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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww it was too cute just loved it waiting for the next part😊👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it was so romantic valentines day ever... Haww real mein aisa kuchh ho Kaash ...

Brllient awesome... Beautiful story yaar :)

Update soon and pm me:)
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plz continue soon and pm me when u update
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#64
Superb👏👏
How sweet of Rey😳
Update soon and pm me😊
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awesome story n amazing updates...!
love taarey momentss...!
keep updating n do pm me plzzz...!
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Awww.. It was soo cute.. I loved the jijaji comment loll
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Hey dear welcum 2 d firum...i read all d oarts 2gedr...itwas fab...cute romantic!! All 2gedr...plz update soon :)
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Hey i read all parts together. And i must say ur an awesome writer. I loved way taani was manaofied in rehersal hall. And den the ring, followed by the kiss at fire exit and now a date at rey's place. Wow sounds intresting. Plz update soon. And pm me wen u update. I am eagerly waiting to read the next parts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanku guys for ur comments...I hope u like my fifth part...
Please do comments after reading...


Taarey FF:AFTER GOA -Part 5




Taani couldnt sleep dat night..it was d best night of her life with her prince charming, her first kiss...
The best valenties ever...
Taani's phone ring...
Its rey...she smiles n picks up..

Rey:abhi tak soyi nahi...mere baare mein soch rahi ho kya?
Taani:nahi..
Rey:nahi kya matlab hai..?koi aur ke baare me soch rahi thi kya?
Taani:nahi ka yeh matlab hai ki mein abhi tak soyi nahi thi,aur mein aapke bhare mein soch rahi thi..!
Rey:kya soch rahi thi meri bhare mein...?
Taani:woh..(taani blushes)
Rey:tumhe bhura to nahi lagana, mein tumhe(rey hstitates to ask)
Tanni understood what rey was coming to ask..
Taani:nahi,
Rey: mein jaanthi thi, mera kiss itna bekhaar nahi tha...
Taani:aap bhi na...
Taani:aap phone rakhiye mujhe neendh aa rahi hai...
Rey:mein bhi aaoon kya?
Taani:gud ni8 rey..
Rey:suno, ekh baat bholna bhool gayi thi mein..
Taani:kya?
Rey:Happy valentines day n i love u...
Taani:happy valentines da rey...
i love u too..

Both keeps d phone...
Rey closes her eyes n smiles n tells...bas tumhe manaa liya princess, mere saans mein saans aagaya...
Taani smiles n closes her eyes...

Moring at Taani's house..
Swayam sitting in the sofa having cofee...
Door bell rings,
Taani was in kitchen..
Taani:bhai darwaaza kholo na, meri thodi bz hoon..
Swayam:teek hai,tum apna kaam karo, mein dektha hoon..
Swayam opens d door...(guess who it is at door-its our prince charming REY)
Swayam:tum itni subah...
Rey: ha mein,tumse kuch baat karna hai...
Swayam understood he s here for taani...
Taani:kon hai bhai,dhood wala hai kya..?
Swayam:nahi taani,tumhara majnu hai..
Rey luks n smiles at swayam...
Taani:yeh kya bhol rahe ho bhai...(n comes out of kitchen n sees rey)
Taani n rey eyelock...Hawa hawa...

Swayam waves at hand at both, no respnse...
Swayam:tumhari majnu,subah milne aaya hai..
Rey:nahi mein toh swayam tujsee milne aaya hai..kuch college ki renovation ki baat karna hai...
Swaym:acha beta, mujse baat karne aaye ho..chalo mere kamre mein...
Rey:chalo,(understud aaj to tu gaya)
Taani murmers n goes back into d kitchen(aacha mujse nahi bhai se milne aaya hai,teek bhaiti raho bhai ke kamre mein)

Taani prepares d breakfast...
Taani:aajao bhai khana readi hai...
Swayam:aa raha hoon..
Swaym,rey,n taani sits...
Taani s nt luking at rey...Rey s luking at her...
taani sits oppsite to rey...
Rey:khana accha bhana hai..
Swayam:behen kiski hai..
Taani:thank u bhai..
Tani still doesnt luk at him..
Rey streches his legs to her leg...no reaction...again he streches..
Swayam:ape saale kya kar rah hai tu huh?
woh mera paair hai...chain se baitna...
Taani starts laughing...Rey has a very werid smile..
Rey:sorry yaar..
Swayams phone rings..its sharon,swayam gets up n goes..
Rey comes n sits next to her..
Rey:tum intna kyun has rahi thi ha?
Taani gets up n goes into d kitchen taking plates..
Rey follows her...
Taani turns back n stand n smling...
Rey hold her n pulls her closser her to his chest facing face to face..
(eyelock,)
Rey:jaanti ho na,kal mein kya kaha tha,jab tum naaraz hogi,mein kya karronga...taani blushes n smiles,)
Rey:haaye...kya sharmamthe ho tum,maar dalogi kya...leans forward to kiss her...
Taani:mein apse naaraz nahin hoon..
aur bhai hai bhahar...abhi dhodi der aapki baand bhaji woh kafi nahi hai kya...?
Rey:sahi hai yaar..kya bhajatha hai woh mera...
Swayam enters...(feeling odd seeing taani in rey's arms)
Swayam turns back n tell...
Swayam:aha saale,abhi hum collge keliye nahi nikalenge toh sharon humara band bajaadegha...
Rey n taani leaves from deir position..(embaaresed)


Rey,taani,swayam enters into canteen..

All d3 gang:gud morning guys..
Rey,taani,swayam:gud morning..
Swayam:sharon kahan hai ?
Simmi:vp sir ne bhulaya thi usko! toh wahan chali gayi hogi..
Sharon enters:
Sharon:guys suno,hum last year ki tarah,iss saal bhi,charity evernt rakh rahi hai...
All d3 gang:wow dance again...
Sharon:thodi si problm hai, wo next monday host karna hai..so humein saree preparations includin rehersals abhi se shuru karna hai..

Sharon:taani tumhein dance chodkar sab sambalna hain, aashi tumhein assist karenga, rey dance rehersals mei bz honge...
Taani;teek hai..
Rey makes a puppy face..
Bharat:ape aisi shakal mat bahana...
every1 stares at rey..
Taani laughs...

everyones gets bz in deir preparations...
Sudenly taani gets a msg in her phone from rey..
Rey:fire exit mein milo mujhe abhi jaldi..
Taani worries what happned n runs..
Rey was standing thr..
Taani;kya hua, aap itni jaldi kyun bhulaya..
Rey pulls her closer n pushes her towards d wal..
Taani:aap kya kar raha hai?
mujhe bhahot kaam hai,chodiye na..
Rey:mein subah tumein kuch baat karne aaya tha...
Taani:kya..
Rey:woh !aaj meri ghar chalogi..(rey tell it one breath)
Taani:kya..?
Rey:ha...
Taani: kyun, kuch special hai kya..
Rey:woh sab baat mein, tum chalogi ?
Rey:ha ya na?
Taani:ha..
Rey:thank u..
N kisses her on lips..taani gets shocked by d sudden kiis..
Taani didnt kiss back..but rey's kiss was so passionate dat she had to kiss him back..
taani hand clutches rey's shirt , he broke of d kiss when his phone rang..it was swayam..
both gets into senses...
rey:abhi aa rahi hoon swayam...
rey places kiss on taanis's forehead n tells will pick u after college..

Taani smiles n gets back to work...

Evening...
Msg buzzes again on taani's phone..it was rey's..
Rey:get ready n meet me in car parking in half an hour..

seeig taani smiles..
gals starts to tease her..
Neha:smiling taani y ?
Simmi:bholo
Sharon:rey ka msg tha na..
Taani blushes..
Simmi:dekho dekho usj=ki blushing deko..
Taani smiles..n runs..


taani was wondering while getting ready in locker...she wore a black salwar like d same as she had worn on her 1st date with rey..

Taani goes 2 d parking lot...
sees rey dere..
Rey smiles seeing her...she was luking so beautiful...
he opens d door...
Taani gets in..
Taani:hum kahanjaa rahe..?
Rey:mere ghar pe..!
Taani:woh kyun..?
Rey:woh sab baat pata chalega...




Precap:taani feels shocked by rey's surprise..
will taani accepts rey's surprise..
rey and taani spends a night 2gether(socho guys😳 😉)(aagae aage dekho hota hai kya)😉😳


HAPPY VALENTINESDAY GUYS...
sorry its too long os..
i culdnt include d surprie part..i will update it 2day...if u guys want it..

PLease Please gve me comments on how u guys like it..
I aplogize for my mistakes...
Please do tell me if u guys want next part...
Silent readers plse try 2 gve me comments

PART6-PAGE 13



Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update. Becharee Rey & Taani har baar Swayam interrupt kar deta hai dono ke ROMANCE ko. LOL
STILL CUTE.

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