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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope your Exam went well... This story is captive with shades of characters that were missed on the show.. I read it all in one go uptil the Note.. thus the first line here...
I understand sending Pms and emails are very time consuming so i would prefer to stalk your update and let you have the time to write the Update.

Great work I must say... Please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope you do well...
Mu Id is : sruthickhp@gmail.com
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago

K!!

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This update reminded me of the "Because I hate you scene" from the serial. It was a very moving one in the serial as is the update in this story.

I can just imagine the pain Khushi is experiencing now; she is being punished for being a positive person, who put others before her own happiness. She is in an unhappy place, married to a man who is good to everyone but her, that is something she cannot understand. I wonder how much her pain would increase if she were to know, Arnav just wanted her to apologize to soothe his ego and that is what lead to all this. It is sad Khushi is subject to so much heartache.

Arnav can beat up every guy who spews filth about Khushi or tries to tarnish her honor but he must not forget he was the first one who did the very act he wants others to stop doing. That is why we are told "look before you leap and think before you speak." If only Arnav had the better sense, he would not have had to witness this appalling episode. I found a lovely shayari for Arnav and hope he learns a thing or two from it -

Pyaar baarish ki bundho ki tarah hai,
Jikso chune ki khwaish mein,
Hatheliyan to gili ho jaati hain,
Par haath hamesha khali hi rehti hain…


http://shayari.co.in

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
All the best..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edit: Sorry for being late!
Does Arnav has developed some feelings for khushi other than anger? I hope so. As much as i hate the reason for the outbreak, Im glad khushi got a chance to open her heart and tell arnav what exactly she feels about the mess she is in now. There are many questions in my mind and im waiting for them to be cleared soon.
Thanks a ton for the mail dear!
Edited by arathyvr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update! Much needed confrontation..
Edited by luvbug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved the update; a different set up compared to the previous ones given the presence of public. When I was reading about the dance I couldn't help but think that had the couple met under different circumstances, Arnav's statement to the man regarding his wish to dance with Khushi would have actually warmed her. They met on a wrong note and he has always had his way in her perspective which makes her comprehend that he is imposing himself on her once again, as if owned her.
The words from the drunk man showed her what many around believe, her fear of being called a wh**e, shattering for any woman. The suppressed emotions flowed out as she spoke out her sentiments. It was a beautifully written scene Zehra; and Arnav's words of not winning all the time, is he talking about the fact that he hasn't gotten over the bygone the way she has. Can't wait for the next update.
Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
Arnav is protective.
Loved her outburst nd confrontation.
Edited by silvia1999 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a mind blowing update! no doubt about that whatsoever! I loved everything, literally! And the build up to the outburst and confrontation at the end was amazing! Finally they both let out what was inside them! Hope they both start understanding each other better soon, although they do understand each other a little better now :)
Looking forward to more amazing updates :)

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