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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :)
aisha has typhoid :( hope she gets well soon
love rathore's concern for aisha
chotu and shree are so funny 😆 love the way they are trying to figure out what's cooking between rathore and aisha...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

FAB update..

wah ..riya ne sir ki jahgha arjun bulana shuru kr diya hai...
I hope they find sik as soon as possible..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...!!!
loved it..!!
ooo aisha having typhoid..!!! hope she gets well soon..!!!
hmm so rathore took aisha to his home...!!!
loved shree and chotu convo..!!!
so sik back to india...!!! ab ni bachega ye etf se...!!!
continue soon...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk i hvnt commented for last few parts bt hv read every part... well written... hope misunderstanding b/w Ariya nd RR vl b cleared soon... Choree vl b dead if Rathore cums to knw abt wat they thk abt him nd Aisha... waiting for nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 28


(Rathore arjun ko samander kinare le jaata hai'.dono car se nikalte hai')

Arjun : hum yahaan kya kr rhe hai'😲

Rathore : Mujhe nhi pta k log kaise krte hai'.Pr ye samandar hai..ye kisi aur shehar me nhi milta ye'jab bhi aaoge tumhe yahi milega'.bina rok tok k tumhari baat sunega'kabhi shikayat nhi karega'.apne dil ki baat kisi aur se to tum karoge nhi'pr iss se kr skte ho'.ye kisi ko nhi batayega'.(Arjun rathore k taraf dekhne lagta hai')

Rathore : aise mat dekho'..maine bhi ye kahi suna tha'.socha tumhare kaam ki hai'.isliye bol rha hu'chalo tumhe ghar chod du

Arjun : jab tumne kaha hai to aaj iss se baat to krni hi padegi ' Tum jao Main khud chala jaunga Sam..(iss baar sam sun ne pr dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai..iss baar koi bhi ek dusre se aankhne nhi churta)

Rathore : Ok thik hai' Kal ETF office me milte hai'.

Arjun : Hmm'.

(Rathore Wahaan se nikalta hai'Arjun wahi tehlana shuru krta hai'.Arjun kabhi sagar ki lehro ko to kabhi wahaan ghum rhe logo ko dekhta hai'.BG Mujhko Ye zindagi'..)

(Dusri taraf rathore k ghar pr)

Riya : to ye sari baat hai'.hmmm' confirm to krna hoga'.

Chotu : pr karenge kaise????? Aisha se direct puchenge to batayegi nhi'.aur rathore sir se puchna matlab billi k gale me ghanti bandhna hai'.

Shree : aur wo risk hum me se koi nhi le skta'.

Riya : direct nhi puch skte'.to kya hua'.indirect puchne k bahut se tarike hai

Chotu & shree : Matlab???????😲

(Riya dono ko kuch samjhati hai'.teeno room me aate hai'..teeno ko dekh kr)

Aisha : aisi kaun si baatein ho rhi thi'.mere bina😊

(Teeno ek dusre ko dekhte hai')

Riya : wo woh...hum log ye discuss kr rhe the k tumhara khayal kaise rakha jaaye

Aisha : mujhe khayal ki zarurat nhi'main ab theek hu'.tum log aise karoge to mujhe sach me lagega k main bimar hu..(tabhi aisha ki nazar riya k hath pr padhti hai..)

Aisha : ye kya hua??????😲

Riya : wo khas kuch nhi'.arre almira k upper se suitcase nikal rhi thi wahaan sheesha rakha tha uss se cut ho gya'.ab bilkul theek hai'.

Aisha : kya theek hai'mujhse zyada tumhe apna khayal rakhne ki zarurat hai

(chotu aur shree like ye log nhi sudhrenge)

Shree : tum dono ka khayal rakhne k liye hum dono hai naa

Chotu : ye baat shree ne ekdum sahi kahi

(tabhi masi sbke liye chai nasta lekar aati hai..)

Masi to shree, chotu and riya : ye nasta tum logo k liye hai'aisha ko mat dena

Riya : pr kyun?????😲

Masi : arre usse bukhar hai..uske liye daliya banaya hai'wo lati hu main'.

(masi daliya lene chali jaati hai'riya daliye k naam pr muh banati hai..)

Riya : uuhhh daliye'.yuck'.kaise khaogi'..(tabhi masi daliye k sath enter hoti hai..)

Masi : daliya swad k liye nhi sehat k liye khaya jaata hai'

Masi to Aisha : beta ye daliya khao..agar kisi aur cheez zarurat ho to bta dena'

(aisha masi se daliye leti hai..Masi jane lgti hai..aisha daliye side me rakhti hai'use aisa karte dekh)

Masi : naa..ye to tumhe abhi khana hoga'.thanda hone pr koi fyda nhi dega

(masi jaane lagti hai')

Aisha : masi rukiye naa'.hum logo k sath baithiye'.aap hamesha ki ghar me kaam me lagi rehti hai'.

(chotu, shree aur riya'teeno ek k baad ek fake khasna shuru krte hai..pr masi aur aisha ko smjh nhi aata k wo aisa kyun kr rhe hai')

Masi : riya??? Ye sab kya ho rha hai???????

Riya : kuch nhi masi' haan haan aap baitiye naa..hum sabko aapse baate krni hai'.

Masi to Aisha : Beta daliya khao

Aisha : Ji'.(aisha daliya khana start krti hai' sare chup hai'tabhi)

Riya : to main hi shuru krti hu'.😊

(sare haan me sar hilate hai..)

Riya : masi aapko aisha kaisi lagti hai'.(chotu aur shree ne ye nhi socha tha k riya aise direct puch legi'. Aur aisha is like k ye kya bol rhi hai'.)

Aisha to Riya(shockingly) : ye kya bol rhi ho???????😲

Riya to Aisha : tumhe kisi ne bataya nhi k khate whqt bolte nhi hai'.main to just puch rhi hu'tum itna shocked kyun ho rhi ho'

Aisha : ummhh nhi kuch nhi

Riya to Masi : haan to masi aap btao naa aisha aapko kaisi lgti hai''.

Masi : hmm.. Mere liye to sare bacche barabar..chahe wo tumhare boss sameer mera matlab tumhre rathore sir ho, riya tum ho, ya fir chotu, shree ya fir arjun hi kyun naa ho'..(arjun ka naam sun kr sabhi ekdusre ko dekhne lg jaate hai'but masi continues) aur aisha'. Ye sabse acchi bacchi hai'.maine kabhi isko kisi se naraz hote huye'ya fir nakhre marte huye nhi dekha'

Masi to Riya : jaise tum abhi daliye k liye muh bana rhi thi..dekho ise iski shakal bta rhi hai..k ise psnd nhi fir bhi ye kha rhi hai'.

Shree : Bas'aaj k liye itni tariff bahut hai'.(tabhi rathore room me enter krta hai'rathore ko nhi pta kya baat chal rhi hai'usne bas shree ki last line suni hai..)

Rathore : Kiski tariff ho rhi hai'.(riya is like jaise use yahi mauka chahiye tha)

Riya : Aisha ki'.😊

Rathore : Hmmm

Rathore to Aisha : Ab tabiyat kaisi hai

Aisha : jee theek hu main''..

(riya though : itna thanda response'kuch to kehte..abhi bulwate hai')

Rathore to Riya : tum kya sochne lgi

Riya : nhi'kuch nhi'maine socha aapse bhi puch lu'.

Rathore : kya ???????

Riya : Masi ne to hume bta dia'aap bhi bta do aapko aisha kaisi lagti hai?????

(riya ka swal sun kr sabki halaat kharab'k isne ye kya puch lia..wo bhi direct'iss baar aisha ko khasi uthti hai'.wo bhi zabardast wali'rathore table k pass hi khada hai' wo glass me pani bhar ko aisha ko deta hai')

Rathore to Aisha : are you ok?????

Aisha : jeee

Rathore to Riya : Faltu k swal puch kr time waste krne se accha hai k tum bhi rest karo aur aisha ko bhi karne do'. Tumhe kal se office jaana hai..behtar rahega aaram karo'(riya kuch reply deti uss se pehle rathore room se nikal jaata hai'rathore k room se bahar nikalte whqt uske face pr ek halki si smile hoti hai)

Shree to Aisha : ek min'..(shree riya aur chotu k lekar side me jaata hai')

Chotu to Riya : tum to hume marwaogi'.aise direct puchne se agar sir ne batana hota to hum kab ka puch chuke hote'.

Shree : unka gussa tumhe nhi pta hume pta hai..aur hume apni jobs bhi pyari hai'hume tumhe shamil hi nhi krna chahiye tha

Riya : chill guys'. Theek hai' aage se khayal rakhungi'.

Chotu : pakka..

Riye : pakka done'.

Aisha : koi mujhe batayega..ye sab ho kya rha hai

Shree : kuch nhi''..ab hum logo ko ghar chalna chahiye'tum aaram karo

(koi reply naa dena pade..isliye chotu aur shree wahaan se nikal lete hai')


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai, first congrats for your thought, and it is entirely different from others, i am newbie in this form, i don't now what to write? But i couldn't stop myself to tell that i really like your ff, enjoyed it,
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :)
loved chotu, shree and riya's bonding
poor aisha had to eat daliya
loved their conversation with massi
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
I lov the trio of riya chotu and shree ...
loved the concern of rathore for Aisha when she coughed...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...!!!
lol rathore talking aisha's dialouge to arjun...!!!😆
loved the bonding between shree chotu and riya...!!!
ooo ayesha had to eat daliya...!!!
wah riya ne to direct hi question kar lia rathore se...!!!😆
cant wait for the next part...!!!
continue soon..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 29


Next Day in ETF Office'conference room

(chotu, riya aur shree..kuch paper work kr rhe hai'tabhi rathore aur arjun thoda gusse me conference room me enter hote hai')

Rathore : Logo ne ye kya mazak lga rakha hai'roz roz ye phool, ye nonsense😡😡

Arjun : koi fyada nhi hai..jo bhi hai wo bahut chalak hai'. Aur syad wo iss intzaar me hai k kb hum ise seriously lena band krte hai'.

Riya murmuring : to lo na seriously main bhi to yahi chahti hu😆😆

(shree riya ko chup rehta ka ishara krta hai..)

Riya : pr hum log aapki help nhi karenge'. Ye aap logo ka personal matter hai'aur ETF ka iss se koi lena dena nhi hai'

(Arjun gusse me riya ko dekhta hai')

Riya : darti nhi hu main kisi se'.naa hi main khud aap logo ki help karungi'naa hi team me se karne dungi'..zyada pta lagane ka shauk hai'.to dono khud milkar pta lgaiye'..

Rathore : pura month ho gya inn phoolo ko aate huye..hume pta lagana hoga to hum khud lga lenge'.. behas nhi chahiye mujhe yahaan'. Aur ab thoda kaam ki baatein kr le'

Arjun to Shree : RAW se kuch information mili?????? Terrorists ka khatra abhi puri tarah se tala nhi hai'.

Rathore : Arjun is right'. Interpol se khabar mili hai k sikander aane wale 6 mahino me India aane ki koshish krega'hume use india me hi pakadna hai'iss baar wo bach kr nhi jaana chahiye

(riya sikander ka naam sun kr kisi soch me dub jaati hai'.)

Chotu : pr sir'. Aisa bhi to ho skta hai k sikander inn 6 mahino k baad aaye'kyunki sikandar ki wahi information leak hoti hai'wo sikandar leak krna chahta hai'.

Shree : right sir.. last time bhi aisi news k chalte pure desh me high alreat ho gya tha aur sikandar aaya nhi'..

(Arjun ko roshni k sath akhiri k pal yaad aane lagte hai..shree realize k usne galti se hi sahi pr galat baat boli hai'.rathore situation sambhalata hai')

Rathore : galat shree'.sikandar aaya'pr itne high alreat k baad bhi wo yahaan se bach kr nikal gya'agar wo nhi aaya hota'.to rauf lala se wo apne kaam naa krwa pta'.

(riya ko chod kr sabko pta k rauf lala ne arjun k sath kya kiya'tabhi rathore ki nazar riya pr jati hai)

Rathore : riya tum kya soch rhi ho'ya fir dhyan lga kr dekh rhi ho k sikandar kahaan hai'

Riya : sikandar'.(kafi sochte huye) Ye naam maine kahi suna hai'.

Arjun (with anger) : Suna hai matlab'.ye bahut bada mafia don hai'.aur india me bacche bacche ko uske bare me pta hai😡😡

Riya : wrong'.india me nhi'. maine iska naam talibaan me suna'.

(Riya achanak se chockte huye)

Riya : Oh shit''.aap logo ko pta hai'India me sikandar k bare me actual me koi information nhi hai'..use kai desho ki police dhund rhi hai'.aur chotu is right sikander ki wahi information leak hoti hai jo wo krwana chahta hai'.matlab sikandar ne ye information jaan bujh kr leak karwai hai'.sochne wali baat hai kyun???????

Riya to Chotu : maine jo card dia tha tum logo ko jab hum log pehli baar mile the wo kahaan hai???????

Arjun : wo card to RAW ko bhej dia gya'.uss card ko achanak yaad krne ka kya matlab riya????????

(Riya arjun ki baat ka koi reply nhi deti'.)

Riya to Shree : shree tumne use kahi copy kia tha kya?????

Shree : haan maine copy kia tha'mere pass hai..usme bahut si aisi files hai jo abhi bhi open nhi ho rhi hai'card high protected tha'.files copy to ho gyi pr open nhi huyi'.

Arjun to Riya : pr insab ka sikander k case se kya matlab??????😡😡

(Riya again koi reply nhi deti arjun ki baat ka'.)

Riya to Shree : wo mujhe do ek baar'

Shree : ok'shree apne bag me search krne lagta hai'

Chotu to riya : Riya..arjun sir tumse kuch puch rhe hai'.

Riya (with anger): Chotu syad tum bhul rhe ho'main riya nhi piya hu'.aur jin ko mere riya kehlane pr aitraaz hai'.unko koi zarurat nhi hai mujhe riya bulane ki'.aur unke riya kehne se main sun ne wali bhi nhi hu'.Mera real name piya hai piya mukharjee'..😡😡😡

(koi aur kuch react krta iss se pehle)

Rathore : bas'' koi behas nhi'.tum dono (arjun aur riya ko) apni problems apas me solve karo'..mujhe bacche apni team me nhi chahiye'ye bahut sensitive case hai'.aur ye case abhi puri tarah hamare pass bhi nhi hai..

Rathore to riya : tumhe sab riya hi bulayenge..chahe kisi ko psnd ho ya naa psnd ho'.ab hum case discuss kr le

Shree to riya : ye lo card'

(Riya shree se card leti hai'.pehle wo apne laptop se net disconnect krti hai'then card insert krti hai'.file open krne pr password mangta hai..riya ek hi baar me sahi password daal deti hai..jis se sab hairaan reh jaate hai')

Shree to Riya : ye tumne kaise kia????? main to kitne dino se try kr rha tha

Riya : sikandar''.maine kaha tha naa k maine ye naam kahi suna hai'.wo terrorists attack me uska bahut bada hath hai'..sikandar har desh me alag alag naam se kaam krta hai'uska india me koi khas business nhi hai'.(interrupted by chotu)

Chotu : khas business nhi hai se matlab?????? Tumhe pta hi kya hai??????

Riya : mujhe pta bhi nhi krna hai'.wo dusre desho me india se zyada bada aur zyda powerful don hai'..wo bhi syad isliye kyunki india me har insan bikau nhi hai..yahan log sirf paiso k liye kaam nhi krte'kaam ki baat ye hai..I'm not sure but Interpol ki khabar galat hone k chances hai'.ye khabar sikandar ne leak khud karwayi hai..ye confirm rha..ye card mujhe Taliban me uss whqt mila jab meri identity un logo pr khul chuki thi'..uss whqt RAW ne mujhe wapas aane ko kaha tha'pr main aisi condition me thi k mera aana zyada khatarnak tha..tab ye maine churaya tha'.aur sikandar apna plan kabhi nhi badalta'.

Arjun : iska matlab ye sikandar k india aane ki khabar jaan bujh k interpol tak pahuchai gyi hai'.sikandar k plan ka kuch pta nhi

Rathore : Damn it! Ek roshni ki kiran dikhi thi wo bhi jhuti

Riya : jhuti nhi'''ye card hai naa'.abhi to ek file open huyi hai..mujhe whqt chahiye main sari files open krke unhe decodes krke apko batati hu..k sikander ki kya planning hai'.

Arjun : hume commissioner sir ko batana hoga k ye khabar jhuti hai

Rathore : You are right'.

Riya : per pehle hume sikandar ki puri planning samjhni padegi'.bina iske hum prove nhi kr paayenge k interpol ki khabar jhuti hai'..isme kafi whqt lagega'main sabke liye coffee lekar aati hu

(riya jaate jaate chotu aur shree ko ishara krke jaati hai'aur dono ko kuch yaad aata hai'.rathore aur arjun riya k laptop pr jo file riya ne open ki hai wo dekh rhe hai'.)

Chotu to Shree : yaar pta nhi aisha kaisi hai?????? Uski tabiyat theek huyi ya nhi'

Shree : arre pagal hai..wo rathore sir k ghar pr hai to theek hi hogi..

Chotu : rathore sir doctor nhi hai jo unke ghar pr hone se koi theek ho jayega

Shree : aisha sir ki special guest hai'.to use theek to hona hi hoga'.

Arjun thought : ye log aisha ka naam lekar rathore ko tease krne ki koshish kyun kr rhe hai????? Jabki sach to kuch aur hi hai'.aur aisha rathore k ghar pr kya kr rhi hai'.

(Rathore realized k shree aur chotu aisha ka naam lekar use tease krne ki koshish kr rhe hai'Rathore give them a look)

Rathore : ye kya faltu ki bakwas lga rakhi hai..aur special guest se matlab??????

Shree : wo wo wo sir'jab riya hospital se aapke ghar gyi thi to riya aapki special guest thi'ab aisha hospital se aapke ghar me hai to wo bi to special guest huyi aapki'

Arjun (shockingly) : hospital se????? aisha ko kya hua??????😲😲

Rathore : use typhoid hai.. aur jab hum log uske ghar pahuche to wo faint padi thi..uska khayal rakhne k liye koi nhi hai'isliye main use ghar le aaya..(tabhi riya sabke liye coffee lekar enter krti hai')

Riya : pr aapko itni safai dene ki kya zarurat'aapka ghar hai aap jise chahe apne ghar me laa skte hai' aur jinko jo samjhna hai wo samjh skte hai'(ye line specially arjun k liye thi)

Arjun : mujhe kuch bhi samjhne ki zaruat nhi..main janta hu rathore hamesha se hi aisa raha hai'.

(now arjun is more confused'k aakhir jo use dikh rha hai wo sach hai ya fir jo baki sab keh rhe hai wo sach hai')

Rathore : tum kya sochne lage arjun

Arjun : kuch nhi'. hume jaldi hi iss card ki information decode krni hogi

(Riya again apne laptop pr lag jati hai'..sara din aise hi nikal jaata hai..kafi derr ho gyi hai'riya abhi bhi busy hai)

Rathore : chalo ghar chalte hai..baki kal kr lena

Riya : baki to tab hoga jab shuru hoga'kafi protected hai'.shree aur main kab se lage huye hai fir bhi nhi kr paa rhe hai'..sikandar k plan isliye fail nhi hote kyunki uske pass police se zyada qualified aur qualified teqnical log hai''

(tabhi rathore ka cell bajta hai'.rathore call attend krne k baad'turant ek no dial karta hai'.)

Rathore on phone : hello doctor..main sameer rathore bol rha hu'.aap to nurse bhejne wale the naa'ghar pr'.pr nurse aaj ghar nhi aayi hai'.aise to aisha ki tabiyat aur bigad jayegi'..

Doctor : main pta krta hu aur batata hu'.

Rathore : pls pta kariye aur btaiye (rathore call cut krta hai')

Riya : kya hua????????

Rathore : wo doctor nurse bhejne wale the naa hi nurse subah aayi naa hi abhi tak pahuchi hai'.aise to aisha ki tabiyat aur bigad jayegi..uska typhoid already kharab ho chuka hai..

(tabhi rathore ka cell fir bjta hai'.call attend krne k baad')

Rathore : riya ghar chalte hai'.baki kaam kal dekh lena'aur ye baat to tay rhi k interpol ki khabar galat hai'isliye hamre pss time hai'.

Riya : g''.pr doctor ne kya kaha

Rathore : wo nurse aisha k ghar gyi thi'aur aisha ki landlady ne koi jawab nhi dia isliye nurse wapas aa gyi'.pta nhi dunia me kaise kaise log bhare hai'har galti k liye dusro pr blame dalna jaise inki adat ho gyi hai

(Arjun ye sab sun kr shocked hai.. k rathore aisha k liye aise react kyun kr rha hai'arjun wahaan se chala jata hai)

Riya to shree : shree mujhe ye card do'.main ghar me bhi try karungi'.

Shree : okkk

(sabhi ghar jaane lagte hai'chotu aur shree pehle hi nikal jaate hai'arjun apne cabin me baitha hai''.

Rathore : riya chale

Riya : g'(riya ek baar arjun ko uske cabin me dekhti hai'aur fir chali jaati hai'.)

Raste me

Rathore : kya soch rhi ho

Riya : kuch khas nhi'Arjun sir k bare me'.mjhe wo insan samjh nhi aata'maine bahut kuch socha tha k main usne kahungi pr jab mauka mila to kuch bhi nhi kaha'pta nhi kyun???I think riya was right'.jitna dikhte hai wo uss se zyada ujle huye hai'unko samjhna bahut hi muskil hai'

Rathore : zyada socho mat'.


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Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 12 years ago

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