Arhi SS: Finding Love #1 - COMPLETED - Page 65

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG for a second time!


I read all the parts again and I still can't get over it. I love this Arnav and Khushi,. You write so well that I could actually feel all the chemistry and tension between them. I am so smitten by your story. I hope you will update soon!


Update will be up in 2-3 hours. Looking forward to your feed back! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
res for the previous chapters will read them soon

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finally found time to read all the chapter, I was stuck in my story, but now find time, for my very very late reaply just want to say
CHAPTER 8A
mind blowing superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
loved it too much
what a date, I think every girl wants something similar for his valentine. The plane private dinner under the stars wow, that romatico, a fairy tale.
The most cute and sweet was the fact that he remembered how she wanted to spend her valentine, and I think this guesto we can easily deduce that Arnav has madly in love. Wow the kiss was the cherry on the cake.

CHAPTER 8B
loved it too much 🤗 🤗
what a confesion of love
He said that he'll always nearby who do not leave you never fall, and who wants to discover concomitantly with you what they reserve their relationship.
A man who confesses his love in this way, for a girl is like her dream come true, is just soo romantic and fantastic, not all men's do this nowadays, great Arnav 👍🏼
the suprise was superb, so he bought a pendant that she could hang on the bracelet that she wears, which is nothing more than a gift from him.
Khushi is really full of surprises she put the bracelet on the her ankle, smart move.

CHAPTER 8C
What the 😲 😲 😲 😲 Arnav take Khushi to Agra for meeting Salman Khan, wow, I think with this Khushi's all dream come true. Khushi's reaction on saying Salman was awesome, totaly intertaining, she was gasping all the way.
But who is the person with whom she is talking
going to read it soon

LOVED ALL THE CHAPTER VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN YOUR DID AN AMAZING WORK KEEP IT UP 👍🏼 👍🏼
Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
All was going well, until this Singhania come in the way after Lavanya. Poor Khushi she has to go back home alone with out him and letting him stay with Lavanya his ex-girlfriend I can understand if she has some insecurities and fears.
Loved the update too too much
Khushi's emotion very well written


P.S. Me first

P.P.S. Me second too 😆
Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i knw m late again. Sorry. Lack of tym. Work kills me. Anymore i wont reserve posts on ur updates. Aftr resrving in 1st page nd commentng wen d nxt update is up, is nt justifiable. So wen i hav tym, i'l read nd comment. I feel so bad dat i'l b losing my 1st position 4 ur updates anymore.
Dis part is emotional 4 khushi. Arnav is so swt in dis. Frm whr d hel did lavanya cum nw? Evn aftr being in d relatnshp y arnav wants la 2 work 4 hm? Let me c, cn i get answrs in nxt update.
Edited by Drkk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
i like khushi.. she is behaving like mature girl..
lavanya... i seriously hate her...what she think of herself...
lovely update..



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Posted: 12 years ago
wow they kissed🥳
Hope arnav surely and steadily shows Lavanya her place.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oho they are going to kiss and Lavanya Sheetal both in arnie past .. Too much ..Khushi better brand him soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Lavanya it is!!😡
Such a beautiful date to begin with and end like this but then as you said things need to be spiced up!
Good she left him with a kiss ... something to remind him of her while she is away!!😆
She definitely acted well and firm despite her inner turmoil... lets see what happens once she is in Delhi!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hiralhk

awesome update..

i like khushi.. she is behaving like mature girl..
lavanya... i seriously hate her...what she think of herself...
lovely update..





Oh dear
1st Sheetal now Lavanaya
Poor arnav and khushi can't catch a break
👏

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