Manveer OS:Break Of The Dawn - Page 12

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Hey payel...read the 3rd part just now...loved it..its different and the story is very classy😊

Payel this part was as usual awsm

romantic moments were nice

but I really liked two characters here dadi n Ariyan rai ..

former for her smart n intelligence later for d characterization .. witty n evil is a gr8 combo to write 😉.. now I know y Piu said she loved Devendra in Kurbaan Hua 😆

wish in next part de can flew away making d army a fool 😕😊

Part IV

Queen of Her King's Heart

After seven days of trapping Lady Manyata's palace from every corner, the General Rajendra Seth of Devgarh along with his men entered to investigate. They could not find any existence of the king of Jaigarh there and to their utter shock there are no traces of Lady Manyata either. But they found a crying Mrinalini ji.

The general inquired her humbly about the Lady's absence; in answer she cried even more. Finally she managed to say, "I don't know if I can ever see her face again!" The general looked at her in utter shock, "What are you saying Mrinalini Ji?"

"Don't you remember her fourth and final condition General?"

He frowned in fear as he remembered those words of her, "Dear King and citizen of Devgarh, remember it very carefully, as an Apsara of heaven I am a swayamvu (self born) in this mortal world and so possess the right of causing Swechamrityu (self death). If any of my conditions are disregarded by any man of authority I can do whatever I want."

And breaking her palace without her permission his Senapati had already disregarded her.

"No this cannot happen! All of my men will apologize to her again! The general cried in utter shock.

He stopped for some moment as he could not bear the thought of crying in front of a lady, then continued, "I will tell my men to pray to her; in front of that very Lotus lake, from where the Apsara appeared first".

Mrinalini Ji burst into more tears.

"Hold yourself dear Madam; we cannot afford to lose that precious gem. It will be high shame for Devgarh! As a General I cannot bear the pain."

"But she is gone forever!" Mrinalini ji cried even louder, "My pretty little Apsara cannot bear the view of mortal sins!"

Just at that moment one soldier appeared in front of General. Bowing he presented him a letter. The general opened it and got a double shock.

"From where did you get that letter?"

The soldier said, "It was under a pillow in Lady Manyata's bed room."

He looked at Mrinalini ji and the letter and immediately ordered his men, "Soldiers vacate this place soon!"

Mrinalini gave a winning smile, all of her false tears vanished within a moment.

''''..

Dear King of Devgarh,

As the King of Jaigarh I am well aware of the hostility between our kingdoms which our ancestors started; and I thought it's for no specific reason. But, as my ancestor's heir I just followed the tradition with your perfect enemy like contribution.

Then last week one of my very closest tradesmen enlightened me that it is because of beauty. I heard your small mountain kingdom abounds with natural beauty; specially centre of the city. It will be a pity if I had to acquire it by force. Therefore as the king of Jaigarh I just decided to give you back every acquired land from you by Jaigarh. You are a free king now, no need to pay any tax. But a king has a huge duty i.e shist ka palan (enriching the good) and dust ka daman (slaying the evil). Therefore I will expect that you do it with due effort. And for that very reason my men will go for a personal enquiry every week ( i.e. my only requirement in exchange of returning of your land; unharmed). I presume you will obviously treat my men as your royal guest.

And suppose that you will nourish the centre of your city with same effort and respect which you did till now. I will send a very effective force to enquire that special place.

With hope I presume you will like my offer; I am kind of tired of killing Devgarh's soldiers. Its peace time now, wish you good luck.

Yours truly,

Udayveer Singh

King of Jaigarh.

The king of Devgarh let out a huge yell after reading the letter.

"Where were you when he wrote that letter while sleeping beside that B***h!"

General Rajendra Seth's head bowed.

"Sire we trapped her palace from every side, not even a fly could escape that. I just don't get how it happened!"

"I do not need any information about any flies, how did that invader filth escaped?"

General bowed his head lower.

"I think it is all for that Manyata B****'s drama!"

Then the king yelled, "Attack her palace right now. Kill everyone within it."

"Maharaj", one wise man of council spoke, "Do not you see what the King of Jaigarh mentioned about that specific palace in his letter? Harming lady Manyata's palace will mean another war between two kingdoms."

"Then we must attack Jaigarh first!" the king bellowed.

"Sire, please take no offense; but Jaigarh has already cut our forces into half. I think you should go for the King's offer." The General said.

"You call this an offer! This is slavery! His men will come for enquiry about how am I ruling! Then I have to treat them like a royal guest, with my own expense! You all are ready to agree it! What happen to you men! Have all of you turned sheep?"

The general could not give any answer to his king. One man from the council of Devgarh spoke again, "Highness I think the general is right. We cannot afford to lose any of our men."

The king clenched his fist in frustration, "That invader came to our kingdom, kidnapped our Kalyani Janapad and you soldiers were sleeping!"

"No sire! Our Apsara went back to the lake , she went for a Swechamrityu." The General tried to burst into tears but it will be highly inappropriate, "Because some of my men invaded her house, broken her rules. She cannot bear our sin sire."

"Oh shut up! You should have ordered your men to break that b***h's palace before! We could have caught that invader read handed! Right now I should be enjoying his death!

"No offense sire, but you must not use that specific language to address our lost Apsara. After all she was a celestial."

"SHUUUT UUUP" the king yelled again.

And the king's frustration went on. But he had take King Udayveer's offer. There were no other options.

''''

A week ago (Before Dawn)

"Listen Manyata you will own nothing by shedding your precious tears!" Mrinalini ji held her as Manyata started crying more.

"I cannot lose you! No dadi!"

Mrinalini Ji hugged her, caressed her head, "Manyata you are not the first Kalyani Janapad who is proposed by a King of an enemy kingdom."

Manyata broke that hug and looked carefully at her dadi.

There were tears in Mrinalini ji's eyes too, "I don't want you to commit the same mistake I have made! Nobody actually cares about you here. They only adore you body!"

"But you do dadi, you do care about me-More than anyone in this world!"

"But like a dadi, I want my granddaughter to get married to the person she loves, have a family of her own. Then only my soul will rest in peace."

Manyata hugged her while crying and Mrinalini Ji said with a force, "If you really care for me, don't want to lose me, then do as I say!"

"What?"

"I am your Dadi lady, I ought to be smarter than you. I know how to save myself from those evil eyes."

"Now change this tattered cloth! (She smiled at her and Manyata blushed) I meant put something nice, be quick. We don't have much time!"

King Udayveer drank her beauty again with his glances, when she came back in a white ghagra and red choli with a white dupatta on her forehead. No he don't want to die, he actually want to live a long and happy life with her.

Mrinalini ji took both of them to a deserted corridor. King Udayveer found his horse Abhay there. He immediately recognized what mistake he had done!

"Don't worry your highness, as you can see I have already masked your horse. Now none can recognize Abhay." Mrinalini ji smiled. King Udayveer returned a warm glance towards this old lady.

"From here goes a route throughout the jungle if you follow that path you will cross the border of Devgarh before break of dawn. Once you cross the border of Devgarh, there is none who can track you."

Manyata hugged her, "How could you be so awesome Dadi?"

"Because I am your Dadi, I ought to be awesome! Plus My stomach is full with secrets." Mrinalini ji let out a proud smile.

"I promise your safety and security above my own life Madam." King Udayveer bowed in front of Mrinalini ji.

"I do not need your life your Highness; just keep my little Manyata happy." She looked at Manyata.

"I promise that in the name of my Gods." He smiled looking at Mrinalini ji, "But to keep her happy I have to assure about your safety Madam." He handed her a piece of paper.

"What is this your Highness?"

"A key to your safety; this palace's safety and safety of every citizen of Devgarh."

'''''.

As the dawn broke the rising sun on her parted hair looked like a sindoor. Manyata dazed as she could not understand it is reality or a dream. She clutched her king tighter on his horse.

"My dear lady, if you keep on dragging me like this, then I have to stop every five minutes to kiss you." A playful grin crossed king Udayveer's face. She blushed instantly but not ready to give up yet, "Oh God what a love stricken king I have got!"

He smiled, "I know you are thanking your God in your fashion."

"Could you be bit faster your Highness, I don't think that we are out of danger yet!" Her voice sounded bit tensed.

"Believe me my lady we are completely out of danger but I can understand your urge!" King Udayveer chuckled and pulled the rein his horse, "Abhay run faster! Someone is dying to become my queen!"

"Ha ha I am always the queen!" Smiling Manyata said.

"Yes but I got to be your real king my Lady!" he winked.

Nothing could be said after that only a drop of tear was her answer.

King had to stop his horse suddenly; side along a bush as her tears did not just end within a drop. Delicately he helped his lady to come down. His horse was left unsaddled, to graze. And he took her into his arms. She kept her head silently on his heart. He did not say a single word of consolation but his gentle caress on her head and back did it all. It was like king Udayveer can hear his Manyata's soul through his heart.

"I want to tell you everything about myself." She sobbed.

"I am here just by your side!" The king smiled.

Then he sat on the soft grass holding her on his lap. There keeping her head on his chest she told him everything about her.

He was hearing all of it; sometimes sending few words of consolation, sometimes just a caress of comfort, or may be a gentle kiss. But the Apsara of human dream when unveiling all of her goddess pride just to be a normal woman in front of the man she loves, his eyes spoke only, "You will always be my Goddess, I will worship you showering all of my love."

That look on his face made her cry again. But this time her tears made her feel that all of her miseries are going to end soon.

"I think we must continue our Journey Maharaj."

King Udayveer nodded in agreement.

'''''..

Then queen of hearts became the queen of Jaigarh. No man dared to stare at beyond her feet-except her real king!

The End

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Originally posted by: andy.a

Wow! Wow! Wow!
This is one awsome update
loved this manveer os
finally manyata got her real king who loves her
the king was forced to accept udayveer's orders
the manveer scene at the end was lovely
just loved it
please write more please