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Posted: 12 years ago
Just finished reading both updates.. Loved it 😃
When will she realize her love for RK
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Posted: 12 years ago
i didn't cmmntd on last 2 updates because nhok jhok OTT was getting boring, but this update was better. some sign of maturity lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
too good update...
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Clara20

its so cute yaar...i jst loved them...wen wl madhu come to knw her love for RK?



thanx a lott dear
a few more parts n then madhu will realise her feelings for RK
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ITS_m

Just finished reading both updates.. Loved it 😃

When will she realize her love for RK



thanx alott dear
just wait a lil bit more,a few more updates n then madhu will realise her love for RK
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳 rishbala's cute honeymoon !!
madhu was jealous lol !!
i want rk to be jealous too and some passionate and romantic scenes.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-24

It was a new morning a new day in rishabala's life ,madhu opened her eyes n saw RK holding her tightly frm waist n sleeping like a kid cuddled up with her while her head was on his chest hugging him from waist,madhu felt goosbumps in her stomach thinking abt d situation dey were sleeping n smilled slyly,

madhu tried to get out of his hard grip but RK was holding her quite tightly n madhu was not able to get out of his hold,,,,madhu kept trying for a while but afer seeing her all attempts were failed she stopped trying n lyed down back in her old position gazing at her handsom husband n strated touching his stubble n face

Waise inte bhi bura nai h hai na babaji??jab wo karan aaya tb b muje use bachaya n phr jb me natak kar rai thi chot ka tb b mera kitna dhyan rakha n kal raat ko b muje utha k laae,bas thodi si gusse ki problem h n thodi akad jada h akdu me nai toh baki sab thk h haina babaji ????aur haan yeh jo naak h na humesha hawa me hi rehti h pata nai khud ko kya samjhta h sadu kahin ka but dil ka bhut acha h waise bhi bachpan me bhi toh mera kitna dhyan rakhta tha na humesha mere saath rehta tha madhu was busy in her selftalk without realizing that RK was up n was listening her all d thoughts n views,

RK was thoroughly njoying it he was up when madhu was trying to free her self from his grasp but he didn't allowed her to go out to see her nxt move but he was amused n surprised hearing madhu talking abt him,,,,,,,,,,,n smilled inwardly understanding tht his wify has finally started feeling abt him,,,,,,,,,

But then he thought of teasing her a bit

madhu if ur self talk is over could u pls get up from me ???as I want to get up,said RK opening his one eye

madhu was really embarresed being caught like tht n fumbled

Haan haan wo me tho uthna hi chahti thi aap ne hi muje pakda hua tha

madhu mene tume nai pakda h jaan??????

N thts den madhu has noticed that RK was actually not holding her anymore while she was lying on him n talking to babaji

madhu smiled nervously n got up saying goodmorning while RK was busy njoying her nervousness as he knew wht was going in her head

#madhu jhalli kya jarurat thi uspe aise sone ki n den aise aram se babaji se jor-jor se baat karne ki dekha na ab kya hua???dushtdanav ab pura din ek bhi mauka nai chodega muje tang karne ka babaji bachao pls muje#thought madhu making baby faces while RK was quite amused wid her antics n shooked his head saying

madhu agar tumhari babaji se baat ho gai ho toh pls jara brkfast order kardo me tab tak naha k aata hun

madhu jst noded

RK was abt to enter d bathroom when madhu suddenly stoped him RK who me puch rai thi k muje kal raat ko room me kaun laya tha I mean me toh car me thi na phr yahan kaise

RK looked at her face for a while before answering her

Madhu tum sach me itni bewakoof ho ya srf pretend karti ho????

Huhn???

Tumne muje bewakoof kaha

Nai MADHU maine tumse puch k kya tum sach me bewakoof ho ya srf pretend karti ho

Btw kal waiter laya tah tume room me said RK

Kya waiter??????asked MADHU shocked

Tumne ek waiter ko uthane diya muje n woh muje yahan is room me leke aaya

Toh MADHU aur kahan jana tha tume???????raising his eyebrow

Mera matlb wo nai tha mere kehne ka matlb tha k tum kaiseek waiter''..said MADHU seeing in his eyes while tears threteaned to fall jst by thinking tht sum random man has touched her

While RK was shocked to see tears in her eyes n rushed to her side

Oh jaan m so sorry me toh majak kar aha tha sweety it was me who bought u here

MADHU luked at him innocently still crying

Sachi me toh srf tumhae maje le raha tha

Tum bht kharab ho tumne muje rulaya me tumse kbi baat nai karungi saying dis MADHU started to cry louder hitting RK wid her fist

I hate u I really hate u tum bht kharab ho

While RK jst hugged her tight to calm her down

Oh my baby don't cry jaan tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho k mere hote hue tume koi aur uthage wo toh me tumhari tang kheench raha tha

U knw tumne aise pucha k kaun laya tha to mene socha k thode maje karlun

But m really sorry n mai aisa dubara kbi nai karunga

N I promise

MADHU came out of d hug still crying n watched his face

Sachi

Muchi

Pakka wala promise

Yes swthrt pakka wala promise now smile

MADHU smilled sweetly while RK took a relief breath seeing her smiling again

Acha now u order d brkfast me bai aaya

Okh

While RK took bath MADHU ordered d brkfast

MADHU tumne brkfast order kiya???

Haan kar diya

Okh jao tum bhi ready ho jao tb tak brkfast bhi aa jaega n den saath me khate h

MADHU nodded taking her clothes frm d closet n entering d bathroom

Rishabala hav dere brkfast n left for d sight seeing

Dey enjoyed dere whole day sight seeing n fighting wid each other on silly n stupid things

While coming back it started to rain n madhu saw a icecream parlour

rk car roko pls screamed MADHU

RK stopped d car thinking sumthing might hav gone wrong n asked worriedly

Kya hua MADHU tum thk to ho na kuch chaiye kya tume tumhari tbyat toh thk h na

RK RK jst relax m fine n yes muje na icecream khani h said MADHU looking towards d icecream parlour

While RK was left gaping at her n n den got angry thinking abt her stupidity

Kya tume icecream khani h ????asked RK

To which MADHU nodded innocently

RK rolled his eyes

Tum pagal ho gai ho kya MADHU????

Kyun???

Itni thand h n upar se barish bhi ho rai h n tume icecream khani h

Haan toh kahan likha h k icecream khana mana h barish me n thand me

Oh god kahan phas gaya me?????

God ko baad me yaad karna chalo pehle muje icecream khilao

MADHU dekho jidd nai karo tum beemar pa jaogi samjhne ki koshish karo jaan

Nai muje khani h toh mtlb khani h

Tum sath aa rae ho toh btao nai toh me akele jaa rai hun

RK didn't move

MADHU opened d door saying kanjoos kahinka muje ek icecream bhi nai khila sakta koi nai me khud kha lungi

MADHU got out of d car n was abt to move when she heard d bang of d car door n saw RK standing dere looking angrily at her

Kya h aise kya dekh rai ho???

Chalo tume icecream khilata hum

MADHU jumped happily n started walking

Lekin agr tum beemar hui toh me nai dhyan rakhunga samjhi????

MADHU nodded happily still eyeing d icecream parlour while RK jst roled his eyes watching his childish wife

MADHU had her icecream making sounds

MADHU tum kab badi hogi?????

Kya kya matlb h tumhara asked MADHU njoying her iceceam

Yahi k tum kab apni yeh harkate chodogi

Ek dam bacho ki tarah behave krti ho tum

Kbi kbi toh muje samjh nai aata h k main ek bache se shaddi ki h k ek mature ladki se

MADHU glared at him angrily

Oh toh tum kehna chahte ho k me bachi hun asked MADHU angrily

Thts it for now

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oops madhu crying😭

n RK angry😡

thnku so much for all ur support comments n likes dey really mean a lott to me thnx a lot


Edited by amrinderdhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey update is good but little query. don't you think madhu is acting more childish being an MBA student? and secondly please edit properly/ still there is GEET used at one place...
Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear..waiting for their SR...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

hey update is good but little query. don't you think madhu is acting more childish being an MBA student? and secondly please edit properly/ still there is GEET used at one place...



thanx for pointing out that mistake i hav eddited it
n dear about madhu being childish i would say its just that she is a bit immature innocent n naive
i hav ieven mentioned it in the character sketch also that madhu is innocent naive bubbly,,,,so its just becoz of all this that she acts childish n RK being her childhood frnd n lover understands her fullfills her all stupid childish demands
Edited by amrinderdhami - 12 years ago

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