FF: Exotic pg90 (The End) - Page 60

Created

Last reply

Replies

660

Views

101.8k

Users

55

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

DonnaHarvey thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0


sorry i dont know thers something wrong i dont y the first line appeard i just read ur fic from the beginning and loved it first i commented thinking it to be ur other fic but this ones so thrilling and exciiting am hooked great work

np & merci
DonnaHarvey thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

Wow BIG TASK ACOMPLISHD BY Rk.. Dona dis was just really a funny update i had evr read, really luvd it to core.. Had been waitn since so long.. Hey do continue soon wanna c hw d interview goes..hope madhu wont bluff somethn

will do thank you. I dont know what is in store for the interview just yet.
DonnaHarvey thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeba21

what a update!!👏

actually i was laughing like hell due to RK's weird behavior 🤣
oh man!! "do it again", and again brought drink, 😆 😆

our couple is surely sabse hatke one, dialogs after good news,😆
mini RK 😆 or shasha, i was imagining RK's face🤣

so, mission accomplished, *phew* for RK🤣

really liked the update

I would have flipped if I were RK. Then again, pregnant Madhu IDK, meh. I am happy you enjoyed the light update
..Ghazz.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Madhu is pregnant... 😛 wow...it was really amazing & fun part...enjoyed ur pm...and thx for the pm... 😊
vaani21 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the next Update.
Thanks Dona.😃!!!!!!
DonnaHarvey thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arias

Madhu is pregnant... 😛 wow...it was really amazing & fun part...enjoyed ur pm...and thx for the pm... 😊

thank you
DonnaHarvey thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

"Hello and welcome all to the Eela Ramani Show. We have with us today, a special guest who is notorious for her past as she is famous for her present. I am talking about the very gorgeous, a glowing-mama-to-be with a keen eye for fashion, Ms. Madhubala Kundra. Welcome to the show Madhu".

Madhu passed a smile with hidden annoyance. She would rather be anywhere but on camera.

"Last time you lied about meeting Rishabh. Would you like to tell us the real reason?"
"No", she kept up the act long enough for Eela to realize it was a joke. "I run from Russia. He find me I weak. He take care".

"Then what happened?", the host pitched in.

"Hold on. I no done yet".

Little moments like these made the crew point out similarities between Madhubala and an actress throwing a hissy fit. Of course, RK was there to remind everyone that they were dealing with a pregnant woman and not Kareena Kapoor. Rishabh's presence helped turn the interview in Madhu's favour. A joke here and there would save Madhu a storm worth of embarrassment. So, RK decided to stay for the entire length of the show.

"We marry quick like in Russia. He very Russian".

"How so?"
"He drink Vodka".

An innocent truth from her side gave way to laughter. Madhu did not try to comedic, she simply was.

"Talk to me about your father's murder, Madhu". She had finally hit Madhu where it hurt the most. But, RK's hands were tied. He had promised a no hold bars interview.

"I", she was stuck at the one word for several minutes. "I killed him and I am not ready to talk about it. Please", tears slid down her cheeks. For the first time in a long time, Eela was sympathetic.

"RK, I will let this promise go under one condition".

"Anything". Rishabh could not see Madhu cry another tear because of his petty professional commitments.

"We get exclusive film of your child after delivery".

"Deal"

___________________________________________________________________

Fast forward to delivery date.

The contractions had begun. Madhu packed the hospital bags and Rishabh pulled out the SUV.

"Remember, we are going all natural. No epidural. Stay strong Madhu!"

RK reminded his wife of their well planned medical decisions.

"Aaah", a loud cry of pain was her response to everything now. An aaah to ask Rishabh to tie the seatbelt. Another aaah to turn on nursery music. An aaah and a gentle slap to tell him to keep his eyes on the road.

They somehow made it to the hospital on time. The pain was getting intense;

"The baby would crown any minute now", the doctor declared.

He offered Rishabh to have a look. As RK titled his head to witness the birth, Madhu yelled, "Don't you dare!"

He crawed back to his original seating beside Madhu.

"EPIDURAL NOW!" Madhu flung her arm and freed it away from RK's grip.

"No, don't listen to her. It is the labour pain talking. We decided to go natural".

"Are you mama? No? Then, shut up", Madhu gave RK a death glare. He obliged the needle was in and the baby was crowning.

Like any good OBGYN, the doctor made Rishabh feel needed. "It is very important you hold the leg while we deliver the baby".

Unfortunately, in the excitement, Rishabh forgot about Madhu's stron reflux action. She kick him in the eye just like the first time he tried his luck with her.

A bruised eye and several curse words later, the doctor handed the baby to Madhu. She pullled rishabh closer and handed him the baby girl.

"Find a man like daddy. Jooru ka gulaam". Madhu chuckled and RK nodded at the sight of their warm bundle of joy.


A/N: I am terrible with kids so, this is a no comfort zone. Gets too cheesy for my entry after this point. Hence, goodbye exotic with a heavy heart & precious memories. Make sure to check out The Fault in Our Stars. No, I will not be ending TFIOS anytime soon. Until next time, stay happy :)

Desire6 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Donaaa... I dont know if am laughn readn dis update or cryn u ended it wit no warnin...wat n update it was specially interview wr madhu says' he too lk rusian..he drnk vodka... Nd dat delivery sectn was d most hilarious poor Rk bruised eye 🤣 dis Russian madhu was simply owesome or say u as a writer made dat charactr to life...i wil really mis Exotic...3shocks n less dan 24 hrs... Wil wait to read new frm u.. Bye tc wow i gue$s i commentd 1st for dis last update
Edited by Desire6 - 12 years ago
DonnaHarvey thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

Donaaa... I dont know if am laughn readn dis update or cryn u ended it wit no warnin...wat n update it was specially interview wr madhu says' he too lk rusian..he drnk vodka... Nd dat delivery sectn was d most hilarious poor Rk bruised eye 🤣 dis Russian madhu was simply owesome or say u as a writer made dat charactr to life...i wil really mis Exotic...3shocks n less dan 24 hrs... Wil wait to read new frm u.. Bye tc wow i gue$s i commentd 1st for dis last update

😆 I cannot handle kids, sorry. I am happy you liked the ending. After all they had been through together, Rishbala more that deserved a happy ending of their own.😊
Vsoujanya thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
haha you are not good with kids? I love babies they are soo cute! But his made me laugh 😆, hahaha "find a man like daddy" aww thats too cute, but it ended. I loved the ending. 👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".