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Short update

    Tulsi manages to get the envelope back from Abhir. She decided to keep it with her to keep it safe. Lakshya & KT have a romantic moment and are caught by Mohini. 😳 Eklavya's party in full swing, Karan reminded of Nandini seeing Lakshya and KT….
  • Abhir starts to announce how he is going to be a part of the Virani family when Sahil stops him and starts the expose!!!!!!!!!

    WHEEEEEEE! FUN EPISODE!!!!!!!! DO WATCH IT!!!!!!

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Same scene as last week…. Abhir takes the envelope from Joydeep and is in a croner, about to open it. Karan comes there and Abhir turns around, shocked.
K (looking at the envelope) : What is this?
A: Oh, this? This is a personal letter.
K: Oh, I just wanted to invite you to Eklavya's party…
A: Of course, you invite me and I don't come?
K: I will give you the contract papers there…
A: Ok….
Karan leaves…

Abhir maarofies usual ghisa pitta dialogue of how he will ruin Viranis…Blah blah blah….Like whatever dude…

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Cut to Tulsi-Sahil….

T: You sure you had the envelope? If the truth doesnt come out, Sahil, we will have to watch thr ruin of our family in silence…
Sahil looks disturbed…. Lakshya comes there….
L: You are here dad? Cmon! Join the party!!! By the way, did you get your letter?
S: Letter?!?!!? Where?!!? Where is it?
L: You had dropped it and I found it…. I had given it to KT to give it to you….
Sahil looks for KT and finds her there…
S: KT, where's that letter?
KT: Oh, I gave it to Joydeep….
Sahil finds Joydeep who tells Sahil how Abhir snatched the letter from him….

Sahil is upset. Tulsi finds him.
T: What happened?
S: What I feared, Badi maa, that very thing has happened…The letter is in Abhir's hands
They look to the door and see Abhir starting to leave….
T: I'll get it from him…..

Tulsi stops Abhir at the door….
A: Good I saw you dadi, I wanted to meet you before I left.
T: Abhir, you have a thing that's not yours…
A: What are you talking about Dadi?
T: You have Sahil's letter….
A (panicky) : Letter? What letter? I don't have any letter…
T: Joydeep said he gave it to you to give Sahil… Check your pocket, maybe it's there….
Abhir is forced to take the letter out of his pocket and give the letter to Tulsi…
A: Oh, here it is…Maybe I didn't pay attention…
A: Uhhhh, dadi, about that announcement?
T: Yes, it will be at tonight's party…. Ill see you then….

Abhir leaves shamefacedly….

Sahil comes to Tulsi and says – "thank god we got it, otherwise all our work would have gone in vain…"
Tulsi says she will keep the letter for safekeeping.

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Ganga is outside. She tries to start her car but it refuses to start. Sahil comes there.
S: What happened? The car is spoilt? Ill leave you…
Ganga gets out of the car slowly….
G: No thanks… You already "left" me 20 years back on a path…And as you will see , I am ahead on this path right now…Till here, I have travelled alone…. And I'll do it alone in the future also….

Ganga leaves… Tripti comes there….
Tr: Doesn't it feel bad to see that who you left….. She left you today? But you also are an idiot, you get hit 1000 times, you wont leave her…

Sahil looks on disturbed.

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Back at SN….

KT is in her room and is struggling to tie the dori at the back of her salwar…
Lakshya stares at her admiringly for some time and then knocks…
KT looks back at him questioningly… Staring session ensues…. Flashbacks of cliff scene, dancing before the fire scene, haldi scene, lotsa other scenes…Blah blah blah…

Lakshya comes inside the room and stand in front of KT…. Staring continues…

* HO HUM! Goes to toilet, gets dinner, eats dinner, washes plate, does homework and comes back, idiots are still staring*

KT starts to leave…. But Lakshya puts his hands on KT's shoulders and holds her in front of him for some time…KT looks at him….He moves closer and puts his arms around her neck and ties the dori for her, looking into her eyes…He keeps his arms there….
KT pushes his hands off her and walks away….

KT: Don't worry abt me… I cant take care of myself….Go to your girls…They must be waiting for you….
Lakshya walks towards her and leans closer to her, and says in a low voice in her ear….
L: Well, now it's too late…. (smiles shyly)
KT looks at him….

(OMG AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! * sniff * Cries from happinessā€¦ā€¦šŸ˜³)

Suddenly….
* AHEM AHEM *
They turn to see Mohini at the door….
M: Uhhhhh….. I didn't disturb you, did I? Come down now, the party is starting…. Do all this later...

She has this weird expression on her face, which is neither happy for them, neither disturbed that these 2 like each other…. Hmm… I'm sure she is gonna go and tattle to Tripti now…. UGHHHHHHHH!!!! 😔

KT leaves quickly… Lakshya stands there, a bit flustered….He doesn't grin as usual when KT leaves…..He just looks very serious….


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Abhir is wishing Eklavya happy birthday and gives him something with diamonds in it….
(OK, this guy need to think up more original gifts….Mard ho yaa aurat, har kisii ko diamonds hi deta rehta hai…How boring!)

A: happy bday, Eklavya…
E: You didn't need to do all this…
A: Time is very impt. May these diamonds light your life up…. ( I think it's a diamond studded watch or sumthing….)

Mihir tells Eklavya to cut the cake…. Eklavya cuts cake….Everyone fed cake... Lalalalalla…..Lakshya makes Eklavya dance. Nakul and Joydeep join in.Lakshya and Eklavya slow dance like a man and womanā€¦šŸ˜† Eklavya pulls KT in and Lakshya and KT do a lil bhangra type dance…..

Karan sees Lakshya and KT dancing and is reminded of Nandini…Flashback timeeee….

A beautiful song plays with the lyrics "Main zinda hoon, lekin kahan zindagi hai…??"

* Again, Nimmi goes to kitchen, cooks up something to eat….Comes back, still flashback time…. Goes back into kitchen…..Finally flashback is over…. *

Abhir clears his throat to make speech * Nimmi gets out her rotten tomatoes….. *

A: You know, what makes Eklavya the best human being, is that he is born in this family. And now, I, too am going to be a part, and I hope that it will be soon… I cant describe how I felt after becoming a business partner with Mr Karan Virani… I hope what I am about to say, you all will accept.
Ek: Why not? (hugs Abhir * NAHIIIIIIIII! DON'T TOUCH THIS DIRTY INSAAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!! 🤢 ABHI EKU KO DETTOL MEIN NAHAANA PADEGAAA!!!!!!!)

Sahil claps in that slow, mocking way….
S: Wow! Realtionships, family... That was a nice lecture… Do you even know the importance of the words you just used?
A: Look, what I'm gonna say is important, I think it's better not to bring our personal fight in here now….
S: What fight….? I have something to show you all... We will see what you say after that…
Tanya: Sahil…What are you talking about???
S: Story starts when this person comes into our life and tries to get the same contract that Karan wins every year…. Karan if u remember, he tried to bribe the official so we would think he will do anything to get what he wants… Then there was a theft in Karan's office… I get there but I can't catch the thief. But I get the thief at Abhir's party… And turns out that the guy is Abhir's driver…. !!!! Abhir, you didn't tell me that your driver had filled contract tender…?
Then, Abhir tries his best to get into our family. He sacrifices himself and takes his name out of the tender. so Karan gets it. And that is exactly what happens… Karan feels responsible for Abhir, so he gives Abhir an offer. Abhir becomes partner in out company. Wht more do you need Abhir?
Now Abhir knows all our management secrets… So he can tell his boss…. Wow….! What a plan!
Abhir is shocked through out this whole lecture, as are Karan, and Tanya and Bhoomi are confused and surprised.
A: On what basis are you saying all this? I know you hate me….But I didn't thaink you would resort to all this…. What reasons do you have for all this?
S: I love my brother and I respect him and his work.. He made it to this position by his hard work and I cant bear to seea disgusting, vile person like you get all of that….
K: What are you saying, Sahil….?
S: I warned you Karan, I knew he wasn't right form the very start….He talks about all these values and relationships…. But he doesn't give a damn about them…. Only one thing is important to him…Those shares…. He wants to own them … For those shares, he arranged your accident , Karan!

Karan ,Tanya, Bhoomi, Eklavya, Lakshya are shocked…


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Comments: Prettttyyyy great episode! Something for everyone! Lakshya kt romance for us die hard fanatics, who dont tire even of the staring.... Eklavya is there pretty much a lot... K-N scenes! Sahil Ganga scene! Sahil kicking Abhirs evil asss!!!!!!!!!!! WHEEEEEEEEEE! I liked ittttttt!!!!!!!!!!!! FUN FUN FUNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!! šŸ˜› šŸ˜†

*EDIT* - I just realised that the Lakshya KT scene was an almost exact copy of of one I had written for our topic! The very very very FIRST STORY I HAD WRITTEN! Okay, that is FREAKY! 😲

Overall rating: 9.5/10 (.5 taken away for the excessive staring between Lakshya-KT and the often repeated Karan Nandini flashbacks)


Hope you liked the update,
Nimmi 😊



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Posted: 18 years ago
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THank u soooooooooooooooo very much ............... šŸ‘ lovely update as ever.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Episode thnx for the update sweetie loved reading it!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnnnnnnx u sooo much great update!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nimmi, i love you...def made my day!

this morning was driving to uni, traffic as usual...dad tells me a short cut, ends up being a very looonnggg cut. end result? was very very late! chalo, at least there was something good that happened, can't wait to watch the episode! look forward to tomo's update! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to the Lakshya-KT scene. And I'm glad that Abhir got exposed. I was sure that Ekta would drag this on forever and ever, but atleast now the story has made some progress. I can't wait to see Bhoomi's reaction tomorrow! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsome update... šŸ‘ Thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely update Nimmi šŸ‘ šŸ˜† I love your little comments! šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for the update. And i feel that abhir would have changed the content of the envelop and nobody will believe sahil.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh yeah the two stories are really similar

ur updates are really gd especially the comments lol

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