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Posted: 12 years ago

hello evryone m back wid d update

this is my VALENTINES DAY gift for all of u

HAPPY VALLENTINES DAY TO ALL OF U

thnx for all ur comments n likes dey really motivates me thnx aloot

Part-25

Nai jaan me kehna ni chahta me yeh keh raha hun

Acha said madhu busy njoyng d icecream n den realized wht he said n luked towards a smirking RK

Acha toh tume lagta h k me bachi hun,aur bachon jaisi harkate karti hun saying this madhu got up n came to his side of d table

RK jst nodded his head smiling

Okh toh ab me tume dikhati hun k bachpana kya hota h

Saying dis madhu smudged d remaning icecream on RK

N started laughing while RK was left fuming

Yeh kya kiya tumne MADHU???

Tumi ne toh kaha tha k me bachi hun h na??

Toh bache toh aise hi shararatein karte h saying dis MADHU started to laugh loudly holding her stomach while RK got really annoyed

Agar tumhari icecream party ho gai ho toh chale

Nai who ek aur icecream khani h muje yeh wali toh kharab ho gain a

Thk h toh tum baitho me jaa raha hun saying dis RK jst moved out cleaning his face

madhu kept looking at him n felt bad tht he left her like tht but choosed to ignore tht for a while n njoy her icecream

She ordered a new icecream n strted n joining it

While RK was real mad at her for her stupidity

He jst sat in d car

Cursing her

Samjhti kya h khud ko??

Jab dekho tang karti h,n aj toh hadh hi kardi

Ek toh itni thand me barish me madam ko icecream khani thi n jab khilai toh madam k tewar toh dkho

Me isse itna pyar karta hun na issi baat ka fayda uthati h

Ab me bhi isse btata hun k rishab kundra kya cheez h

RK sat dere cursing her for a while

N den suddenly realized

Bht late ho gaya h n yeh abi tak aayi kyun nai

Kahin use kuch ho toh'??/

Nai nai aise nai ho sakta muje use wahan akela nai chodna chaiye tha

RK ran towards d icecream parlour to see wht was taking her tht much of time whn he saw 2 guys fully drunk were trying to mis behave wid her

RK felt like strangling them

When RK went out madhu was busy njoying her icecream n didn't saw d drunkyards coming towards her

Hey beautiful njoyng d icecream alone???

Thts not gud wait we ll give u company madhu got scared realizing tht dey were drunk n started to get up

But one of dem held her hand stoping her from moving

Hey babes were r u going???

Lets njoy

Leave my hand

Oh sweety don't panic we ll hav fun

N saying dis dey stared to move closer holding her hand

While madhu started moving back tears dropped from her eyes

Leave me I said

If my husband saw u he ll not leave u

D guys started laughing

Husband oh babes we didn't see ur husbnd anywer so stop fooling us

N let ur husband come v ll deal wid him

N saying dis one of dem tried to kiss her n dats when he felt a sharp blow on his ace

He looked up to see a fuming RK standing dere spitting fire

MADHU st hugged RK tight frightened of wht would hav happened if he wuldn't hav cum

While RK jst hugged her tight trying to comfort her

When one of dem tried to attaeck dem

RK jst put MADHU behind him

Hey who r u???thts our item for tonight so its bttr if u leave

RK jst punched him straight on his nose d guy stumbled back

Hey u

RK jst hitted d guy who tried to kiss his MADHU to no limit if MADHU wuld hav not stopped him he might hav killed him

RK pls stop he ll die RK pls listen

RK jst stopped listening to madhu's pleading n scared voice while madhu jst hugged him

RK took her out in d car n made her sit n gave her a water bottle

MADHU kept crying scared of wht happened n hugged RK once again

While RK shouted

Wht do u thnk u were doing dere alone???

Me toh bas icecream

Yah ri8

Mene mana kiya tha na

Lekin nai tum kyun meri sunogi

Tume toh hamesha apni man maanni karne ki addat h h na???

MADHU kept listening to him silentely while crying her eyes out

Icecream khani thi na tume toh lo jao khao icecream

Do u even realize wht wud hav happened??

Shouted RK getting no reply frm her

While MADHU meekly said

Isme meri kya galti tum hi muje akela chod ke''she ate rest of d words whn she noticed RK glaring at her

Vry gud ab isme bhi meri hi galti h kyun h na??????

MADHU nodded her head n den quickly shooked saying no seeing RK glaring at her

Tume har baat majak kyun lagti h MADHU????????

Agr tume kuch ho jata toh wht wud hav happened ??????

N kabi tumne mere bare me socha h k agar tume kuch ho jata toh mera kya hota??

Mujhpe kya beeti

Saying dis RK jst hugged her tight fearing tht he might loose her

whn MADHU said But tume kyun faraq padta tum to mujse nafrat

RK jst left her staring at her wid anger filled eyes

Do u really think tht MADHU k muje khushi hoti ya koi farak nai pata???

Tum muje bas itna hi samjh payi ho????

Do u really think I don't care asked RK looking really hurt by d way madhu made him feel

While madhu cursed herself for her big mouth realising she has hurt RK a lot

RK jst started d car

D rest of d journey was silent

MADHU tried to appoligise say sory but RK didn't bother he really felt miserable n hurt by her words

When dey reached hotel RK jst got out of d car n started to go towards d room while MADHU ran aftr him to catchup wid him

RK RK suno na I m sorry

I didn't mean it tht way m really sorry

RK didn't replied n entered d room n straight went to d washroom widout saying a word

He came back n lied down on his side facing his back towards MADHU n slept

MADHU felt really bad

Dis was d first time aftr dere marriage when dey slept widout talking n wishing goodni8 to eachother

Before dey use to fi8 but still dey use to talk to eachother but dis time she knew it was her fault

She kept luking at d sleeping RK n cursing her self

#jhalli kahin ki

Kya jarurat thi wo sab bolne ki???thodi dere agar chup reh jati toh kya chala jata tera????

Par nai tune toh chup rehna seekha hi nai h na???ab bhugat

Dkh kitna gussa ho gaya n hona bhi chaiye mene boli hi aisi baat,,,muje aisa nai bolna chaiye tha wo meri kitni fikar karta h mera kitna dhyan rakhta h india me bhi jab muje chot lagi thi toh kitne pyar se mera dhyan rakhta tha

Maanti hun k ladta h but dhyan toh rakhta h na mera n uss karan gadhe se bhi muje bacahaya tha n ek me hun k har baar use hi galt samjh leti hun aaj bhi dekho muje bachaya mere liye lada n mene kya kiya ulta use hi bol diya,,,,ab kya karun???

Haan ek kaam krti hun subh uthke use sorry bol dungi n use mana b lungi h na babaji???

Said geet looking upwards

MADHU lied down next to RK n slept aftr sumtime thinking abt d new ways to manofy RK

Thts it for now

precap

RK angry😡

n MADHU trying to manofy


Edited by amrinderdhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it !!!
very nice update !!! rk's possesiveness !!😳
but why have u written maan and geet in precap??
Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc
but precape mein maan geet kahan say agaye
amrinderdhami thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kendra

loved it !!!

very nice update !!! rk's possesiveness !!😳
but why have u written maan and geet in precap??



THANX DEAR
opps that was by mistake i hav corrected it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear..and happy valentines day...plz update next part soon dear..hw madhu wl convince RK...cnt wait for that
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lkd Rk's possesive part nd lukn 4ward 4 madhu manofy , but n precap u mentiond maan geet instead of rk madhu
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Posted: 12 years ago
this one was preetty gud compared to prvious ones bcoz i'm getting bored of madhu's childish behaviour. personlly i don't lijjke such poeople lol. need some maturity
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Posted: 12 years ago
Madhu will try to pacify RK...lets see what she would do now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rk is truly the best lover,friend & husband..😊Madhu is still kid..😛 Can't wait to see how Madhu

try to make RK forgive her..the style u write makes it more interesting..it feels so real..😃Continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update, continue soon :)

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