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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
haha you are not good with kids? I love babies they are soo cute! But his made me laugh 😆, hahaha "find a man like daddy" aww thats too cute, but it ended. I loved the ending. 👏

all the new mums think I will drop their babies cause apparently I don't how to hold a human child. 😡

I have never held a baby for more than one minute without someone pointing out how wrong I was for almost dropping the infant. come on? my drop record so far stand proudly at ZERO babies.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

u ended it ? r u kidding me ? this is ur best work disaappointed gud bye

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Udhay only

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Awesome :)
Waiting for new ones!

Edited by --Udhay-- - 12 years ago

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Deepak, please re-read and review your comment. There are better ways to express yourself than this. What I see above is an exaggerated spur-of-moment response and not the most kind thing to say.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: --Udhay--
Awesome :)
Waiting for new ones!

Thank you very much udhay😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

sorry for rude cmmnt. this is d way i express myself. hmm i'm just disappointed. never thougght u will end this. it is ur best work.

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

a v well written update with detailed medical description.u r just brilliant at dat.a medical student han?find a man like daddy 🤣and da interview part was also awesome.well done👍🏼thanx a lot for pm.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: deepak148
sorry for rude cmmnt. this is d way i express myself. hmm i'm just disappointed. never thougght u will end this. it is ur best work.

I want to put my thoughts into words in the most articulate way possible. Here's an attempt:

When I wrote MB diaries, people liked some updates & did not like others. I had the devil may care face on. I still do for random visitors but, I expect kindness from the regulars. Critique with kindness :)

Thank you for the reply. I truly appreciate it. But, if there is a pattern emerging from MB diaries, I stop writing when there is nothing to write about. I hope you understand. Think of it this way, if you truly believe I am capable of writing decent fiction like Exotic then, who is to say that will not be the case for my future works? I am still here, still writing.

Sorry if I rambled.

Edited by iiDona - 12 years ago

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

and tis was da end oh no.😭i will definitely miss it

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: vmpy
a v well written update with detailed medical description.u r just brilliant at dat.a medical student han?find a man like daddy 🤣and da interview part was also awesome.well done👍🏼thanx a lot for pm.

thank you very much. I am glad you this tickled your funny bone. 😆

thank you very much

btw I am not a medical student. biomed undergrad aka lab rat🤢