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Hey di nice update..di mob se cmment kar rahi hu so like press nahi ho raha ,sorry..bt i hope u undestand..di u kanow u r the great writter..there r many ma fav writters on if..bt u r heart touching..ma whole family use 2 watch GHSP..ma family specially ma mom is big fan of geet..ma mom also usually visits the forum wid me just 2 read maneet ffs ,specially urs...while reading "yande yad aati ahai"

Oops only half cmt typed.while reading "yaden yad aati hai "part she had tears in her eyes n said this was i miss in GHSP..n she said that "ritzi ko maine nahi dekha bt i must say she is the 1 of the most golden hearted gal.ritzi is awsome writter"..ma mom is big fan of urs n she is addicted of u r ff WS..n luv Vivah too..di plz heartly request u ..dont cut short WS..btw waiting for next part.

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Chapter 26 – Kal Raat Zindagi Se Mulakat ho Gayi

Mohabbat ke shehar me ek dafa hum gye...

dekhi jo pyari surat to hum tham gye...

zindagi me the bahut gum humne dekhe magar...

unki aankho se aisi pee ke humare sab gum gaye...

chadha hum pe unka nasha aisa ki..

dekhte dekhte unke deewane se hum ban gaye...

Phir mohabbat ka asar aisa chhane laga...

har jagah unka aks nazar aane laga

by Hermoso

Suddenly both jumped at the loud jingle from Geet's purse – "Saare Niyam Tod Do…Niyam Pe Chalna Chod Do…Inquillab Zindabad"

Link to the ringtone song for reference - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ygnfqG8tAs

Geet rushed to her phone and picked up the call and whispered though loud enough for astounded and amused Maan to hear "Choti…badmaash, yeh kya ringtone lagaya hai tune apne liye…tu kisi din mar wayegi mujhe"

(kiddo….naughty girl, what ringtone have you put for your call…you will be death of me one day.)

"Didi…where are you….kab se wait kar rahi hoon. You promised me so I completed my math's test also but I have doubts on 4…no no 5 questions and where is my Haagen-Dazs Chocolate Midnight Cookie ice cream."

(Sis, where are you. I have been waiting for so long. You promised me so I completed my math's test also but I have doubts on 4…no no 5 questions and where is my Haagen-Dazs Chocolate Midnight Cookie ice cream.)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9K1D93QLbxE&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9K1D93QLbxE

Kal raat zindagi se mulaaqaat ho gayi
Lab tharthara rahe the magar baat ho gayi
Kal raat zindagi se mulaaqaat ho gayi

(Guys, I am aware that most of you would not have heard this song before. Please give it a try. It is a beautiful song with even more beautiful lyrics. Hear it till at least second stanza and I am sure you will love it.)

Meera was so loud that Geet had to keep phone away from her ear while Maan could clearly make out what she was saying.

Geet looked at Maan with a sorry face and whispered back quickly – "Choti….sorry yaar…I had an urgent meeting in office"

"What…aap abhi tak office se bhi nahi nikle…I am not talking to you. You promised me ice cream today…pata hai mujhe kitna man kar raha hai…upar se how will you go home so late…please be careful…bahar barish bhi ho rahi hai. I called to let you know ki aap aaj mat aao….storm hai bahar"

(What…you are still in office. I am not talking to you. You promised me ice cream today…you know how much I want it…on top of it, how will you go home so late…please be careful…it is raining outside. I called to let you know that don't come today…there is a storm outside.)

"Mein kuch bolun….thanks for your concern and because of this storm I am stuck here in office because all transport is stopped in this area. Tu chinta mat kar…I will take care. And sorry about ice cream. I know tera bahut man hai. Sorry to you and to baby also. Dekh kal Friday hai na…I will get you for whole tub tomorrow…pakka and then stay with you whole weekend and complete your Math's test doubts also. Hmmm…abhi rakhoon bacha…I am with my boss…hmmm"

(Can I say something….thanks for your concern and because of this storm I am stuck here in office because all transport is stopped in this area. But you don't worry…I will take care. And sorry about ice cream. I know you really wanted it. Sorry to you and to baby also. See tomorrow is Friday so…I will get you for whole tub tomorrow…promise and then stay with you whole weekend and complete your Math's test doubts also. Hmmm…now I will keep the phone kiddo…I am with my boss…hmmm)

Maan looked at the delicate girl in front of him. There were so many shades to her. Her smiling face as she played with a stray curl of her hair was attracting him as she talked with her sister. His gaze softened and smoldered like hot molten wax as he again drowned into his own emotions and yearnings. He so wanted to just walk up to her and tangle his own finger into hers. He chuckled inwardly imagining her shocked face and then the way her eyes will lower as he will take her hand to his own hair for playing with his locks. He sighed just imagining the feel of her fingers in his hair and the pink hue on her cheeks. Will she bite her lips and will he get to taste the softness of those pink cheeks and red lips.

Ek husn saamane tha qayaamat ke roop mein
Ek khwaab jalvaagar tha haqeeqat ke roop mein

Chehara vahi gulaab ki rangat liye hue
Nazarein vahi payaam-e-mohabbat liye hue

Zulfen vahi ki jaise dhundhalaka ho shaam ka
Aankhen vahi jin aankhon pe dhokha ho jaam ka

Kuch der ko tasallee-e-jazbaat ho gayi

Lab tharthara rahe the magar baat ho gayi
Kal raat zindagi se mulaaqaat ho gayi

Maan groaned as he fought for the control on his emotions. Weather outside and being alone with her in one room or rather whole office was not helping and he badly needed to focus on something else before he did something stupid. Just as he thought that, he heard Geet wrapping the call.

"Ok Di…take care…love you."

"Love ya too darling."

Maan smiled to lighten his own mood - "Inquillab Zindabad?"

"Nahi Sir, woh meri choti sister hai. She is very naughty…usi ne yeh sab."

(No Sir, just that she is my younger sister, She is very naughty…she only did it.)

"So your sister stays with you? I thought you lived alone with Pinky."

"Woh sir…woh…actually she lives in the hostel…woh Krishna hostel. She is not my sister by birth but….now she is my family now."

"Oh…ok." He then added gently – "Rishte toh dil se hote hain Geet…I am sure you both are lucky to have family in the same city."

Geet looked at Maan will little mist in her eyes. She was always amazed at the sensitivity and understanding of this man. "Inhein dekh kar kaun keh sakta hai ki yeh hum se itni aage hain. He is still attached to his roots."

(Who will say after knowing him that he is so ahead of us. He is still attached to his roots.)

"Yes Sir…and I hope one day when circumstances are little better, we can stay together."

"I am sure you will…waise tumhari choti was really excited for her ice cream."

Geet smiled and replied spontaneously "Haan…woh especially baby ki wajah se."

"Baby? She also stays in hostel"

"Nahi…mera matlab…."

Geet was at loss of words and Maan judged that suddenly she was very uncomfortable from her stiff posture.

"Koi baat nahi Geet….my work is also finished. If you want, you can go to your cabin and rest for a while. I will stay here."

Geet smiled and felt bad for being a little rude to him– "Sorry sir. Actually baby is in her tummy. She is expecting. And please can I stay here…woh mujhe akele pure floor pe thoda ajeeb lagega."

"Hmmm…"

Maan removed his tie and waistcoat and made himself comfortable on the chair. He looked at Geet who seemed a little cold. He offered her his waistcoat.

"It's ok sir"

"Pehn lo Geet…I usually don't feel cold and you are already getting goose bumps. Just drape over your arms if nothing else. You will feel better."

Geet nodded and took the waistcoat tentatively. Even after full day, faint smell of his cologne and his masculinity touched her as she draped herself in his still warm coat. It was like as he almost cocooned her in his arms.

Maan felt at peace seeing her draped in his waistcoat.

"Tumhein kisis bhi pareshaani mein dekh kar dil pareshaan ho jaata hai Geet. Waise ab yeh coat mere liye bahut special ban gaya hai. Thodi si jalan bhi hai aur sukoon bhi ki mein na sahi, is ne toh tumhein gher liya hai."

(My heart gets troubled seeing you in any trouble. Moreover this coat is now very special to me. I am little jealous of it but at the same time I am at peace knowing if not me at least it has wrapped you in it's embrace.)

Few moments later

"Geet?"

"Ji Sir"

"You just now said that your sister – Choti"

"Meera sir…uska naam"

"Yes Meera…she is pregnant. You yourself are 19 years old and she is even younger than you…math's test…you guys were talking something about it. Is she studying in this state?"

Geet looked at Maan sharply and he fumbled – "Nahi bas mein soch raha tha...aise hi"

(No I was just thinking…just like that)

"Sir, she is 15 yrs old and yes she is preparing for her 10^th board exams."

Maan almost jumped out of his chair in surprise "What!!!! 15yrs…lekin phir ye…I mean"

"She was forced sir"

Maan did not say anything but his thoughts went all over the place at her words. A 15 yr old girl, pregnant, studying and with no support other than hostel and Geet.

After sometime he could not control himself and spoke gently – "You are very kind Geet to make and then fulfill your relationship with someone who is so vulnerable and weak. Nahi toh is duniya mein log bas kamzor ko maarna aur dabana jaante hain."

(You are very kind Geet to make and then fulfill your relationship with someone who is so vulnerable and weak. Otherwise this world only knows to torture and bring down the weak.)

Geet looked up at Maan's profile at his words. There was hint of hidden pain there somewhere. "Sir…mujhse pehle she is kind to accept me as her Di. Rishte akle nahi balki do logon ke beech hote hain."

(Sir, before me she is kind to accept me as her Di. Relationship can never be alone and is between two people.)

"Hmmm…well said. It is good that she is trying to continue her study."

Dekha use to daaman-e-ruksaar nam bhi tha
Vallaah uske dil ko kuch ehasaas-e-gam bhi tha

They usaki hasaraton ke khazaane lute hue
Lab par tadap rahe the fasaane ghute hue

Kaante chubhe hue they sisakati umang mein
Doobi hui thi phir bhi bafaaon ke rang mein

Dam bhar ko khatm gardish-e-haalaat ho gayi

Lab tharthara rahe the magar baat ho gayi
Kal raat zindagi se mulaaqaat ho gayi

Suddenly he got up and looked at time. It was 9:30 PM. He called up security to ask if water had receded but answer was in negative. He also inquired if there was any shop open nearby and requested him to arrange for some food from anywhere. Then he thought of something and called a number.

"Mrs. Dixit…this is Maan here"

Geet looked with wide eyes at Maan but he just assured her with his hand gesture.

"It is raining quite heavily here but how is it in your locality there."

Mrs. Dixit was very surprised will be a mild statement. Maan hardly ever got involved leaving hostel proceeding to Savitri Devi and on top of that his calm voice just confused her further.

"No, it is ok here…just drizzling."

"Oh ok…well Mrs. Dixit, I was thinking that there is a different fun in eating ice cream in this weather. So can you get Haagen-Dazs Chocolate Midnight Cookie ice cream from the nearby convenience store for desert for all girls? Actually I closed a very good deal today and just wanted to share my blessings. So please."

…

"Thanks Mrs. Dixit."

Maan turned to find a flustered Geet standing while mercilessly murdering her duppatta. He so wanted to just take that piece of cloth from her fingers and take her hands into his.

"Sir…woh aap…aap...Dixit madam ko jaante hai aur yeh ice cream…I mean…Mujhe nahi pata tha…woh aap"

(Sir…you…hmmm….you…know Dixit Madam and this ice cream….I mean…I didn't know that…that you.)

Maan smiled and asked her to calm down and sit – "Relax Geet. I just wanted to give a very small smile to one girl who has maybe seen more pain in this life than is her fair share. Nothing more. Itna toh mein kar hi sakta hoon. And as for knowing Mrs. Dixit…"Krishna"…"Krishna" meri mom ka naam hai. Savitri Devi is my grandma."

"Matlab…aap"

Geet lowered her eyes as realization struck her – "Aap us hostel ke owner hain. I can never thank you enough sir for…"

"Please Geet…don't start again…please don't thank me. This hostel was started by mom. Why…when….How, I will tell you some other day but I can tell you this that you don't need to thank me for sure.

Waise Geet…if you don't mind can I ask you something. If you don't want to answer then don't.

Have you ever thought of your own studies? You have very good marks in 12^th so don't you want to complete graduation?"

Geet smiled slightly as if making fun of herself "Chahne se kya hota hai sir…if I study then how will I be independent. How will I make Meera independent?"

(Nothing happens by just wanting sir…. if I study then how will I be independent. How will I make Meera independent?)

"Why, you can join some part time course also."

"It is not only about time sir…I mean everything has a price sir."

"Still, maybe if you will look hard enough you will find something which suits you. Not today but I am sure sometime in future, you will want to grow in your career or even maybe do something which you really want to do. Kuch sapne toh tumne bhi dekhe honge."

"Sapne….woh toh bachpan ke sapne the sir. Ab bas…ek reality hai."

(Dreams…they were dreams of a child sir. Now, there is just a reality.)

"Don't be so discouraged Geet. Acha yeh batao ki agar koi tumse puche ki if there was no time and money limitation, then what will you see yourself doing in 5 year time toh tumhaara jawaab kya hoga."

(Don't be so discouraged Geet. Ok tell me, that is someone asks you that if there was no time and money limitation, then what will you see yourself doing in 5 year time then what will be your answer?)

"There is no meaning to all this sir."

"See, we have lot of empty time at our hand…just humor me. Some childhood dream, construction or something entirely different…there must be something which you would really want to do."

"Jab mein choti thi toh bas padhna chahti thi…seekhne ke liye. Doctor, teacher….aisa koi khaas aim nahi tha zindagi ka. Lekin zindagi ko itne kareeb se dekhne ke baad…I…I know it is impossible. But I am very impressed by Daadima…I mean Madam.."

(When I was younger, I just wanted to study….just to learn. Doctor, teacher…there was no specific aim in life. But after seeing this world so closely…I…I know it is impossible. But I am very impressed by Daadima….I mean Madam…)

"Geet she is still your Daadima…"

Geet smiled "Haan Daadima and Dixit Madam. Mera matlab, agar mere bas mein ho toh I will like to work in a hostel or a school. I know ki shayad usmein paise na milein par…I will love to do something like that.

Ho sakta hai ki koi soche ki it would be depressing to be always surrounded by misery. Par sach yahi hai ki agar mera haath thamne waala koi nahi hota toh aaj mein kahan hoti. Agar ek zindagi bhi meri wajah se sawar jaaye, toh it is worth all the pain in this life.

I will like to work with people in need and help them somehow. Par mujhe nahi pata yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Na toh mere paas itne paise hain ki main kuch kar paoon aur na hi koi aur zariya."

(Yes, Daadima and Dixit Madam. I mean, if it is in my hand then I will like to work in a hostel or a school. I know that maybe I will not get a lot of money but…I will love to do something like that.

Someone may think that it would be depressing to be always surrounded by misery. But the truth is that I would not have been here if there was no one to hold my hand in the time of the need. If even one life blooms because of me, it is worth all the pain in this life.

I will like to work with people in need and help them somehow. But I don't know how this is possible. Neither do I have money to do anything nor any other resource.)

Note – Above part is inspired by Balika Vadhu. I don't know how many of you follow that serial but I used to see it off and on. For me one of the best sequence was when Anandi's father-in-law asks her to study to become a doctor and become a better doctor than her husband who has left her. But she asked her father-in-law that why should she choose only to become a doctor. She does not want to take revenge or prove anything to her estranged husband. She always wanted to do something for the society and uplift of her village and hence want to pursue that.

I strongly believe in this notion of doing something for your society. Maybe not full time but being associated with charity orgs to fulfill some duty we have towards the society we live in.

Maan was very proud and in awe hearing her response.

"You have a heart and intent Geet….baaki sab haasil ho jaata hai….mil jaata hai par dil aur sahi arzoo itni aasani se nahi milti."

(You have a heart and intent Geet….everything else can be arranged….but true heart and desire can not be found so easily.)

E meri rooh-e-ishq meri jaan-e-shaayari
Dil maanta nahi ki tu mujhse bichhad gayi

Maayoosiyaan hain phir bhi mere dil ko aas hai
Mahasoos ho raha hai ke tu mere paas hai

Samajhaaoon kis tarah se dil-e-beqaraar ko
Vaapas kahaan se laaoon main guzari bahaar ko

Majaboor dil ke saath badi ghaat ho gayi

Lab tharthara rahe the magar baat ho gayi
Kal raat zindagi se mulaaqaat ho gayi

Geet was going to say something when conference room phone buzzed. It was security telling Maan that water had receded and cars were moving around now.

Maan insisted on dropping Geet at home and after that, he walked to outhouse lost in her words and thoughts.

Precap - Aye Zindagi Gale laga le

Superb Update

Maan trying to control his feelings seeing all the antics Geet was doing while talking on phone withd Meera


Maan was too shocked to know that Meera is just 15 years old


Loved the way how you showed the feelings and emotions through words, One can get clear cut visual pictures of what is happening in a conference room n how Maaneet are interacting with each other

this line was superb as it depicting Maan state of mind and feeling for Geet at that point of time -

"Tumhein kisis bhi pareshaani mein dekh kar dil pareshaan ho jaata hai Geet. Waise ab yeh coat mere liye bahut special ban gaya hai. Thodi si jalan bhi hai aur sukoon bhi ki mein na sahi, is ne toh tumhein gher liya hai."