SwaRon V-Day Sp.OS- Since the Day I saw YOU

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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

its out of this world...can't explain ...

GOOD JOB

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

amazing n lovely os...

loved it...

thanks for pm...

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome os & beautifully written👏

Those lines reminds me Phela nasha phela khumar dance of Swaron(TanHa)

So it was love at first sight for both of them😊

Those lines which promised Sharon that he will always love her ever & for ever were very beautiful

Swayam promised Sharon that he will make her fall in love with him & proved that he is the man of his word in last

And in the last on the valentine day Swayam & Sharon become Swaron finally and officially😆

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huma

@d3ians

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

WOW!!!!!!! just luved it!!!!! it was jus tooo gUd!!!!! awesome!!!!! thnxx!!! PERFECT!!

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome update dear...Swaron fell for each other at first sight...awwiee and the invitation in the newspaper was amazing...Swayam Promised her that he will make her fall in love with her...this is is so our loverboy...Loved their 3 journey of love...Beautifully penned down update..loved it ❤️

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

M too late??? you knw the reason...so m forgiven?

Pehle toh Thankk You so much for dedicating it to me🤗

coming to the OS...

You have penned it Beautifully manu😳 its so different from what i had thought...and my idea was till the way of proposal...sab credit na do mujhe pagal...

You have used the lines really well...meri jaan chali gayi thi woh lines likhte likhte😆

Thank you once again for writing it and So wonderfully😳

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautiful and romantic - with a lot of the old world charm to it - it was a pleasure reading this OS Mannu...esp the sketch and that poetry in motion...(i realize from teh comment above that those lines were Rosh's contribution) - sorry for delayed comments

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

WOW!!! it was beautifully penned down!!!

Swayam fell in love with Sharon the day he saw her...

Those lines, proposing in news paper... cute an romantic!!!

Loved it mansie!!!

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Rabina

@raveena2807

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

This is super beautiful, Manasie. The concept, the entire story and especially those lines you have used to depict each day of a valentine week, all are beautiful.

Edited by raveena2807 - 12 years ago

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