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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

awsome girl...



but poor nupurs kaha phans gayei :(

really wana see how mayank would save her :)



thnks dear

woh mission per hai

he wil dnot wory

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

what an concept sir ji.
just lovd it.



thnku so much sir ji
bus agay bhi ap enjoy ker tth is important


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Posted: 12 years ago

Rplied to u all.. im sorry its pace is slow going.. my PC got crashed so .. I wil try to be quicker.. plus I m missing anila addat hogi hai us k scrap na aay tu mjhy yaad nhi rahta k update kerna hai…

Chapter: 5

COM: wht happen

Samrat: sir nupur is one of the hostage..

COM: wht…. He looked towards mayank who was completely lost…

COM: mayank us ko kuch nhi hoga

Mayank: is baat ki kya guarantee hai

COM: mayank is waqt asay maat socho… yeah socho k humara ek buhat kabil officer unlogo k beech mein han

Mayank: han aur un ko itna sa bhi pata chal gaya k she is an officer… tu ap janty hain kya hosakta hai…

COM: I know ur fearing but is waqt jab woh ek officer k tarha soch sakti hai tu tum bhi yeahi socho…. Aur be very careful yeah baat kahin leak na hoo..oky,,

He nooded in yes..

COM: dekho us ki life guzari hai Delhi mein…. Woh airport ko tum ya mein se bhi better janti hi.. woh waha rah ker agay humain kuch bhi bata saki tu 5000 log bach sakty hain.. is waqt sirf tumhari family hi nhi auro ki family bhi hai waha.. ek baat yaad rekho woh nupur hai… jitna hum samjhty us se kahin zayda she is capable…

Placing his hand trying to make him feel better ….He left the place

Samrat: mayankk

Mayank: I am fine….

Benji: humain yaha bhi baat kertay hoay arms se rehna chaiy

Mayank: matlab

Benji: dekh tera security plan break kerna bht bari baat hai..

Mayank: I know that…

Benji: han han tu tu duinya k sab se bara arrogant hai…. Tu is k yeah matlab hai hum mein se koi involve hai

They both look at him

Benji: manhoso mjhy asy kyun dekh rahy ho… mein ny kuch nhi kiya

Samrat: hum dekh rah hain tu kitni latest news suna raha hai humain…

Benji: tu aqalmando yaha bhi bht carefully baat kero.. yeah kisi ko pata nhi chalna nhi chaiy k bhabi kaha hai…

Mayank: life mein pehly bar koi achi baat ki hai

Benji: oye mein hamesha hi achi baat kerta hoon tum log mjhy seriously nhi layt

Mayank: tujh mein asa kya hai jo hum seriously layin…

…………

She has to do sumthing… she look around closely and sumthing hit her.. she started to breath deeply… the doctor who was a girl .. in her almost 2-3 year of studies…. Was already panicking with so much… and seeing nupur almost breathless she was scared

Priya: OMG.. apko kya hora hai… pls relax..

Man: kya hua

Priya: yeah panic ker rahi hai.. in k relax kerna hoga…

Man: tu tum doc ho kero…

Priya: dekhain ap ko kuch chaiy… ps arms se…

Nupur: mjhy mery husband se baat kerni hai pls… she was very breathless….n she was crying … she was panicking to death…

Priya: ab mein kya kero..

Man: asa nhi hosakta… samjhi ap…

Nupur: pls… mein kuch nhi batao gi… mjhy unhy bata na hai k mein thik hoon she pretending to be fainting … collapsing .. making her eyes ball move up…

Priya: pls yeah collapse ker rahin hai… yeah thik nhi hai yaha koi medical faculty nhi hai kya,..

She pretended to faint.. and the came around.. the woman splash water and the man was hell worried…. Dam it.. his weakness is there and it can screw everything….

She came in conscious and the girl relaxed a bit..

Nupur was still murmuring the same thing … she wants to make sure that she is appears if she will die… the man try to ignore yet she was on n off collapsing n it was making him not to concentrate on anything …

Man: acha thik hai.. rekho…

Nupur: she tried to cum back… the girl make her drink sum water….

Man: us k call per nazar rekhna…koi asi wasi baat nhi honi chaiy.. samjhy

Ji…

…………….

Mayank: per in logo ny koi demand kyun nhi ki…

Benji: yeah ajeeb tu hai…

His cell was ringing and it was appearing unregistered no.. he was surprised to see…

Mayank: hello

Nupur: she knew pretending breathless will make him feel hell.. but than she has no choice… hell—o… ap hain na

Mayank: n… he was about to say nupur but than control… tum thik ho nah.. kaha ho.. tumhari awz ko kya hua…

Samrat n benji rushed ot him in wht… and he said without voice its nupur…he placed it on speaker.. to let every one hear

Nupur: hum… hum thik hai… bus ghabaraht horahi thi…

Mayank: clam down… arm se… asa kasy kerskati ho tum.. zaroorat kyat hi… ek bar kuch tu socha hota….

Nupur: dhnate tu maat abhi kam se kam….

She slowly started to make herself relax… and mayank clam down… he was dam surprised to hear nupur calling this can be a trick or nupur tricking them,,and the later was more scary than any thing

Nupur: hum tu ap k pass arahy thy… acha kuch uar baat kerain pls…

Mayank: kya baat kero… mera deemgh kam nhi ker raha hai

Nupur: woh tu ap khabi bhi nhi kerta…. Aur is waqt kam nhi keray gat u dil bhi band hojay ga…

(referring him as brain ..her as heart)

Mayank: deemgh karab hogaya hai tumhara..

Nupur: aur nhi tu kya… deemgh band .. tu dil k kayal kaun rekhy ga…

Mayank: thik hai deemgh bhi….

Nupur: tu dil bhi thik rehy ga…. Pls kuch aur baat kero mjhy ajeeb alag raha hai…

Mayank: kya baat kero mjhy khud samjh nhi arah ahai

Nupur: pls mjhy ghabrahat hori hai..pls

Mayank: acha kya shopping ki waha se

Nupur: kafi sair ki…. chalo ek baat batati hoon

Mayank: kya…

Nupur: Aj mein ny tumharya liyan tumahri favt gift kharida…

Mayank: Kya..

Nupur: Seiko ki watch…. Tum ko pata hai ek itni interesting deign wali thi k bus

Mayank: Asa kya interesting hai us mein…. Us k tu typical hi hota hai

Nupur: han na tu sunao tu…. Center mein ek piece hai.. aur charo taraf ajeeb sa glass …. Mano jasay 12 gahte ki 15 lines hoon side per… aur uper se sab se stupid baat …. Date n time wala slot left side k jaga top per diya tha

Mayank: Asa kay hosakta hai… tum galat tu nhi pakri hoi thi…

Nupur: Haan bus mein hi galat pakro gi haina… khabi meri baat na mana tum

Mayank: Tum … thik hona..

Nupur: Han.. mein thik hoon… yeah loog mjhy kuch nhi ker rahy.. actually kisis ko bhi kuch nhi ker rahy hain….

Bus is se zayda aur baat nhi

The call cut and he hited his hand the frustration …. Dam it

Samrat: this is unbelievable…

Benji: nupur ny waha se call kasya ker liya

Mayank: this is dam strange…

Samrat: ya tu they …. Knew… he said in fear…

Mayank: they donot… warna nupur se thread dayty…. Us ko use ker k kuch aur hi khaty…. is k matlab yeah hai k..woh auratoo ki kafi respect ker rah hain.. specially jo ya tu bemar hai yea pregnant hain…. Nupur was pretending to be so bad in condition that she cant even talk…

Samrat: are u sure she is pretending

Mayank: samrat chahy kuch hojay…. Nupur khabi mjh se yah nhi khay gi k us ko ghabrhat horahi thi… aur us waqt jab woh janti hai k I will b hell worried abt her here…

Benji: is k matlab yeah hai k us ko waha koi nhi janta ur being like this in bad condiotn they let her talk to u…

Mayank: excalty … aur yeah mera woh number tha jo tum dono aur nupur k pass hai yeah tu gunjan ya mom k pass bhi nhi…. And its unregistered so they cant find out anything about it…

Samrat: she is nupur… man she is nupur…

Mayank: isi baat k daar hai..k woh nupur hai aur us ny apni harktein shoro kerdi hain…. She is on sumthing there

Benji: per yaar mjhy ek baat bato…woh bol kya rahi thi..

Mayank: hum meray ghar chal rahy hain…. Aur sary blue prints…a nd I want the 3d map of the airport … sa lay ker ghar aoo…

Benji: I hope yeah thik hai

Samrat: agar yeah thik nhi bhi hai tu kisi ko batay ga….

Benji: ek insaan hai… we should call her…

Samrat: tu thik kah raha hai.. mein kuch kerta hoo

Mayank: benji…. Kya hua tumdono yaha abhi tak kyun gharay ho

Benji: awein

Mayank: benji yaha cameras asay block ker day… k lagay k woh karab hogay hain

Benji: oki… give few mins…

Mayank: aur zayda sympathize dekhny ki zaroorat nhi hai mjhy per I am fine…. Tu normal hona pasand kerain gay ap

Benji: acha yeah baat hai tu mein aj nhi ker raha mera time khatam hogya

Mayank: mein tujhy nhi khatam ker do…. Abhi bhait aur ker yeah kam…

Benji: yaar ek baat bata… teri office mein ek bhi larki nhi hai…

Samrat: chalo yeah shoro hogaya … tujhy is ko kuch bolna zaroori tha..

Benji: han tu pata nhi is season mein bhi meray liyan koi larki hai k nhi.. ya mein ziandgi bhar camerao k fuse urata raho ga…

Mayank: tu sharafat se kam ker

Benji: us k baat tu mjhy us se milway ga

Despite of wht he is going through he smiled an slaped hi face playfully

Mayank: nhi tera fuse ura do ga.. kam ker…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fiza, wonderful update.👏

u told me before that nupur will be the main key of the story ... n now i got it.😃

brilliant thinking fiza .👏... u r grt 👏... amazing story line ... 😃

nupur kitni asani se apne health ka faida utha kar sab kuch mayank ko bata dia ... yahan tak terrorists k position bhi ... par kisi ko pata hi nhi chala ... this is nupur ... jhansi ki rani nupur kumari ... beauty with brain😊 (sometime without😛) ... lol😆

i loved benji here. he ws so depressed that u dint give him a giirl in frist two, n he even dnt knw that u should giving him gf in this season or not ... lol ... poor soul😆

bt his act was so nice yet he remove every bit of tension. actually he cant remove, but decrease a lil bit of tension. like him.😃

so they r going for blue print ... 15-12=3 yahi logic hai na??😳

waiting for next update.

love ya🤗




Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it...
this update had everything in it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
awesome dear
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part..!!!

Nupur is so inttelligent...!!

Loved it...

awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...i loved this episode...
wait...why do i have a feeeling ki Nupur ka watch ka description is related to how the terrorist's location/positions?? is it??

Gosh...i love Mayur!
Benji is also damn cute...lol harr season mein usko ladki ki padi hai...bechara...pata nahi kab ladki milegi usee..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update fiza!
i so lovd nupur in dis update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was the best part of this update
very much interestng
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nupur was so intelligent
i really loved the way she has given info to mayank

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