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drfizaahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: tasnim.

APi it was just fantastic part
awww maaynk was not with nupur in her preganncy time
and they were missing each other a lot
mayank fass gaya ek aur meeting k liye
Api ab next update main Mayur ko mila do-plzzz




thnks alot dear
yes she is na ya he isnt there
sigh mayank nhi pehassy ga tu stroy kasay start hogi



thnku

Originally posted by: -Meri-

lovely update
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thnks alot




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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: drmaha

wow..


nice update... nupur is pragnent amazin

poor mayank:(

but the way nupur is thinking bt sumthg fishy know me also lil worried hope everythg will be fi9 and mayank would safely reached back ...


thanks jani for this ff 🤗




thnaks alot dear
yup she is

dekh yaar CSI hai tu fishy fishy aur elephant elephant bhi hoga... as tht is wht neded nah
ur most welcum turtle
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awewsome update API
loved it lodsss
hayeee loving this Nupur more
n missing reading it instant
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗
missing u lodsss



haaw mera bacha itna sa comment per agaya
i so miss u dear really alot
thnku so much for liking
Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

interestin concepts...n quite diff too...



Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

ohh.. wow so nups is preggy! bt y is she getg -ve vibes?




thnkd for joining in here im suprised u were not there on last one...
nupur is gettig vibes cause kuch kcuh hony wala hai ...
but abhi thori masti enjoy kero


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Posted: 12 years ago
#75


Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

Congrats for the 3rd part and nice update 😊




thnks alot dear
glad u liked it


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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Thanks a lot for ur lovely comments..

Late update is deliberate .. as new readers have asked sum time to read previous one… one thing I will ike to mention to new ones is tht .. u can continue doing so both… previous season n this season.. as the main plot wil not be effected…

Past in this one is early months of his transfer pre nupur's pregnancy…wasy this was surprising for me… I though u all will be like wht Nupur pregnant ab yeah fight kasay keray gi …. But u all are happy wah wah

Rplied to u all

Happy reading

PS: 2morow my mom is under going an eye surgery though is nothing to worry about but still I will be seeking all you prayers…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Chapter: 2

It was a pleasant morning, not to cold.. being a Mumbain he use to be so much like wao cold n all that.. yet this Delhi's winter has given him all kinda of thoughts of when it will end… he has so much to miss these days, he just can add thing in to his miss list.. and it kept increasing more n more…he misses his friends, his missed samrat's Wedding just imagine…. As people purposefully made things hell here tht he couldn't go there… but above all he missed her…

He knew his jhasi ki rani angry naah she is just sad… and her best way of showing that always have been anger..

The moments he spend when he went home were so amzing and thats when he realized he really missed her so much and not only her he missed the feel of home to…

The bell rung and she knew who is there on the door.. gosh she so waitied for this moment to cum… her chain of thoughts were broken when she felt a a hand on her shoulder

Nupur: kya hai…

Benji: hay Allah jiju agay… jao..

Nupur: kyun tu nhi khol sakta..

Benji: khol sakta hoon… but kya hai k mjhy us se maar nhi kahni us k door step romance ko karab ker k…

Nupur: kya .. door step romance wah… wah…

NM: tu jarahi hai ya yahin rahy gi…

Nupur: agay ap k ladla shoro hogai ap… jarahi hoon..

She pretend went to the door as if it's a casual thing yet she knew wht inside she is feeling about all this… she opned the door and found him leaning to it causally with his arms cross around his chest

Mayank: mjhy laga ap loog bhool gay mein anay wala hoo.. had hai.. itni dair koi lagta hai bhala…

Nupur: uff khuda… mera sadu pati waps agaya… ek wohi hosakta hai jo atay hi complain box khol day…

Mayank: aur harat ki baat yeah k meri is biwi ny koi dramtic kam nhi kiya aj…

Nupur: kya kero gana gao…

Mayank: nhi wasy ek hug se shoro kerain.. he moved forward and hugged her sqeezing and she closed her eyes to make her believe this warmth is real not the one she imagine…. Gosh I missed ya so much…

He moved away to look at her pouting face… and pecked her forhead to move in

Samrat: hogay tu hum ankhein khol lain

Mayank: kamino sab kuch dekhny k baad ankhein band ki hai… aur asay kya tha…

Benji: aray paagl hain dono ankhein band ker k garahy hain.. asakuch nhi tha ek hug aur ek kiss tha… woh bhi forehead per .. hat…

Nupur: benjiii…

Mayank: tu samjh nhi raha hai benji

Benji: kya detail mein smajho

Mayank: ab samrat ko bata hai k mein bhi hoon yaha… tu us ko daar hai k.. kahin hum us ko asay kahin kuch na pakar layin…

Benji: aaa I see…

Nupur: chalo u have already seen…

Samrat: KYA….

Gunjan: kya hai mayank tum atay k sath shoro hogay….

Samrat: han woh bhi darwaz per…

Benji: correction samrat .. tumhari bwi tum dono k bacha rahi thi.. na k mayank ki hata rahi thi..

Mayank n benji shared a high five… and Samrat threw two three bad words to them.. earning much more detail leg pulling

Mayank: maa kaha hai… he looked around wondering why she hasn't been here..

NM: maa apni barai k intezar ker rahi hai…

Mayank: seekho kuch seekho nupur… asay welcum kertay hain pati k… per nhi…

Nupur's mom chukled and brought arti infront of him to bless him n welcum him almost back at home

Nupur: hay meray pati parmshwarr… arti utar din bhar apki.. nariyal na phordo tumahry sir per… yeah harkat tumhari apni khud galay lagi hoi hai.. COM sir ko yeah idea apny kuch present kiya tha

Mayank: maa plese ek list bana lya nah

NM: kiss chees ki… she said passing prassd to him…

Mayank: woh sab kuch jo apny is k baida hony per khaya tha.. meray bacho waqt woh bane kerado ga..

She slpaed his head playfully

NM: maza araha hai buhat biwi ko tang kerny mein .. haina

He smiled it was true…

Mayank: so tu hai… is ki yeah khufanak shakal kafi miss ki hai mein ny….

Nupur: yeah kaan mein kya baatein ker rahy hain ap dono…

Gunjan: tum dono itna larty hoon …

Mayank: haan kyun k humain maza ata hai ek doosray ki khichny mein.. he pulled Nupur in a side hug squeezing a bit.. to wch she looked at him with a glare and than smiled…

Mayank: wasy humari new bhabi welcum home

Benji: wah bhi yeah 3 months baad gunjan ko welcum bol raha hai great…

It was night and they all were chating siting together and were catching up with eachother…

Samrat: nupur dekh lo hum ny kuch nhi kaha woh khud kah raha hai us ki cologue bht hot hai

Nupur: us bewaquf nhi pata mein us office se aai hoon… woh lesbian hai..

Mayank: lay phir tu mjhy tension honi chiay…

Benji: kitna maza araha hai nah.. aj hum sab loog raat bahar asay hi baatein keray ga..kyun mayank

Gunjan place her hand on her mouth to stop the chuckles shyly… they were not letting both of them have a little time alone.. and deliberately sat here for chat … samrat n benji were in full mood of troubling him….

Samrat: aur nhi tu kya kinta maza araha hai… yaar hum ny tujhy kitna miss kiya…

Mayank: kamino mein ny tum logo ko bulkily miss nhi kiya aur tum saro ki harkhtein mein bht achy se janta hoon… good nite ..daafa hojao sab..

Benji: acha tu thik hai.. nupur mjhy akleay neend nhi ati ti mein aj samrat k pass jara hoon tum gunjan k pass done…

Nupur: tu ek kam ker.. maa k sath so jao.. tujhy lori bhi sunay gi…

Samrat: aah haay itny depsoo…

OHHH..

Nupur couldn't help to blush and laugh

Nupur: tum sab pagal hochukay hoo… good nite.. saying so she got up to left the place..

Mayank: chewing the last peanut.. he dust of the his hand… me to .. good nite…

Benji: ek sath kaha jarahy hoo… hum bhi aay kya…

Mayank turn and threw the caushion right on his face and they all laughed while he shock his head to leave…. And at last have his time with his wife…

Mayank: had hoti hai in sab ki… asa lag raha hai meri wedding night hai… he chukled and moved in

And found her hands crawl around him to hug him tightly.. he hugged her back .. and made abit space to look at her closely…spreading his hand in her hairs he leaned to kiss her… and brought out all the longing and all the passion they were holding from so long…

The kiss was change into trail of kisses and that made there way towards the bliss….

Nupur: mayank…

Mayank: hmm..

Nupur: kab tak ho… she snuggled more in him ..

Mayank: sigh…. One day… and he kissed her hairs… itni thaki hoi kyun horahi hoo

Nupur: kam hai buhat… there were 4 case..

Mayank: oye I forgot… congrts bhushan ..u rocked in ur recent case amzing

Nupur: thank u sir… and why u always call me bhushan….

Mayank: he chukled… confusion hojati hai nah Mrs. Sharma… islyan….

Nupur: hmm..

Mayank: kya baat hai aj mjhy se koi lara nhi is baat per… wah…

Nupur: time nhi hai na pati dev lari aur man any k….

Mayank: btw wht u have done to ur hairs…

Nupur: nothing kyun …

She raised her head and checked her hairs..

Mayank: asay tu nhi thy …

Nupur: kya hogay hai mayank.. bhol gay ho aur kya…

Mayank; really… leme have better check… he smirk and turn her on the bed and dipped his head to kiss her neck…

He smiled and groan both at the same time… bus 3 days more and he is there with his family n his friends…huh

His cell runged and he got back to the work… its better to work n work else he wont have survive a month here without them all….

COM: mayank report the headquarter immteidaly

Mayank: is everything oky sir…

COM: no not at all…

Mayank: wht … I am cuming ASAP…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Amazing update fiza flashback was tooo gdd ...
Lvd the gang's Gala time and the Mayur convo lead me to the wndrfull mmrs of MJHT
will pray for ur Mom :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
lovely updt fiza
cont soon
ps:fiza I will pray for your mother's speed recovery..take care of her
thanks for the pm
Edited by gopi06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Amazing update di...Loved it to the core.
Nupur and Mayank are too good.
cont soon.

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