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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sihu
What you've written describes the present so aptly...and gives us an insight into the future, if the CVs maintain it like this.

The more she refuses to get affected by his insults & taunts, the more its going to rile him. I'm waiting for the rise of MB and fall of RK...waiting for RK to finally give in to his feelings for her. And she should not be there for him at that point...

EXACTLY! This storyline has so much potential and I really do hope it's handled with care, the CVs have not disappointed thus far so I hope this goes over amazingly. And thank you so much for enjoying my little drabble! x)

Originally posted by: DoJin
you pretty much wrote what i've been hoping will happen in the show ...awesome one shot👏...if possible please continue this further or some other insight depicting RK's struggle... accepting his feelings .. will be great too👍🏼

THANK YOU SO MUCH! I might not explore this OS per say but I will be writing other things here and there!(:

Originally posted by: ninand
IF there's anything romantic to be said or associated with the current track, you just said it.

I enjoyed every bit of what you wrote.. more its concision.

the masochism in this track(in us the viewers) , in RK the character, is insidious, as is his need. Its almost violent in its want. If the makers keep it intact, its such a terrible tragedy in the making, one would only be able to drown in it, and then never ever mention of its existence again.

that violent need , in your piece, I saw in the way Madhu tried but couldn't quite close(not yet) the door to the haunting notes.. and he cannot contain in himself as he lashes out at evrything around him.

terrific track. Today in particular.. subtle. they have woven a thread of feverish yearning that doesn't abide acknowledegement . the episode leaves a surprising ache after it ends.

Thank you so much <3. UGH everything you wrote and the WAY you wrote it is just so perfect and EXACTLY what I'm hoping to see from this track. Ditto. To everything you said. We are fully aware of RK's struggle at this point. His want to close everything in his life that has to do with Madhu is sacrificed for his very need of her. It's so poignant. Because at this point he doesn't want Madhu. He needs her, and when he realizes it his foundation of pride will start to crack.