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Posted: 12 years ago

not today Di...
hopefully...
tomorrow..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shaffuuu Meri jaan🤗
Just read both the parts...
The past part was sooo romantic...Pehla nashaa
But you stopped at such crucial point...kiss to complete kar deti 😉
And last part was amazing...
So happy to see Mayank-Shriya bonding...👏
Finally mayu is getting his daughter back
But yeh kya abhi tak you have not fulfilled your promise 😡...i Want to hear shriya calling mayu that 😉

Awesome updates...👍🏼
Waiting to see how Mayur complete Shriya Mission...
Do update soon
Thanksss for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Shaffuuu Meri jaan🤗


Pinku..meri..Jaan...

Just read both the parts...


Finally you read it...
That's Good...
The past part was sooo romantic...Pehla nashaa


Haaye...Thank You...
But you stopped at such crucial point...kiss to complete kar deti 😉

Yaar...kuch to next update k liye bacha k rakhna tha...

And last part was amazing...
So happy to see Mayank-Shriya bonding...👏
Finally mayu is getting his daughter back
But yeh kya abhi tak you have not fulfilled your promise 😡...i Want to hear shriya calling mayu that 😉


Ho jayega...
Don't worry..they will soon come close...

Awesome updates...👍🏼
Waiting to see how Mayur complete Shriya Mission...
Do update soon
Thanksss for the PM 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Here Is mY next..Part

@replied to all...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 29 Page 31

Love Never Looses


Part 30

Past

He pulled her on her feet'.still his arms were resting on her waist while her hands had enclosed around his neck'.Both were'deeply looking into each other eyes'.conveying their feelings through it'.

After a long time..they broke their eye-lock..session..realises..that they are standing too..close to each other'..slowly they get parted'when Mayank'...softly'asked her,"Nupur...Tum thik ho na...'"

Nupur:Huh'...ham.mm'...Mein'controlling her breath..mein thik hoon'...

Mayank.. crossed her'and was walking towards'towards his chair'when he turned back to look her standing at the same position'facing him back'he took'small'steps..not making sound..and walked towards her again'.

Nupur..was expecting him to say something'but she just walked passed away'without even complimenting her..she was expecting he would notice'her dress'but nothing sort of happen'her was went dull..and curve of her lips..formed in a downward direction'she was thinking'.about this only'when she felt a hot breath on her shoulder'

Mayank'reached upto her ear and softly spoke:Vese'.

She got surprised a bit at his sudden'whisper'near her ear..she got jolted a it'.and slightly turned her face towards him''he didn't changed his postion and huskily spoke in her ear,"Tum white mein bahut achi lag rahi ho'"

All she could replied was simple "thanks"..as the redness of her cheek had already'given him the indication'that..she actually liked his compliment'and is..on full shyness'

She turned towads him..taking a deep breath as he was still standing very close to her'and without meeting gaze'else..she knew..she would surely loose herself..in it'she said,"You too..looking'nice'tum per bhi red..bahut acha lag raha hain.."

Mayank'giving his usual..smile..:Thanks for the compliment..vese tumhe pata hain'"

Nupur..looking to him:"Kya'"

Mayank..looking back into her eyes:White mera..favourite colour hain'.

Nupur..pretending:Acha'mujhe to nahi pata tha'

Mayank:Kya baat kar rahi ho'kitni baar to tumhe bataya'.

Nupur:Bataya hoga'mujhe kya karna'ye jaan'ke..

Mayank..sensing..that she is hiding something:Pakka'..kahi tum'getting near to her..and she step back..he leaned to her and said:I know..you want to impress me'.don't pretend Nupur'

Nupur'her face was as if she caught red-handed..covering her self she said:Who..me'.vo bhi tumhe'Nahi to'..

Mayank ..walking towards his chair:Ab chupane..se koi faydaa..nahi hain'Nupur..I knew it'

Nupur:Getting seated..to the chair opposite ti him:Mayank..aisa kuch nahi..hain..aur baat ko divert mat karo..aur batao tumne mujhe yahan kyu bulaya..koi kaam tha'

Mayank..muttering under his breath'topic divert mein nahi tum kar rahi ho'Nupur'said her:Haan..kaam to tha..ye zaaa..budget file discuss karni hain tumhare saath'aur ek aur baat..

Nupur:Haan..bolo'

Mayank:Tum Indian dress mein bhi bahut achi lagti hoo'.

All she could was smiled and getting bet root red under his intense gaze'Soon..they start working..on their files'but..actually..they had hardly..had any concentration on their work'..sometimes'they glanced at each other'..or sometimes..Mayank get's lost in her angelic beauty..or sometimes'Nupur fall'on his..cute dimples'which form..when he gave his small..smile'

The window pane of Mayank's cabin was open and slight breeze was flowing'freshing his cabin'.but the main..aim of it's coming again..again..specially..towards Nupur..to make her fringe of Hair to fall down on her face..and compelling her to..tied them..and it does..again..and she tied it again..

Where Nupur was getting irritated due this..as because of this she couldn't able to where she don't know..her this act..was distracting some else'concentration from work also'each time..she does so..Mayank ..lost himself'in her'she looks..so mesmerizing'the wasy..her hair..fringes.touches her cheek'.he wish instead of it..that could be in finger's'.he just forget's everything around'.her'

This was the limit for Nupur'.she took the clutcher from her bag and was tieing her hair when Mayank abrupted suddenly,"Rehne do'" looking lost in her'

Nupur:Kya'.

Mayank'still lost in her:Tumhare baal'

Nupur:Mayank'mein bahut irritate ho rahi hoon'.

Mayank:Khule baal tum per bahut ache lagte hain'.rehne do..bahut beautifull lag rahi hoo'a memsmerzing beauty'

Though Mayank was himself of unkown what he was saying'but whatever he was pouring out'was coming straight from his heart..it actually'.flutter's Nupur..heart'she turned into a crimson..red'and a shy smile appears on her face'she liked..no not liked'infact she loved the way Mayank complimented'her'it feels so special..to her..

She gave a shy smile to him and replied "Thanks"'..

Then again they resume to their work'Somewhere on working'Nupur Need a marker..which on his penstand'and that same Mayank..too need it'..Both of them'forwaded their hand''and unconciously'their hands brushed with each other..sending shiver's to their spine'
Both were helding each other..finger's locking their eyes..together'A spark was generated in them'which is slowly..taking toll on them'

The whole day passes..with'their sweet eye-lock encounters'sweet'works'and their getting lost into each other'
At the end of the day when they resume back to their home'Nupur felt butterfly in her stomach'as if'a new sensation has touched her heart'.

But Mayank's condition was little bit different'.He was much more excited than happy'as by the end of the day'he felt'a something..new in him..which was not there before'

Mayank's P.O.V.

Ye mujhe kya ho raha hain..kyu Nupur ki smile'mere dil ki dhadkano ko tez kar deti hain..Kyu mein jab bhi uski aakhon mein dekhta hoon'mein apne aap'ko usme..khone se rok nahi pata'..uski badi badi'aakhon mein kho jaane to mann karta hain..mera'.Aaakhir aisa kyu'.
Kyu jab vo pass..hoti hain..to dil chahta hain..ye lamha..bad tham sa jaaye'.sab kuch tham jaaye..aur reh jaayen bas mein aur vo'..
Aaaj uski aakhin mein mene kuch alag dekha..as if her eyes..her potraying the feelings of my heart'.Hain kya'har jagah'mujhe vo dhikti hain'.uska naam lete hi'dil tezi se dhadakne lagta hain'.usi muskurat k liye kuch kar guzarne ko dil karta hain..kya yahi'.kya yahi..Pyar..hain'.
Am I in Love..????
Am I in love..???
Realising his'feelings'he shouted on the top of his'voice..standing at the terrace of his'office'
Yes..!! I am in love..I am in love'.I am in love with Nupur'Truly deeply..in Love'.Yes..!!! I am in love'
I love you'.Nupur'and kuch alag sa lag raha hain'usme bhi..mujhe ye feelings'dikhi thi'aakhen kabhi jhoot nahi bolti..aur uski..aakhen..uske dil ka haal-e bayaan'bata rahi thi'Tabhi to aaj vo mujhe impress karne k liye'.white pehen k aayi..thi'..
Kahin na kahin I am sure she too feels something'for me'.Tabhi to jealousy k maare'usne..drink..kari thi'.kahin na kahin'mujhe aisa lagta hain..she feel for me'tabhi jab bhi mein compliment karta hoon..vo sharma jaati hain..uski..nazre neeche jhuk jaati hain'.shayad vo bhi mere liye kuch..nahi kuch nahi bahut kuch feel karti hain'.Bas ab..uske dil mein jo feelings'hain'use 'bas realize karwaani hain'.Nupur'.Darling..just wait and watch aage aage dekho hota hain kya'.tumhare dil baat tumhare zubaan per..aae hi rahegi'

Third Person P.O.V.

After that Mayank starts noticing Nupur's behaviour..how she is infront of him'how her eyes..talk to him'how she went shy'when he compliments her'how'her cheeks..flushed'with his one'appreciation'he also..watched how..her eyes..always..look for him..if he is late for a minute more'she calls'.him uncountably'to know..when he would arrive'all this in her behaviour'..was making his assumption..more and more strong..!!!
He loved teasing her..but at same time'brings'that ute smile on her face'on which he is ready to loose everything'he had already lost his heart to her'and even ready to shed his life'He love has started reflecting..to her also'as her own feelings fr him..were getting stringer with each passing day..

One day'.Mayank called Nupur in his cabin'and before she cold ask him'about the reason..he abruptly asked her to pack her bag'on questioning..he said they are going.. Switzerland'for an important business..even'and since she is taking care of every events..so she has to accompany him..

Hearing the name of the beautifull country a smile crept on her face..she always wished to be'there'but soon her happiness subside..hearing that they going oly to attend business..events'she was wondering..how could he even thought about his..work'specially..when they will at the one of the most beautifull'country'but all what maters him..was business'she was very much..unpleased as she has to attend the boring ..and pathetic'tiring'she nodded her head..and taken leave to go home and pack her bag..as she has to leave..within..4 hours..
Somewhere she was having a feeling that their this business..trip is not just a simple'one..but much bigger is store..into it..she was having a strong positive intutions'that'something will happen which will change her life'forever..and she was waiting fot it..opening her both the arms'.

Lest she knew..that Mayank had already...planned something..really very big..which would certainly change their lives..forever...


Hope You Like It
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai Allah!! Am I dreaming!! I reserved before than paulomi di and I'm first!! YaY! Hi 5 di..
Was going to comment on part 29 and got your pm for part 30. Sorry for not commenting on part 29..
Both parts were awesome as usual.
Loving the way Mayank and Shriya's relationship is developing..
The past part was too good*thumbs up*
Mayank realized his love for Nupur.. That's great.. Hope he will propose her soon..
Did I read Switzerland? Is there any chance of Mayank proposing Nupur in that romantic place ;) ?
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,muuuah!!
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update
so sweet mayu
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute part
well Switzerland is mine fav place too:)so would love to read what turn Mayur lives take in that beautiful place.
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Humayra

Hai Allah!! Am I dreaming!! I reserved before than paulomi di and I'm first!! YaY! Hi 5 di..
Was going to comment on part 29 and got your pm for part 30. Sorry for not commenting on part 29..
Both parts were awesome as usual.
Loving the way Mayank and Shriya's relationship is developing..
The past part was too good*thumbs up*
Mayank realized his love for Nupur.. That's great.. Hope he will propose her soon..
Did I read Switzerland? Is there any chance of Mayank proposing Nupur in that romantic place ;) ?
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,muuuah!!




Wait for next part...
Your all questions will be answered
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaadien.kiran

Beautiful update
so sweet mayu
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon


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