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Feelings of Kumud and Saras- Poetry!

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Anu_4_U

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Another attempt of mine to put the feelings of the main leads in the show in the form of a poem -

Kumud's feelings -

I dreamt of you - day and night...

Your eyes were pure and bright...

Little did I realise that dreams disappear...

After waking and leave us in fear...

Of that relationship that was to be...

Me for you and you for me...

I won't give up - I am strong...

I will wait for you - however long...

Saras's feelings -

I am not ready to take the plunge...

It is not about you - but me...

I cannot share the reasons now...

For not many can see what I see...

It is better that we stay as we are...

And spare ourselves of this burden...

For you will surely find the right partner...

Destined by the Lords in Heaven...

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Anu_4_U

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -SmokySapphira-
Beautiful poem dear.

Thank you so much...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ok...r u an "OFFICIAL POET"??

den pls tell me, if i ever want poems i wil contact u...😆

dis ws so...beautiful!!

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Anu_4_U

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tishana
Ok...r u an "OFFICIAL POET"??

den pls tell me, if i ever want poems i wil contact u...😆

dis ws so...beautiful!!

Hey...thanks - with all your encouragement maybe I will turn into one officially!😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anu_4_U

Hey...thanks - with all your encouragement maybe I will turn into one officially!😳

u r anu right?

yeah so, i wil contact u as i hv seen u cn write poems on any theme...👏

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautiful poems . . .
amazing . . .!! u r not an "official poet"????? yakeen nehi ho raha . . .😕

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Mithila

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautiful deary...

So pure and true, apt to the situations...😳

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Beautiful poem!
There is such a lovely rhythm in the way you have written.

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Anu_4_U

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank you all my dear friends...😊

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Saniya Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow!!! This is amazing! I love the words u have used to show Saras and Kumud's feelings! Keep writing more as I'm now a big fan of you😆

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