feel like holding his head and shaking him up!!
Nisha wouldn't do that.. And our girl hadn't done it either!! Dude.. THINK!!

Oh! So we're turning into a Chotu pankha, are we?!! 😉 Great job there! 👏

Priya stopped at the door to look behind her before entering and her eyes widened when she saw Arjun close behind her.
(Mohabbatgirl Antennae activated!!) 😉😆

Why the hell did you kidnap her? All you had to do was get the designs from where I had them hidden, and the blame would have fallen on her automatically. I had made sure that all the evidence pointed to her. She wouldn't have been able to prove her innocence at all." Leena said hysterically to the man standing in front of her.

I'd bet on my newly bought Rasasi perfume that similar/ exact words had been spoken in the past. What say?! 😉😛

"Just once I wanted to teach you a lesson but you managed to ruin it for me again. I had everything within reach, money, power and a man who loves me but as soon as you came onto the scene I felt like I was loosing everything. All I wanted was for you to go far away form our lives." Leena's shoulders slumped in defeat.
Oopsie daisy again! Shades of Grey!! I can't hate her now..

Now now..
The shooting fiasco deserves a loud applause for varied reasons..
No. 1 being, Arjun's dormant feelings are slowly coming to the forefront..
2. Much needed comic relief/ light-hearted moments.. Esp. Akdu Rawte!!
Wait.. Arjun didn't retaliate to that!! 😲 😉
3. Sameer.. Haaye.. I'm starting to fall for him, Shilpa.. All your fault!!
I don't want to be disloyal to Arjun Ji!! 😭
4. Tashan talks between the duo! Both refusing to relent.. Full marks to you for that!! 👏 😉
I love it when any female stands ground against him.. 😉😆

And now, my most favorite dialogue of the update!! Please pat yourself on the back once! I insist!!
I'm not posting it here.. SInce it's a bit long.. But you know, which one, right?
Priya's thoughtful words to Leena..

Those lines conveyed it all.. And helped me to better understand her character.. She's such a selfless soul.. And I think it is this selflessness (for her sister) coupled with her undying feelings for Arjun that give her the strength to do what is doing!! 👍🏼

Priya turned to see Arjun watching her intently as if he something big just smacked him in the face. He looked pale and for a minute his face was filled with pain..
Okay.. So the antennae have been activated once again! Hope the signal keeps relaying from his brain cells to the antennae! 😉😊

Save your samjhae ya samjhun for the criminals Arjun, I know what I am doing..
Bwahahaa.. I soo wanted to see Arjun's face after she said that!! baby! It's time you get a reality check! 😉😆
And he did!

You are going to the hospital, either walk on your own or you are going to get carried out of here..
Achha ji.. bass haq hai ek mera? Huh? (MG alert!) 😉 Nah! the guy was really concerned! 😊

Arjun wanted to make her... about Priya.
&
He was beginning to realise... Priya to the door..
Okay.. forget his! I'm banging my head on the wall, now! 🤔

Priya's words to Nisha.. Spot on! And very well written.. So, this is what keeps her going! I'm soo proud of her! 👏😳

Arjun heard... the truth..
😲 This is one of those times, when I want him to stop digging deeper..

Okay so Arjun Ji Driver Ki driving her to the hospital.. Are we going to get a car scene with *Chupke chupke* moments? Just asking!! 😉

Phew! I'm pretty sure you're bored with the recap of the Update! Anyway, this was needed for me to understand it better and also to let you know, what I felt about it! 😃

I'm extremely sorry, if I got carried away and ended up spilling the beans..

Anyhow! Bring on the hospital scenes, Shilpa Ji!! Me all set with Popcorn and Diet Coke!

This just keeps getting better and better..

And yes, I still maintain my stand.. I'm losing it.. All thanks to you and BL!

Brilliant.. Freakin Awesome work!! 👏
And here's a special wala hug for doing what you're doing.. Coz I realise, how stressful this must be, at times.. 🤗

Okay.. i'm going to shut my trap now! 😉

Thanks for the PM and please update sooner!! 😃

Edited by mohabbatgirl - 12 years ago