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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ASR6262

Awesome update
promo is Super hit great work 👍🏼
Thank u for pm me waiting for next one



Thanx a lot..!!! Will update as soon as possible..!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty



thumare hi bare mein..read the prvious Aditi's comments you will come to know..!! 😳😳



sahaz ne baad mein bataya...me shanaya...sahaz baby u need a eye chek up!!!
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sahaz ne baad mein bataya...me shanaya...sahaz baby u need a eye chek up!!!
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tanya di ye aap kya bol rahe hain...I'm already wearing big big specs...agar aapko vishwaas nahi hota toh mani se puch lijiye...
pehle aankh main pura power kum hai aur phir aur kam ho gaya kya...🤓😆
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vohi toh keh rahi hun...specs ka asar..!!!!!
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Part 4: Katti Meethi Mulakath

Important Note: Guys, I am back with the Part 3 of this FF under one roof. I have tried to include as many characters in this update as possible. As you all know that this FF has many stories to deal with as it is a combination of three shows on TV. Thanks a lot for all the support I got in form of likes and comments for my previous updates. It would be really great if after reading this update you all could tell the following in the form of comments:

1. Who according to you is the best character of this Update?

2. Who according to you is the character who was not presented up to the mark in this update?

3. Which according to you was the best scene in the Update?

4. Which is the relationship or bonding do you think was best shown in this update?

5. Which according to you is the best dialogue (or it can be also lines describing) in this update?

Please do answer these questions. It will help me improve myself for the next time. any other comments are also welcome and please do like the update.😉

Indira Gandhi International Airport, New Delhi:

Kushi, Payal and Buaji were in hurry rushing towards the ticket checking counter.

Bua ji: Hai re Nandkishore! We are already late. How many times have I said to this girl to hurry up. But no. Madam ji is always busy with something or the other. And the most important work of hers is to be lost in some stupid world of hers.

Payal: Bua ji, please don't scold Kushi. Atleast not today when she is going to go to Bangalore.

Kushi: No jiji. Don't stop her. After all this is one of the many things I am going to miss in Bangalore.

Payal is touched by Kushi's words. This was for the first time in 18 years that the two sisters were separating. Payal was always annoyed with the fact that Kushi's only dream was to study in SBU. Not because, she did not want her sister to dream big, but because she was afraid to be away from her sister. She always cared for her sister like a mother. She was afraid how Kushi would handle the evil world. For her Kushi was innocent bird who did not know the world. But today she had realized that it is time to let the innocent bird free. Just like how Eagles are pushed down from the high cliff by their own mother, just to teach them how to fly. Now it was time that Kushi had to be pushed down to the strange world. She had to learn to fly. She had to fly if she had to achieve the dreams that are high as the endless sky. Payal was brought back from her trance, as she saw Kushi was walking backwards talking her regular nonsense, and she was about to collide with a person.

Payal: Kushi sambhalke.

But she was late. The fault had already happened. Kushi had bumped into the Arnav Singh Raizada. What more, he was carrying a glass of water for Anjali who was sitting in the waiting area with her other brothers and Annie. The water splashed on his face and also made his shirt wet. That was it.

Arnav: What the…

Kushi was first shocked as she suddenly dashed someone. But now she found something familiar in the voice she had just heard. She turned back to apologize.

Kushi: Sorry, I did not see you coming…

She was shocked to see the same guy who she had met the other day.

Arnav: You?

Kushi: Acha…So it is you after all. Laad Governor. That is what I was thinking that how could someone not see a person walking towards him. But, now I got it. It is your hobby to dash into people and then insult them. So there is not point arguing with you. (Turned towards Payal and Bua ji) Chalo jiji…

She turns to walk when suddenly Arnav grabs her from her wrist and pulls her towards him. All she could do was to just collide to his hard chest. She looked into those evil eyes. They were filled with rage and anger. He was turning red with anger.

Arnav: How dare you? (gritting his teeth) You dash into me and then you insult me. What do you even think about yourself? I was wrong that I even thought I had to not behave in that manner that day. Girls like you deserve only such treatment.

Anjali, RK, Yuvraj and Annie were now confused on where Arnav was. It had been 15 minutes since Arnav had gone to fetch some water for Anjali, who was getting all sentimental due to the departure of her lovely brothers' and Annie to Bangalore. But he had not yet returned. They decided to check it themselves. But when they reached to the scene of Kushi spilling water on Arnav and Arnav-Kushi conversation, each one of them had different expressions on their face.

RK had a smirk on his face, he often liked Arnav's attitude. He admired the effect Arnav had on people who tried to cross his way. Annie, was shocked and at the same time excited. She could not believe that someone could even have the courage to talk to Arnav the way Kushi did. For her Kushi today was a superwoman. Anjali's face showed a clear sign of anger. She was boiling with anger. No, not with Kushi for spilling water on Arnav, but with her own chote for misbehaving with a girl like this. She knew his anger, but then she hated this part of his the most. How could he even think about insulting a girl like this and that too in public. Yuvraj, on the other hand was having a naughty smile adorned on his lips. He softly said to himself:

Yuvraj: Now she is the one who deserves to be ASR's girlfriend. Lavanya jaise tho hazaron mil jayengi. But it would be hard to find a girl like her. She best suits my bhai.

Anjali walks towards Arnav.

Anjali: Chote leave her. (with determination in her voice) I said leave her.

Arnav after hearing to his di, frees Kushi's hands. He walks away from there all angry and annoyed. Payal walks towards Kushi. Payal was first confused later understood that he was the same person who Kushi was talking about the other day. Payal consoles Kushi who was now in tears and also was shocked by Arnav's sudden action. Anjali, Yuvarj and Annie move towards her. While, RK goes from there searching for Arnav.

Anjali: I am sorry. I know Chote…I mean Arnav's behavior was wrong. I apologize from his side. Please don't cry. I am sure you will look beautiful with a smile.

There was something in Anjali that easily connected to Kushi. Kushi, felt better listening to Anjali. She did not know why she felt as though she is speaking to someone who is very close to her.

Annie: Yes di. You are right. I bet she has a pretty smile. (Trying to cheer up Kushi)

Bua ji: Arey wah..!! Kya baath? One comes and insults and other comes and consoles. If you are feeling that bad then why don't you make your boy realize what did was worng? (Taunting to Anjali)

Anjali was hurt by her words, but she knew somewhere it was Arbav's fault and she deserved to hear all this. Yuvraj stepped forward to stop Bua ji but then Anjali stopped him from telling anything.

Kushi: Bas Bua ji. Please don't talk like that to her. What is mistake in this? It was his mistake that he hurt me. Not hers. (To Anjali) I am sorry. Waise, my name is Kushi Kumari Gupta and this is my Jiji Payal Gupta.

Annie: (excited) I am Annie Singhania. This is Arnav's sister Anjali Shyam Jha and this is his brother Yuvraj Singh Raizada. So where are you travelling to?

Kushi: I am going to Bangalore. Actually I have joined SBU. (with pride)

Annie: wow. I too am going to Bangalore. I mean not just me but all of us. Arnav, Yuvi, RK and I. I am new admission just like you are, but they are our seniors.

This way they start talking continuously without any stop. Bored by the conversation Yuvraj walks away from that place.

RK was roaming around the airport searching for Arnav. Suddenly his eyes fell on a small boy who was sitting in one of the waiting chair sobbing. RK generally would get irritated at this. No, not because he did not like kids, but because he did not like getting emotional. He did not like seeing people getting too sentimental. He went to the boy and sat in the chair next to him. The small boy was none other than Raj.

Raj who had accompanied Madhu and Padmini to the airport silently escaped from them and sat in the chair here. He was very depressed today. Today, again he would loose his one more sister. Madhu too like Trishna would leave him and his mother all alone. Though it was a different thing that both the circumstances were different. RK offered a tissue to Raj. He did not know why but he just could not see the guy in tears.

RK: Look, I don't know who you are. But then I am Rishabh Kundra. You can call me RK.

Raj: Ya so? What should I do if you are RK?

RK: I did not ask you to do anything. But then little champ I think you can atleast tell me why you are crying and where is your family?

Raj: Why should I tell you? How are you even related to me?

This kid was something really different. He was very strong indeed. With his every word RK was getting more connected with Raj. After all both don't have a father, and they both knew difficulties in life. But RK at any cost wanted to stop Raj from crying.

RK: Okay, if you don't want to tell its alright with me. But, I thought maybe I would help you solve your problem. But looks like you don't want me to help you out. Bye

Saying this RK gets up to leave.

Raj: Wait.

Here Madhu and Padmini realize that Raj was missing. Padmini gets all upset wondering where he disappeared all of a sudden. Padmini has tears in her eyes. She remembers all that had happened previous night. How Raj enters home upset with her for not forgiving Trishna. She feels scared. She was in no condition to lose her another child. She was already broken from inside after losing Trishna. Madhu sees her mother's condition, and she suddenly approaches to her.

Madhu: Ma, don't worry. It is nothing like you are thinking. Raj would be somewhere around. He is just a little sad that I am leaving to Bnagalore. Don't worry Ma, I will find him.

Padmini: No Madhu. Madhu I cannot leave him. I cannot stay without him. (starts crying)

Suvreen, Baldev Guggal and Loveli Guggal who were standing in some distance witness this.

Suvreen: Mumma-Puppa chaliye na. I think they need our help.

Puppa: No beta. It is their personal matter. We cannot be intruding into their matter.

Mumma: Yes betaji you puppa is right.

Suvreen is not completely convinced.

Madhu looks around. There was no one who she knows. She did not know what to do. In order to find Raj she had to leave Padmini, but then it was not possible to leave Padmini in this condition. She looks around. She sees the Guggal family standing in a little distance. She sees Suvreen. She feels she has seen her somewhere. Then she identifies that she was one of the two girls who had helped her in saving the girl who was being harassed in the road. She decides to approach her.

Madhu: Hi. I am Madhubala. I don't know if you remember me, but the other day we had saved that girl from being harassed. Actually, my brother Raj suddenly disappeared. I don't know what to do. I am mother cannot be left alone in this condition. I am getting really scared. Please help me.

Suvreen: Relax. I am Suvreen Guggal. We will help you find your brother. He must be somewhere around. Don't worry.

Mumma: Haan beta. Suvi you help her find her brother while we will be here with Madhu's mother.

Suvreen and Madhu leave in search of Raj.

Here, RK stops hearing to Raj. He turns back and sits next to him.

RK: So? Tell me?

Raj: Actually my sister is leaving me. She is going to Bangalore, leaving me all alone. That is why I came here. I cannot see my sister leave me behind. My one sister has already left me. She wanted to become famous. She has left me, my sister and my mom all alone. She is now an actress.

Listening to the words "Famous" and "Actress" he is boiling in anger. He hated the very world of Showbiz. After his father left his mother just for one famous actress, he hated everything related to it. He felt as though even Raj is going to face all that he faced. He did not know why but he felt all this was because of his sister who is leaving him. He could not see Raj like this. He did not want anyone let alone Raj face all that he had to face. He decides to stop Raj's sister from going. He thought Raj's second sister too was leaving behind her family just for fame and for being an actress.

Here Madhu and Suvreen are searching all vigorously for Raj. They could not find him anywhere. They did not know where to find him. Madhu sits down on the ground all shattered. Suvreen tries to console her. Yuvraj, sees Suvreen consoling Madhu. He sees that Madhu was all shattered. Suvreen was single handedly helping her out. Yuvraj rushes to the place.

Yuvraj: What happened? Why is she crying so badly?

Suvreen: Please help me out. She has lost her young brother. We are trying to find him but then we are not able to find him anywhere.

Yuvraj: Okay, but she looks weak. I think we first need to make fer feel better. Do you have any idea of where she was going to? And about her family?

Suvreen: No. I don't know where she is going to. But then my parents are with her mother.

Yuvraj and Suvreen then slowly take Madhu to the nearby Chair.

Yuvraj: Listen, you take care of her. And also if possible take her to her family. Tell me all you know about her brother. I will find him. Here take my number, we can be in touch. (He turns towards Madhu) I know you are upset. But then please don't worry, everything will be fine. I assure you that your brother will be with you in no time.

All this while Suvreen could just stare at Yuvraj. She was wondering, how could someone be so good? How could someone think about a stranger so much? She did not know why but she had started feeling something very good about this guy, who she had just met.

Yuvraj left from there after knowing all that Suvreen knew about Raj. He started looking for him.

Here, RK asks him to tell where his family was. He moves towards Raj's family. On the way, they came across Madhu and Suvreen who were sitting all worried in the chair. Madhu suddenly sees Raj from a distance. She feels a wave of happiness blow over her. She just gets up and runs towards her. (Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Gum title track in the BG) She hugs Raj, crying. She starts crying very badly. RK was lost seeing this concern and love Madhu had for Raj. But, then he suddenly remembered Raj's words. He did not know that Madhu was going to SBU, but he thought that he is leaving behind her brother to just be an actress. He did not want Raj to lose his sister, who he loves so much. Madhu after hugging Raj, looks up to RK.

Madhu: Thank you. Thank you so much for bringing my brother back. (Crying)

RK: Bas. Stop this drama for yours at once. (All were shocked including Raj) You really love him? If you did then you would have not decided to leave behind you brother for just being an actress.

Raj: But?

RK: No champ. Let me deal it. (to Madhu) What do you think being an actress is everything? Actresses are the worst people I have seen. All you people just know is to vreak relationships. You don't have any values. You don't have a heart. You know is fame and money. You don't realize the meaning of family.

Madhu could not tolerate it. She knew that he had mistaken, but then she could not take such insult on the profession of an actress. She could not take it because her own sister was an actress. In directly RK was insulting her sister.

Madhu: Stop it at once. Not a single word against actress. Who do you think you are? You found my brother thank you for that.

Saying this she leaves from there leaving behind an angry RK and a confused Suvreen.

Suvreen: What was this Gannu ji? I was so happy that Madhu found her brother and at that very instance you brought this twist? How could this guy speak so rude to her? Madhu said that she was going to join SBU. Then why was he telling that she wants to be an actress? Who is he after all? Gannu ji, why is this so confusing? And wait what about Yuvraj? He must be searching for Raj. I should call him right away.

Suvreen dials Yuvraj's number.

Yuvraj: Hello.

Suvreen: Hello. This is Suvreen Guggal. Actually, Madhu found Raj. He was right here in the airport.

Yuvraj: Oh tikh hein. I will come there right away.

Suvreen: Okay bye.

Suvreen disconnects the call and walks towards Madhu and both the families.


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Posted: 12 years ago
my fav scene... She turns to walk when suddenly Arnav grabs her from her wrist and pulls her towards him. All she could do was to just collide to his hard chest. She looked into those evil eyes. They were filled with rage and anger. He was turning red with anger.

gosh this was soo intense...i loved khushi's character the best the way she is described shez a strong girl...ww i luv her confidence


damn this was the bestedt dialog i jus luvd it

Yuvraj: Now she is the one who deserves to be ASR's girlfriend. Lavanya jaise tho hazaron mil jayengi. But it would be hard to find a girl like her. She best suits my bhai.


i really loved suvreen and madhus bonding i think they will make good frnz...


please dnt make yuvreen so guddy guddy mushy mushy pair...and please lyk in d show dnt make suvi be crazy abt him...
please even give them tht intense walla scenes!!!...tht jus my opinion

but manish ur update was so osum👏
keep up the gud work...all the emotions were so well expressed hats off buddy!!!!😃



Edited by chaichil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey manii ..
gr8 uppdate ., but ii think . u emphasized more on arshi , left other two most important char ..
khair .. anyhow . long n satisfying update ..
best scene was vn rk was conslng raj .. nvr saw his dis avtar in serial so far ..
n uvi i think h eneeds more attention of urs wrighting skills .. bcoz bhai wo cheeta hai ../. social worker nahi ..
n anjali was so sweet
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi1112

hey manii ..

gr8 uppdate ., but ii think . u emphasized more on arshi , left other two most important char ..
khair .. anyhow . long n satisfying update ..
best scene was vn rk was conslng raj .. nvr saw his dis avtar in serial so far ..
n uvi i think h eneeds more attention of urs wrighting skills .. bcoz bhai wo cheeta hai ../. social worker nahi ..
n anjali was so sweet
:)



Thank you di. And ya I know even I felt that it was more Arshi this time. The thing was that these two already had a meeting na so I could take it furthur..but the other two this was the first meet...But I think I made a mistake by not making their first meet special. And ya I know RKs this caring side was not shown in the TV...I thought let me bring a twist...and I think it did work...and About Yuvi 😆...Yes di I know made him look more like a social worker than hero...but then I just wanted Suvi to fall for him now...and I had no clue how to make them meet...so I found this Raj missing wala situation...😆...So dont worry next time I ll give importance to Yuvi and also to Rishbala and Yuvreen..!! 😃...and Anjali is after all di na? So she has to be sweet like all my sweet dis in India Forums...like you, moni di, Kim di, ros di, Sujai Rohit di, Tashaveli di, etc..!!! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update . Thanks for the pm . Tc.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oho.. k read all ..
and now he becomes her senior???seriosly

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