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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24




But Maan nahi aaya...
Maaneet meeting fir latak gai...
Lagta hei Office me hi Takkar hogi...
Waiting...



are are monkeys dont get upset ur part is on the way
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
but maaneet ki meeting jaldi do
waiting
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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hey guys i am back with part 34
thanks all for your support









PART 34

WILL ADD IMAGES AND MUSIC LATER ITS NOT SHOWING NOW
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Their engagement was fixed after fifteen days.. everything was like in a jet speed offcourse for khurana's it was the first wedding of the new generation , starting of a new invitation for someone's life.. a new beginning .. and same was with handa's first wedding of their daughter'

Since the day panditji had told them the SHUBH MUHURAT was after exactly thirty days .. since that day both the families were just eager to do all the things with great speed whether it was the arrangement of banquet halls or caterers jewellery shopping everything was on a high speed' here naina was doing all the things with much accuracy she wanted everything to be best and perfect for arohi' after all she was her elder daughter in law' she was much surprised and now happy with her son's choice arohi was was a nice girl.. she has actually gelled with them that she was actually having a regret that once she was having the doubt on arjun's coice but after meeting arohi and knowing her she couldn't be more happy'.

Naina saw the shagun that she herself had prepared for arohi .. but the shagun chunri was missing' she couldn't thought right' she was hyper' it was important for the engagement that was tomorrow'

Naina was searching the chunri somewhere she was not feeling well .. her heartbeats were rising ..she was getting sweaty but ignored the fact ..she drank a glass of water ..that's when maan found her..he was too busy in arrangements with managing the office and a new project afterall who can keep a workolic away from his work'

Maan immediately came close to naina .. he was worried seeing his mother looking ill'

Maan: mom are you allright'.

He hold her carefully and made her sit on the bed'.

Naina smiled seeing her son so worried she assured him telling him that she was fine'.

Naina: maan main theek hun' but shagun ki chunri mil nahi rahi hai..aur kal sagaai hai..tu ruk main dekhti hun kahan hun'

She was about to get up but maan didn't let her' he was hell worried seeing his mother all sweating..he immediately made her lie on the bed' and instructed her not to worry he will do all the things'

Maan: mom..aap kahan ja rahi hain' yahan par raho' wait lie down.. I will call a doctor right now'. Mom are you fine'

He didn't even listen what naina was saying'. Naina was seeing her stubborn son'

Naina: maan main theek hun..tu ye kya kar raha hai..

Maan got partially annoyed seeing his mom acting like nothing happened'. He got in a slight anger'.

Maan: mom have you seen yourself ' look how much you are sweating' and you are saying me not to panic'.

Naina couldn't help but chuckle'. She was now seeing her stubborn son who was not ready to listen anything'.

Naina: maan listen to me .. dekho kitni taiyariyaan karni hain' wo bas kaam ki wajah se aise ho gaya hai..son I am fine'

Maan got more angry listening to his mom'

He immediately called the servents'. And shouted on their negligence'.

Maan: why mom is doing all the work what are you people hired for'even daadima , ajun and raj came after listening to maan's roaring'.

Arjun came near him' and asked him about the matter and he told the whole matter to his brother..that was it ..arjun was also hell concerned for his mother'

Arjun: mom aapko kisne kaha tha to work'. I will do all the things just say me what you want and dare you step out of here'

Even maan supported him'

Maan: mom I will do everything '.

For maan and arjun their mother is most important..even daadima showed some concerned anger towards her daughter in law'

Daadima: naina arjun aur maan sahi keh rahe hain' chahiye aaram kariye hum bathenge aapke paas ..aakhir you need someone to keep an eye'.

Maan didn't let arjun to help him..maan arranged everything from guests to the gifts' the decoration.. single handedly he did everything..

Arjun tried to help him' but he refused saying .." bhai don't worry I will take al with interest ' and left to look at the arrangements leaving a shocked and extremely happy arjun'.

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It was the day for the engagement..KM was decorated with guests coming' arjun was all ready his light blue sherwani .a sligt nervousness was there on his face' maan came to arjun's room'

Maan: so all set bhai..afterall now you are going to tie her in a lifetime commitment ' waise maan na padhega meri bhabhi ji ka jaadu hai that you look extremely happy.. ' oh my god look arjun khurana is blushing , bhai seriously whats that red hue to you face you are blushing ..

Arjun couldn't help but to look at his brother'

Arjun: maan!!!!

He for a second couldn't help his embarassement' maan chuckled and laughed out loud'.and hugged his brother'

Maan: I am so happy for you bhai' chalo let me get ready now aakhir I have to meet my bhabhi too that too after almost two and a half years'.

Here in handa mansion'.

Geet was making arohi ready who was red like beetroot with their teasings'. Disha and divya were there making her blush with tehir teasings'.

Disha: omg I cant belive geet that our aru is getting married and that too with Mr HOTTY'

Geet was just giggling seeing arohi fuming when disha addressed her arjun as hotty ..well well ow dare she .. only his better half arohi has that right'.

Geet: look disha di is getting red with your teasing'

Arohi: don't laugh geetu next turn is yours'.

Geet frwoned a little and hugged rano from back who had just entered to see what the girls were doing'.

Geet just like a child whined'

Geet: main apni mumma ko chodka kahi nahi jaungi'. Dekh lena aru'.

Rano smiled seeing her grown up child'

Rano: geetu wo baad me dekhenge abhi you girls get ready arjun must be arriving anytime now'.

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The khurana's entered the handa mansion which was actually decorated with white orchids and pink and blue silky soft curtains' the decoration was actually so classy and yet traditional..there was a rangoli at the entrance just to welcome the groom..their were lighted candles in the centre '

Handa's welcome khurana's '

Everyone was excited..raj introduced maan to mohindar and rano and daarji' well who needs an introductio maan singh khurana his name is enough to know him with his ureent establishment and achievements..he too greeted warmly the inlaws of his brother' tej welcomed his brother in law' and maan who knew him through a business deal so no need for further introduction'.

Dhruv joined them' both of them were angry on their best friend'. Maan and arjun gave him an angry glare here poor dhruv made a cute puppy face and apologised for being late' he was in new zealand and just had arrived'..

Maan: so you got time for us'

Arjun: kya zaroorat thi abhi aane ki direct shaadi me aata'.

Dhruv: dekho tum dono abb mujhe bhi sun lo.. pata hai kitni mushkil se tickets arrange I hain' and direct airport se aaya hun' he further didn't siad anything'when maan hugged him afterall he too was meeting him after three years'. And arjun too did the same'.

Dhruv congratulated arjun'

Dhruv: toh chalo shahab zade aa humare nahi rahe kyun maan ..apni biwi ke piche piche milenge ye abb'

Arjun gave him a glare where maan seconds dhruv'

Maan: ye toh sahi kaha yar'.

Dhruv: waise arjun don't you have any saalis.. arohi bhabhi ki friends toh ongi na I knew she had who kahan hain'

Arjun: aate hi shuru ho gaya ye'.

Meanwhile arohi arrived with geet ..arohi was dressed in a pink and pale blue combination lehenga'her curls set'a red hue that was adorning her' while her dear sister in a white and golden color combination lehenga .. her long god diamond earings..the baby pink supple lips which immediately curved into the smile seeing her jeeju'but she didn't even looked at something standing beside him..here maan smiled seeing his bhabhi descending the stairs looking absolutely stunning to compliment his brother' and he didn't even look at anyone except his SIL'

Maan whispered arjun's ear and geet in arohi..

Maan: hmm maan gaya bhai aapki choice ko'

Geet: aru palke utha ke dekho look jeeju is looking so handsome'.

The bride and groom were in the centre' of the stage' geet's mother did the teeka to arjun .. he touched her feet..she gifted him some gifts'.

Then naina did same for arohi'she made arohi wear the red chunri and put the small red teeka on her forehead arohi smiled seeing her mother in law..she gave her the shgaun that she herself made..the jewellery according to arohi's taste with each necklace with a maang teek a since arohi like wearing maang tika a lot' both of them exchanged rings'. And took the blessing of elders'.


The pandit ji wrote the lagan' both the family members were sitting'

( lagan is an official invitation that Is written on the day of sagaai of engagement ' and it is sent to groom's place by the the bride's alond with marriage invitation and sweets and gifts'it is can be 15 , 7 or 3 days ..here I am describing fifteen days')

( I am describing all the rituals that happens in my family'. Hope I wont bore you'.)

The lagan is written for fifteen days' the haldi , mehendi day was fixed that means the wedding will take place after fifteen days'. And daily till the fifteenth day from the day itself in both the families relatives will arrive and daily there will be sangeet special songs that is called banna banni '

While this was going on..

someone was restless.. searching for something ..she was worried for her precious earing..it was so precious for her..geet was worried for her mother's jewellery that she loved the most that her ma had left for her' but somewhere during the party she lost one pair'.

Here he was going to see where his daadima was..when he found something sparking under his feet ' and bent to pick up the thing '.



She was looking around ..dressed in a white and golden lehenga , the wavy and slightly curly hair teasing her cheeks ' consciously her hand on one of the ear'. It was like she was searching something' that's what he saw someone from the silky soft white curtains that were baring his view'.

The heavy duppata very carefully pinned to her shoulder covering her sleek neck'


He bend slightly and looked at the metal piece' it was glowing like searching for its right ful owner.. he was lost in the beautiful jewel piece it was a traditional design that he actually didn't saw any of the girls today would like to wear.. but the small diamonds sparking in it were saying that it actually to someone who is no less than a diamond itself'.

. she looked at the something sparking ' and knew that it was her.. uska jhumka.. the earing that was actually adorning her and enhanching the beauty was now in the hands of someone'.

Geet for a second frowned'..

Geet: dekha babaji wo mera jhumka hai'. Ruko aap main abhi leti hun use' she was so annoyed she didn't like anything of her mother to share or touch by anyone and here he was looking at her earing..she couldn't see his face he was standing titled his face to her earing'

There was a slight burred vision due to the shiny and silky curtain'

She quickly tried to grab the jewel piece when she felt that she couldn't the curtain made her to loose her balance and was about to touch the cold and hard ground'her eyes were shut with fear that was visible on her face'..

He actually turned around..

She quickly came to his side so quickly only to loose her balance to land safe and secure in someone's arm'.

MAAHI VE ''' MAAHI MAAHI VE''.

Her eyes closed and lips quivering'

His lips purred into a slight smile looking at the earing he was holding and she was wearing'

Maan's heart fluttered at once seeing a pure and known beauty with hr same nervousness' but first time he saw her face'. With much clarity..she was in his arms.. he couldn't help to see in those eyes..which were now open and looking at him constantly gaping..her doe shaped eyes were wide open..for a second his mind said " ARABIAN GIRL"


But the next moment he heard a soft voice'..

Geet was gapint at him..he was the same person she knew for just some seconds and minutes..she has recognised him but he has changed,,he is looking more handsome and strong with his pysche and the slight stubble making him looking manly'.

A blush crept on her cheeks ..she didn't don't until her super smart mind screamed to make him let her go'. She is fine' she in a meek voice '

Geet: thank you'

His mind which was till now diverted .. let her go of his arms'. And made her stand straight'. He was still holding the earing'

Geet noticed it..and quickly grabbed it from his hand'.

Geet so softy..

Geet: ye mera hai'.


Saying so she left' she was waling too fast..her heartbeats were extremely fast like she has run a marathon'while maan couldn't get his senses back..

It was like

" pehli nazar me dil kho baite '. Zindagi tujhko bana kar zindagi ko kho baithe.."

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UPDATED PART 34

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
nice part
at last they met
maan mesmerized by geet


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshithaaa

nice part

at last they met
maan mesmerized by geet




yup
ty for ur comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was a beautiful update di
Khurana's r so eager to make arohi their bahu
n everything is going in jet speed
of course this is such a good alliance
no one wants to make any mistake na
naina mom is sad that she doubted arjun's choice before
but now she just can't wait for arohi to come to their home
she just wants everything perfect for her DIL
n in the process is over exerting herself
maan iss time pe bhi kaam kaam aur sirf kaam hi kar raha hai
aur woh bhi office ka na ki shaadi ka
sach mein isse bada workaholic kaun hosakta hai
how can maan see his mom so ill
he immediately went into all worrying mode
oops mom ne maan ko angry kardiya
waise toh koi bhi hojaega
she should't be taking so much tension
bechare servants unpe bhi chiladiya
ab maan kaafi nahi tha ki puri family mom pe gussa karne lag gayi
love the bonding between maan arjun and mom
ab toh saari tayariyaan Mr Maan Khurana kar rahe hain
he didn't even let arjun help him
arjun is blushing
n how can maan not tease him
after all aisa nazara roz roz nahi dikhta na
maan is so happy for his brother
in handa mansion also the scene is no different
geet is so childish n naive 😆
engagement ceremony going to start
n raj dad introduced everyone to maan
well no one needs an intro to Mr Maan Khurana
hez made an identity for himself in the business world
maan n arjun are so angry at dhruv
dhruv also started teasing arjun
geet can't take her eyes off arjun
while maan can't take his eyes off arohi
geet lost her earring n maan found it
first mahi moment hayye it was so dreamy
update soon di
waiting eagerly
muahhh
luvvv yaaa
Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan and arjun was worried for their mother health seeing she is doing all work herself n not taking care

Maan doing all the arrangement n telling arjun tht he will take it with interest

Arjun n aroohi get engaged

Maaneet meet n maan got lost in her

Geet recognised Maan tht he was the same person who had save her
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-

Maan and arjun was worried for their mother health seeing she is doing all work herself n not taking care

Maan doing all the arrangement n telling arjun tht he will take it with interest

Arjun n aroohi get engaged

Maaneet meet n maan got lost in her

Geet recognised Maan tht he was the same person who had save her



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