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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u everyone for reading and commenting.. its been realli long since i last updated!! ive been busy with my exams.. anywaysss .. heres the next part.. hope u guys like it ..
there yaa gooo..

Part 13

Her eyes, were full of unshed tears.. her eyes that were sparkling with excitement a few minutes ago were now filled with hidden pain..

"he died" she said in a whisper.. "and its all my fault" she continued, as the tears rolled down her face…

*flashback*

"moomm!!!!! Maammmyyy!! Mommyyy!! Maaa!!!" she kept on calling her mom

"what is it?" her mom asked irritated but couldn't stay mad at her for more than 2 seconds as she felt her daughter snuggling up to her and making herself comfortable on her mothers lap..

"what do you want?" her mom asked as she ruffled her daughters long beautiful hair..

"maa can I go to jays place?" she asked her mom with puppy dog eyes, knowing that her mom wont b able to say no to that

"ok but be home by eight.. and myy ure getting heavy" she chuckled and ruffled her hair again

Riddhima kissed her mom on the cheek and jumped from her moms lap, doing a victory dance making her mother laugh.

She ran upstairs and saw her sister lying on her bed, reading a book, with music blasting from her ipod. She went and hugged her sister and ran before her sister could say anything about knocking her door before entering

She picked up the little gift she bought for her best friends' birthday and ran out of the house.. jays house was only two blocks away and she was allowed to ride there without any adult supervision.

She rode as fast as she could. It was her best friends birthday and she wanted to spend as much time with him as she could..

She parked her bicycle and ran inside. Eager to meet him, she rang the bell and waited. His mom opened the door and riddhima realized, like everyday his mom was busy and was leaving for where ever she worked.

She didn't care.. she just wanted to go in and surprise jay. She ran upstairs without bothering to lock the door (a big mistake). Jay's mom always asked them to lock all doors and windows so that HE couldn't come in.

"JAYYY" she opened the door, not bothering to knock. Jay was sitting on his bed reading a book and was more than shocked.

"surprise!!" she sang as she ran over to hug him.

"but u said u wont come" he asked

"hao can I NOT come silly? She giggled as she slapped him lightly on his arm

"so what did you get me?" he asked excitement filling him

"not soo fast" she grinned

"not fair!!" he whined playfully

"kmon lets make ur birthday cake" she jumped and ran to the kitchen

"but mommy told us not to go to kitchen and we cant play with fire" he said as he teased her

"we're not playing with fire silly" she laughed at his attempt of mimicking her, as she rummaged through the cabinets.

She finally found the chocolate cream and went near the basket where cupcakes were kept.

She took one of them and covered it with the chocolate cream. She then lighted one of the candles and placed it in the middle of the cake. She switched off the lights and went to jay, who was nao wearing blind folds

"Kmon big boy make a wish" she clapped and jumped in enthusiasm

He smiled as he saw her. She would always cheer him up. She was the only one in his life, his only friend, the only one he truly loved. His parents were a pathetic excuse for parents, they had never been there for him. He was still a kid but his mind was of an adult. His dad was only home when he was drunk and wanted to beat the crap out of his one and only son. His mom on the other hand was rarely home. And he knew that it wasn't work that kept her occupied. Riddhima was the only friend he had. Kids in his school would make fun of him and would bully him. Riddhima had been the strong one and had 'rescued' him from the bullies. They had been friends since they were 5.

"kmon!! Its ur 13th birthday!! Ure entering ur teenage!! Make a wish!"

He smiled "I wish…" "u don't say that loud silly! Now close ur eyes and make a wish and hurrryy uppp!!" she whined

He smiled once again and closed his eyes and made a wish then blew out the candles as riddhima sang 'the birthday song' for him and clapped when he blew the candles.

They fed each other and played with the frosting.

"kmon!! Its time for ur present!" she chirped and led him upstairs to his room

She opened the door of his balcony and asked him to come out and gave him his gift.

Her pure green eyes sparkled under the moonlight.

He opened it slowly knowing that that bothers her. But he also liked keeping all the wrapping papers and the gift bags.. clich but true..

He opened the box and saw a beautiful pendant in there.

"open it" she said ordered (patience was not one of her virtues)

He nodded and opened the pendant.. it had a picture of them of her birthday, when he kissed her on the cheek.

"do u like it?" she asked with her big puppy eyes.

"bunny! I love it!" her eyes grew wider with happiness, if that was even possible

"I got me one too!" she said as she took out a pendant that was hidden under her hoodie

"I .." he was about to say something when they heard a crash downstairs

"bunny! Did u lock the door when you came in?" he asked as he cupped her face and forced to look at him

"i-I-I don't remember" she stuttered as tears welled up in her eyes

"shh its okai" he wiped the tears from her cheeks and kissed her cheek

"ill always protect u" he said which made her giggle "im the one who always protects you big guy! I…" she was interrupted with another crash

"kmon! We've gotta hide!" he whispered and led her to the stairs that had a small room under it..

"im so sorry! its all bcuz of me" she sobbed silently

"shh bunny its not your fault!" he tried his best to show that he wasn't scared.

"happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Kmon boy I know ure here somewhere!"

Jay was scared shit! He knew that voice. The same voice that had haunted him all his life. The same drunk voice that would scare the shit out of him. Riddhima sobbed and clutched his shirt tightly, afraid to let him go.

"listen bunny! Im gonna go out and distract and u run back home okai?"

"no! im gona stay here with you!" she whispered

"please! Bunny u need to leave!ill handle him!" he begged her to leave

She nodded. She knew that he wouldn't listen to her so she stayed mum.

"listen! If something happens then.."

"y are u saying that? Nothings gonna happen! God will help us out! please don't say that!" she cried

"sh listen to me okai?" he said and she nodded

"look, if something happens to me and im not there with you on ur birthday, then go to the place where we first met, under the tree where we carved our inititals, there is a letter there for u.. promise me ull open it on ur birthday and not before that?"

"but we'll get out of here right?" she asked

He just smiled "if I don't get out of here then I want you to do as I said and if I get out of here then we're gonna open the letter and read it together and laugh at what we went through" she nodded and smiled as he wiped the tears and kissed her fore head .

He hugged her "I love you bunny! Ure the best! Lets go"

They silently got out and went their way. He went to the kitchen and riddhima went to hide in the washroom, taking the fone with her to call her dad and ask for help cuz sure as hell she wasn't leaving jay alone

"hello" she breathed a sigh of relief when her dad answered the call

"daddy?" she whispered

"riddhima? Honey are u okai?"

"daddy help us! Im at jays place! You've gotta help us" she cried silently, trying not to make much noise.

She heard another crash and a lot of cursing. She hung up without waiting for her dads reply

She sat on the edge of the bath tub, as she tried to stop the tears when she heard the banging on the door. It wouldn't take a genius to figure out that jays dad was banging the door of the washroom.

She held her breath as she heard the banging on the door.

She closed her eyes praying to God to keep Jay safe, to help them out of here.

Her eyes were still closed when she heard the door break. She screamed when she saw the sight in front of her.

The man was covered in blood, his attire was torn, his eyes were blood red with sleeping bags under his eyes and wrinkles on his face. There was a deep scar near his jaw. He was drunk and couldn't stand straight. He looked like he hadn't showered, shaved, or changed for a long time. She cringed and shook with fear as he walked towards her

"well well who do we have here?" he cooed

"get away from me" she cried

"nao, that's not the way you treat someone who's elder than you is it?" he said caressing her face

She cringed at his touch and more tears made their way down her face

He slapped her hard "stop crying! I hate people who cry"

She nodded

"tell me that ure sorry!" he barked

"i-I im sorry" she tried so hard not to let another tear fall

"that's my girl" he said as he bent closer, caressing her face.

"Stay.Away.From.Her!" they heard Jay shout which made his dad laugh like a hyena

"and what are you gonna do?" he asked amused by the brave front his son tried to show him

"jay!!" riddhima screamed when she saw blood oozing out from every part of his body

His dad yanked her hair which made her cry with pain

"dad! Dad please let her go!" jay begged

"aah! 'The begging!' now that's my son!" he said, satisfied with the way his son begged him

"but my son! She needs to be punished!" he said as he kicked his son and then pulled riddhima by hair and pushed her head into the bath tub which was filled with icy cold water.

"riddhimaa!!!" jay shouted, trying to get up which was hard with a bruised body

Riddhima struggled to get out of his hold, she felt her body go numb.. she felt her self giving up. She couldn't breathe. All the thoughts crossed her mind.. her family, school, friends, her life and most importantly JAY. Where was he? Was he okai? She could hear him calling her. But his voice grew faint. What was happening? Before her mind could register what was going on, she felt someone pull her head out of the water

"bunny! Bunny? Bunny u okai?"

Her eye lids felt heavy and she felt cold but she could sense jay slapping her face lightly to keep her awake..

She was gona say something when jay was pulled from her by his dad and flung towards the wall with unbelievable force. Her eyes shot open as she saw him lying still.. she ran towards him "JAY! JAYY! JAYY! Kmon JAY wake up! U promised jay! U don't break ur promises Jay! Right jay?"

"riddhima??" she heard her dad and turned to look the cops had handcuffed jays dad already.. "riddhima? You okai honey?"

She felt her self getting dizzy. She couldn't make out what was happening. All she could see was jay. she felt the world going black and soon she was out..

*end of flashback*

She hugged armaan as she let her walls come down..

"he left me!!" she cried as she clutched his shirt and hid her face in the crook of his neck while he rubbed her back in circles, allowing her to let it out.

"he died! And its all my fault! If I had locked the door… he would still be here!" she wept

"sshhh! Its nobodys fault" he cooed..

They sat there for hours, as she cried her heart out. he felt her breathing deep and he knew that she had fallen asleep.. he carefully tucked her in the passenger seat and walked to the drivers seat..

hope u guys liked it.. comment n lemme knw..
take care!!
love,
jena!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Oh my god this part ws awesome
Aww he called her bunny its soo cute :)
but it was really sad
y did u stop????
i wanna read more please update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
OMG...what a horrable part.
how could a father treat his son like this...he was very cruel.
now i understand why Riddhima is like this.
i am glad that Armaan is with her to console her.
cont soon.
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so sad and emotional awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
... thank u everyone for the lovely comments .. i know its been really long i havent updated n im sorry!! well i wont talk much and so heres another update! .. hope u guys like it !...


Part 14

She hugged armaan as she let her walls come down..

"he left me!!" she cried as she clutched his shirt and hid her face in the crook of his neck while he rubbed her back in circles, allowing her to let it out.

"he died! And its all my fault! If I had locked the door… he would still be here!" she wept

"sshhh! Its nobodys fault" he cooed..

They sat there for hours, as she cried her heart out. he felt her breathing deep and he knew that she had fallen asleep.. he carefully tucked her in the passenger seat and walked to the drivers seat..

The drive to her home took less than thirty minutes. He looked at her as she slept in the passenger seat, a little uncomfortable, but he didn't wanna wake her up and so he carefully picked her up, so as not to awake her. She weighed as light as a feather. It felt good having her in his arms. It felt as if she belonged there, with him in his arms. She was cute, hot when furious, a total turn on when she was in charge and took control of the situation and beautiful when she was asleep. She looked so fragile as he stared her tear-stained face.

He felt her stir and he stopped walking when he felt her snuggling up to him. he felt his throat drying up at the close proximity they were sharing. He closed his eyes and tried to calm his heart that was racing faster than riddhima at her race. He counted backwards from 10 as he tried the impossible "ignoring the fact that riddhima was in his arms and that the fact that it was the best feeling in the whole wide world". He let out a breath he was holding, which he wasn't even aware of and walked to the front door of her home. It was hard ringing a bell with riddhima in his hand arms and harder when he was trying his best not to wake her up as he waited for her dad to open the door….

Riddhima on the other was having the best sleep ever.

She was uncomfortable when she was sleeping on the passenger seat but she was too tired and exhausted to wait to get to bed and so she tried to sleep but it was hard.. it was hard going to sleep knowing that an exceptionally gorgeous guy was sitting next to her, driving her car. A man, who was willing to lend a shoulder she could cry on. A man, who was willing to help her and be there for her. A man, who was willing to give her his company. A bad girl, who was part of an illegal racing group. A girl who had a band and performed at different clubs. Was she worth it? No she wasn't and she was damn aware of it. She had given chance to jay, then her mom and her sister and then what? She had lost them. It was the same routine everytime. Every single time they would tell her to get up and get moving because that's what life is. Every time she would get up and move on. Every single time she would give fate a chance. But then what? Fate would give her another fall and it felt like fate laughing at her face again. She had tried running away, she had tried to end her life but fate couldn't stand loosing and brought her back to square one. She was back at struggling for life. A life she was living for the sake of it. Sure she had her dad, her best friend. He was everything she was left with. She had Jamie, of course and he was the only one beside her dad who knew tit and bits of what happened. But none of them the whole story. The story of what happened after jays' death, the story of what happened when his stopped from practicing medicine because of his alcoholic habits after the death of her mom and sister. The story of how she supported them and looked after the expenses. No one would do that at the age of 14 but she had done it. No one at her would've survived the blows, but she did and she did it again and again and she was determined not to lose. Every time fate would throw a challenge, she would accept it and win hands down. She had locked away her already broken heart and was hell sure to keep it out of reach. She had been doing well. She was proud of herself but then the walls she had created around herself, came crashing down when she met the gorgeous guy who was now sitting next to her, looking after her. She doesn't know what it is about him that makes her wanna be with him, makes her wanna look into those beautiful eyes and never look away, makes her wanna be with him even after the nonstop warnings from her mind.

She felt the car stop and heard the door open and close. She then felt the cold air whoosh in as she heard the door to her side open and then felt the strong arms sliding under and carefully picking her up. She felt warmth radiating from him as he carried her and walked towards her home. The little distance between them was unbearable and it was taking everything for her to control the tingles she felt all over her body but it was of no use because in the end she was like the hell with it and cuddled up to him, closing the little distance. She felt him stop and now that her rested on his well toned chest, she could hear his heart beating too fast and she was sure she couldn't compete with that kind of speed. She waited for him to walk but he wasn't moving at all. After a few seconds, which felt like an eternity, she felt his body relax, his heart, back to its normal pace and he started walking again. She knew it was hard for him to ring the bell, especially because she knew he was trying not to wake her up and she smiled, which was well hidden by his chest.

He heard the door open and he felt like kicking the "intruders" ass for disturbing him while he was ogling the beautiful face.

*ahem* he heard someone clearing his throat. And forcing himself to look at him, he felt his face burning up. Her dad had caught him gawking his daughter. He closed his eyes, ready for a punch in the gut but

"armaan! Ure back! Come on it.." was all he heard.. he opened his eyes to see her dad standing aside making way for him to come in.

"uhmm yeahh" he forced a smile as he walked in, with riddhima still in his arms wondering what it was like to be in her dads place, watching a guy, whom you've met for the first time in less than 24 hours carrying his daughter and entering his house.

"u know where her room is" he heard her dad say, breaking his chain of thoughts. He gave a small nod and left.

He entered her room and was awed. Her room was "wow"

Her room was dimly lit. Everything was black.. black furniture, black walls, and instead of curtains on windows, she had her windows tinted black and even her door was painted black. One of the black painted walls had different bright colors splashed on the wall in a nice pattern and it had a collage of pictures, he couldn't make out the people in the pictures because of dark. The other wall, also painted black had a number of sketches on it but he couldn't see them clearly. The other side had big windows covering almost whole wall. The windows were tinted. And she had her black closet with the fourth ball and had a basketball net next to it. He made a note in his head to ask her to let him see her room when there was some light. It was too dark. He could see her laptop was still on, it was the only light other than the lamp which almost gave no light. He made his way to her bed, black with black sheets and a black blanket. Her bed wasn't made and her blanket wasn't folded. Her room was a clean but still messy, reflecting her personality. He tucked her in, removing her sketchbooks, ipod, laptop, chargers, basketball, notes and books from her bed. He covered her in the blanket and stood there, not wanting to leave. he then leaned in and kissed her forehead, his lips lingering on her soft skin longer than required.

She sucked in a small breath when she heard the front door open. She was waiting for her dad to start panic or start with the lecture asking armaan not very appropriate questions but what she heard startled her. He told him to come in and even asked him to go to her room. What was up with her dad? Even though she never had a boyfriend, she was expecting her dad to talk to armaan about it. But nothing.. oh well, why bother?

She was too comfortable in his arms and she didn't want him to leave. she felt safe in his arms.. and she wanted to sleep but she didn't wana miss the feelings she had around him. she may never feel the feeling of being in his arms again and so she wanted to save them in her memory. She never wanted the day to end. She couldn't remember the last time she had so much fun. But in her life, like all good things came to end, this day did too.

She felt herself being laid on bed and the blanket covering her. She then some shuffling and knew he was cleaning her bed. Bless him!

She waited for some while.. she wanted to open her eyes and make sure she wasn't dreaming but she couldn't. so she patiently waited for him to leave, waiting for the sound of the door. But none. She felt something on her forehead, sending shocks down her body.. his lips on her skin felt amazing and she wanted it to last longer, and as if he read her mind, his lips remained on her forehead for a while and then he got up from where he was sitting. She felt his gaze burning her skin sending tingles down her body. Her heart racing at the speed of light. And brain was numb.

She then heard the front door close and she slowly opened her eyes, afraid of facing reality, because if this was a dream she would never wake up.. but she had to.. she had to wake up and make sure this wasn't a dream.

And so she did, she slowly opened her eyes and still felt the tingly feeling. She still felt the kiss.. her clean bed and side of bed and the place where he had been sitting smelled of his cologne, indicating reality.

She rolled over to where he was sitting and hugged herself. She went through the day and reminiscing the day she spent with the gorgeous greek god.

A smile lit her face and it was then she accepted another challenge by fate..

hope u guys liked it! i wont be able to send any pms today! sorry!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@chiggy_wiggy: Nyc story!!!!😊
Edited by girlz-rule - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part.
so riddhima is falling in love.
cont soon and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great concept. Great story. The way u express the feelings r jst awesm.. do pm me whn cont...

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