Taarey FF.. Is hatred stronger than Love?? (Note pg 80) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...!
i think rey ke mom ki death taani ki waja se hui..!
can't wait to read more plzz update ssoonn..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...that accident...oh god...pata nahi kon hogi vo...i think rey's mom...omg...update soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Rey lol. I hope you update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Loved Tani going bonkers .😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg...dat must hve rey's mom in d car...gid! Rey wil nvr evr 4gve taani 4 dis..shit yaar...plz stry change kar... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 6

Sorry for Late update... I had exams, and i still have 4 left!!! and then before updating this FF i was reading all of yours that i hadn't read so tht's why i'm late 😔 SORRY.
Heres the update:


Taani was walking into the rehearsal hall thinking about what she said to Rey was a little too much...

The whole gang was there and were setting everything up for the dance auditions...

With Rey-
He was in VP sir's office as Professor Shukla had reported him...

VP: (in a very angry tone) Rey!! professor shukla had told me that u had tripped taani!
R: no sir, she just fell...
VP: SHE JUST FELL!! Aise kaise koi bas gir jatta hai??
R: Sir i'm telling the truth!!
VP: Don't lie to me Rey! No one can just fall!!
R: but sir i'm not lying...
VP: Rey i am not so stupid as to listen to you and not Professor Shukla!! You should have atleast that much of respect toward me, as to not lie straight in my face!!
R: AM I TELLING THE TRUTH!! Okay and i don't think i need to give any respect to someone who doesn't even listen to me!
VP: Fine!!! if not this, then ur attitude is just unacceptable!! (Getting bitterness into his voice) So for ur betterment i want u to participate in the college's extra curriculum's, YOU UNDER STAND!!
R: but sir!
VP: No but's!! That's it!! Ur participating in dancing!
R: WHAT!!! But u said any extra curriculum activities then why DANCING!!
VP: woh meine thab kaha tha! aur ab mein yeh kai raha hoon!! The auditions are on right now in the rehearsal hall so GO NOW!!
R: but sir... Dancing!!
VP: Out right Now!!! And if ur name isn't in the audition list then u r suspended !!!

Rehearsal hall-
Many students had auditioned... But not even one was good enough for them... (I forgot to tell but Taani is also a dancer and she is part of the team)
Rey walked into the rehearsal hall leaving everyone shocked!! The started girls gossiping about him... How hot he was, and his attitude and how multi-talented he is!! And the guys just getting jealous... Taani saw Rey walking in and remembered how she treated him and felt bad, so she went up to him... All eyes on them...

T: Hi!! Ahhh... Tum audition??...
R: (was feeling odd but seeing taani, felt comfortable. so decided to talk to her) yea... Actually VP sir ne kaha... Or else suspension.
T: Suspension kyun??
R: tumhe girrane kehliye! (With an irritated look)
T: (closing one eye and biting her tongue) sorry!
R: (laughing at her sweetness) it's okay (smiling back)
T: actually mein kahi paar bhi gir jaatia hoon... Bachpan seh aadat hai! so yea... (Laughing)
R: OKAY (thinking she's weird)... toh ahh... dance auditions?
T: Ha! right! Thik he, com'on then show us what u got!!
R: actually... I don't have anything prepared so, i can't...
T: have u ever danced before??
R: well... I did before but then... I just stopped.
T: arre aise kaise?! Paar koyi baat nahi, you know how to dance right!
R: yea... (Understanding where she i going with these questions)
T: so follow my lead...

But before Rey could object, taani forwarded her hand...
T: well then... Com'on!!
R:... (Gave his hand in hers) but...

The music started in the background and Taani pulled Rey into the centre with her...

They started off with a contemporary dance...

Ek Suraj Nikla Tha Kuch Paya Pighla Tha

Punching both their arms in the air one at a time, to their right and bringing them down to their stomachs and pushing their legs of the ground and falling down on their back...

Ek Aandhi Aayi Thi Jab Dil Se Aah Nikli Thi

swinging their legs up one by one, in the air, in an anti-clockwise direction and getting up in opposite directions.

Dil Se Re Dil Se Re
Dil To Aakhir Dil Hai Na

Putting their hand on their heart and and moving their shoulders left to right...

Meethi Si Mushkil Hai Na
Piya Piya Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya
Piya Piya Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya
Dil Se Re Dil Se Re

Moving towards each other

Bandhan Hai Rishton Mein Katoon Ki Tarein Hai

Taani moves her hands one at a time up to Rey's face continuously and he pushes them away strongly and roughly...

Woh Rishte Dil Dil Dil The Woh Dil The Dil Dil The
Gham Dil Ke Pad Chulbule Pani Ke Yeh Bulbule Hain
Bujhte Hi Bante Rahte Hain ...

After pushing away her left hand he holds onto her waist firmly and lifts her up onto his toes and movings her around the room

Dil Se ...
Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi
Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi
Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi
Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi

And they finish...

All eyes were on them, all were left astonished... Their chemistry, synchronisation, how well Rey danced, and why had taani helped him??

But finally Neha started clapping, then the girls joined in and in no time everyone was clapping... Except Swayam.

Rey and Taani let go of each other... Taani felt very happy and smiled at Rey...
T: Wow ur an amazing dancer!! Phele baar kisne mujhe match up kiya hai!!
R: thnx... (Feeling a bit uncomfortable)
The whole gang came over...
Ne: wow rey dancing good!
Rey stared over at Taani and she wispered in his ears
T: Neha aisehi baat karti hai...
V: my kagu is right!! dude great dancing!!
Ni: arre tu bhool gaye!
Si: kya bhool gaye... Rey is such a good dancer!!
V: (remembering his kagu praising Rey) NAHI!!!!
Ne: What u mean nahi!! Babu not agreeing with kagu!!!
A: hal bilkul nahli!!!
Ri: woh accha dancer hai!!
Sw: nahi
Sh: ha!!!!!
B: abbe!! Bulkul bekar dancer hai!!
Ashi: woh acha dancer types hai!
Sw: Nahi hain!
Sh: woh ache dancer Hai SWAYAM!!

And then started the mahayud... All of them speaking over eachother... Girls saying yes, boys saying no out of jealousy!

Rey completed amazed at their behaviour just stood there looking left to right, Taani was in the middle trying to control the situation. But she was just getting pushed from one side to the other. Then Nil just pushed her and she fell onto Rey, he wrapped his one arm around her shoulder and the other around her waist... In the same position...

T: (in her head) Iss baar Rey ki aakhien(eyes) kuch aur emotion dikha rahi hain...bilkul meri aakoh ki tara jab mein dance karti hoon... meri aakoh mein khushi dhikti hai, aur iss baar Rey ki aakoh mein wohi khushi hai! Mera toh dance seh ek alag connection ha... Paar Rey ka dance ke saath kya connect hai??

Rey Got her to stand, pulling her out of her trance...

R: whats going on??
T:(putting a smile on her face) arre yeh toh hamare har din ki kahaani hai! Yeh log kabhi bhi agree nahi karte! Waise hum ko chalna chaiye, nahi tu hum bhi yahi phaas jayinge. Com'on lets go...

And they left...
R: waise... Meri help ke liye... U know...
T: wat??
R: arre tum ne help ki meri so u know... (Rey had never said sorry or thanks to anyone since 2 years)
T: (getting irritated) arre kya!!!
R: arre u know woh jo khete hain!!
T: U know what ur so irritating!! Jo bolna hai bolo nahi toh main jaa rahi hoon!!
R: ohh so i'm irritating!!
T: yes!!
R: toh tumhe kisne kaha mujhse baat karne ki!! Get lost!!
T: what!!! Ek toh meine tumhare help
Ki!! Aur upar se thank you bolne ki jhaghe!! Tum mujhe get lost bol rahe ho!!
R: toh meine tumse help mangi thi kya!! No!!
T: paar meine toh ki thi!!
R: toh iss mein meri koyi galti nagi hai!!
T: (very angry) Wat the hell!! tum na... tum!! I HATE YOU!!!
R: ha toh mein kunsa tumse pyaar karta hoon! I hate you too!!!

And both walked off in opposite directions... In full on tashan mode.

After lunch-

Rey and taani had the same class next. Rey had already reached there and there was no one else in the room... Taani walked in talking to herself about how rude Rey is, when she just fell on the ground out of nowhere...
T: ooch!!! (Getting up, in an irritated voice) aj ka toh din hi kharab he!! Aur upar seh Rey!!! Uski toh!...
R: meri toh kya? (Smirking and getting her attention)
T: tum yaha!!
R: hmmm... Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhe itna pasand karti ho?...
T: matlab!?
R: matlab ki... (getting up from his chair and going to her) pichle half an hour seh tum mere baare mein soch rahi ho?
Romantically placing Taani's strands behind her ear... he put his mouth next to her left ear...
R: (in the huskiest and most romantic voice possible) am i right??
Rey started blowing air on Taani's hair, making her hair dance in joy...

But then Taani took a step forward, causing Rey to move away from her. She started moving forward, and an astonished Rey moved back with every step of hers. He felt uncomfortable with her sudden behaviour, and it was clearly seeable on his face. His whole face turned red and his fingers started twitching. Taani stared deep into Rey's eyes and looked at him lovingly. She kept moving towards Rey until his back hit the wall... She put her hands on both his sides blocking him from going anywhere, she moved forward until her mouth wasn't up to Rey's left ear...
T: (in a husky voice) mein tumhe bohot pasand karte hoon.

Saying that Taani slowly KISSED Rey's left cheek and put her cheek against his. She placed her hands on Rey's chest and slid then up to his shoulders and then around his neck... hugging him tightly.

Rey just stood there confused, angry, astonished and a bit shaken, all at the same time...
R: ahhh... Ummm... Woh... Taani, i was... I was just... Woh... (Confused as to how to tell her he was joking)

T: tum kaya Rey?? (smirking behind his back)
R: look Taani... mera yeh matlab nahi tha...

Unable to control it any more Taani burst out into laughter still hugging Rey... She was laughing so hysterically, her shoulders moving with her laughter, shaking Rey with them as well.

T: hahahaha (letting go of Rey and holding his shoulders) mein toh bas mazak kar rahi thi!! Hahaha tumhe apna chera dhekna chaiya tha!! Seriously...
And burst into laughter leaning her head on his chest, and Rey unknowingly gently put his hand on Taani's back and started laughing too, a bit embarrassed. 😳

At that moment Swayam and the gang walked in and saw Taani's head on Rey's chest, her whole body shaking and Rey holding Taani and laughing. Swayam's whole face turned Red in Anger and his hands formed a fist. All he could see was Taani shaking as she was sobbing and Rey laughing, not a single voice came out of Taani.

He ran up to Rey and Punched him hard on the face... Thinking that he made Taani cry again.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sorry for the bad song sequence but i just didn't know what to do... Since i couldn't make it romantic!! So i just did that.. Sorry if u didn't understand it... I had clear picture in my head, but it just wasn't working out!!

But plz do like and comment... And don't worry i know story is going slow but i'm getting there just a little more fight!! Hehehe

Plz do like and comment!!

Thnx for reading...
And sorry for late update... But from now on i will not update as regularly, please do understand 😊
❤️

PRECAP:
Taani's eyes started becoming wet seeing Rey's pain and she started sobbing. Noticing this Rey stopped moaning and placed a hand on hers which was on his face.
R: i'm okay... Woh bas thorda sa lag raha tha but now im fine. (Faking a smile)

Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow it was really very-2 sweet update dear

First Taani and Rey's dance on dil se song... I was just imagining the real waala scene but you have explained it very well...

Second Taani and Rey small but sweet fight really sweet... How Rey was trying to say Thanx to Taani but couldn't say ...

Taani and Rey ka class scene... Yaar this Taani is really very naughty ... Haww dara diye bechare Rey ko...

And oh Rabb ji Swayam punched Rey ... Aww poor Rey ...

But Precap sounding gud... Taani and Rey both are feeling each others pain... Brilient job :)

Thanx for the update and for the pm...
Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow looks like taani n rey mein acchi bonding hone waali hai. . .pls update soon. . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rey is forced to audition for dance and Taani helping him was wonderful, aww Taarey first dance together. Girls vs Boys that never gets old lol and yes I agree with the girls Rey is a fab dancer, him trying to say thank u to Taani was hilarious and omg their classroom scene was awesome and romantic even if they were only pretending lol. Swayam so possessive that he punch Rey hmm, so cute Taani hugging Rey. U did an impeccable job love the update and all the best for the rest of your exams.
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally taani and rey ki dosti ki shuruwat hui =)
but swayam...oh no!
but the precap was sweet...cnt wait 4 the next update =)

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