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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello.I've written this before knowing that Sneha's leaving D3.Only now I realize how apt the title is for TanHa in a way.Also this is by far the shortest OS of mine.

"Please give US a chance,Sharon??",pleaded Swayam. Now,he had to beg to let his priced possession exist.If in life she had sounded any foolish,after what she said on finding out that he was the secret admirer,that was this.She sound foolish.Relationships are complicated,they are tough to keep,they suck out your life to stay intact.But if that's the one thing you want in life,what's wrong in taking pain? He's as complicated as she ever was."No,Swayam. You only find yourself in a mess",said Sharon.He had enough of "I'm not meant for you" attitude of Sharon's. Swayam continued staring in eyes while she continued justifying her decision."I like you and there's nothing that can change it",said Sharon looking at Swayam intently."I know I'm complicated",continued Sharon."To hell with being complicated",shouted Swayam on top of his voice. Didn't she know she was complicated before giving them a chance ? "I don't care,Sharon.What's with your ranting about being complicated.Goddamn,I'm as much as complicated as you are",he continued still shouting.Finally,she saw the reaction she expected. Swayam taking their break up coolly was unexpected."Swayam,but I don't want to give us another chance",she finally said it.

"Oh...Fine",said Swayam grinding his teeth looking into the sky."Swayam,I'm sorry",apologized Sharon."You know what?? You are right.You are complicated",said Swayam looking angrily at Sharon."You can never fall in love with anyone because you are selfish.You are ...",continued Swayam. How can anyone be this foolish? If every couple ended their relationship because of their differences the world could have been love less.In love,life is living with differences.In love,life is about a cup of a coffee that you share.In love,a message is about everything."Fine,I let you free",declared Swayam.

Sharon looked at Swayam with tears filled eyes.Only she knew how painful it was to see him accuse her of being selfish.Yes,she was selfish,She wanted Swayam,whom she liked,to be peaceful.If that was called selfishness,let that be."But one thing",spoke Swayam. Sharon broke out of the trance listening him speak."I ...I cannot handle this anymore.I..I cannot talk to you.I really cannot",said Swayam.

"Swayam,please don't this to me",pleaded Swayam. She was confused.She wanted him to stay away from her but wanted everything to be normal.She wanted to end this relationship but wanted Swayam to have the same love he always had for her."Trust me,this is better than all that you have given me"said Swayam walking back to their tent."Stop..Stop",said Sharon as her sobs grew louder with every step that Swayam took.This is what being rude meant. Swayam,for the first time,was rude to her.

"I hope she realizes her love.This time at least",thought Swayam walking towards the tent.He knew he had to distance himself from her.It was time to show her what it meant to fall in love.To make her feel how horrible is to have to see that person everyday whom you love but cannot talk.Distance only makes heart grow fonder.Sometimes,letting go is it.


If relationships are hard to maintain,let their bond be strong enough.If break up's are common,let their desire to stay together be stronger.If they are complicated,let their love take care of it.

Also please read the 14th part of Man and Wife

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abhilasha_dream thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was beautifully penned down, wish we could have seen this on serial, but unfortunately as Sneha as quit we would never see this, we would again see a pining Swayam, for God knows how long...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww it was so beautiful
swaron breakup😭
but i guess sometimes to let go of the person u love the most is necessary
u did an amazing job!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sravani...thank you for this OS...m glad to see you back...

you knw after last thursday episdode i was abt to make a post calling Sharon SELFISH...but didnt as the reasons are out...

i exactly want swayam to call sharon foolish and selfish...sharon doesnt knw she is being that...for doing all this to them...in the end rightly said...he need to make this distance come between them to make her realise...kaash sneha show nahi chodthi...kaash sneha ko ye problms hi nahi hothey...we wud hve got beautiful love story by a beautiful couple

i guess dance camp is the last memory of tanha being swaron...hope we get to see something this beautiful and impacting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Small but impactful OS. Loved the story and how u divulged from the orignal plot. And moreoer some really nice dialogues about life and love. Liked it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME OS ...loved it...so realistic yet impact full...👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was beautifully penned down, wish we could have seen this on serial but...😕😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful yet heart wrenching OS! Loved it!

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