TR ff:kahin pyar na ho jaye ch 11 pg 140

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Tahira-2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

wow that was amazing

taani is dancing and rey saw her

what the hell yeh vishaka khamisha vilian kyon banti hai

amazing job plzzz update soon

and sorry for late reply

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vibhaaa

@vibhaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

sorry 4 the late commernt. awesome update dipu.👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️ loved ur all ff.

wow taani dancing.😃

hate vishakha😡

who is vihan?

wow rey console taani. loved the caring rey.

update pls jaldi se kardo. cant wait.

thanks 4 pming do pm me.

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi
awesum ... wen will u update d next part .. ???😊

thanka dear...try to update soon...

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: patie
dipu update ws fab🤗 haye rey is so cute...nd yug bhi
ok nw update jaldi se

thanks annie...i will...

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: vibhaaa

sorry 4 the late commernt. awesome update dipu.⭐️ loved ur all ff.
wow taani dancing.😃
hate vishakha😡
who is vihan?
wow rey console taani. loved the caring rey.
update pls jaldi se kardo. cant wait.
thanks 4 pming do pm me.

thanks dear...i will try to update soon.

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Hi guys...m here with my update...

Taani return home...still thinking about rey...she enter and sat on sofa...yug is in his room so he dont know that taani is at home...

Taani think:"aaj jis rey ko mene dekha ...pehle kabhi nahi dekha ...unki aankho me dard dekha mene...kya vo mere liye pareshan the?vo meri kitni care karte hai?unko hug karke esa laga ki mera sara dard chala gaya...vo mere kitne achhe dost ban gaye..."

Just then yug came out from the room and saw taani sitting on sofa ...

Yug;(to himself)ye mumma ese kyu bethi hai?pehle to kabhi mumma ese nahi thi...

He go near her and said:mummaa...

But taani is in her own thoughts...

Yug again said:mumma...

But taani not listen...

Now yug become furious...

Yug:mummaaa...

Taani come to her sense and said:ha ...ha shonna...kya hua??

Yug turn in other direction and said:"yug mumma se naraz hai...

Taani go in front of him and said:kyu??

Yug:aaj aap ne aake yug ko hug bhi nahi kiya aur kissi bhi nahi ki...isiliye yug aap se katti hai. ...

Ta:oh...to yug humse katti hai...sorry shona...apni mumma ko forgive nahi karoge??(she hold her ears and made puppy face)

Yug again turn and stand crossing his hands against his chest and said:no...katti...katti..katti...

Ta:plz...plz mumma ko maaf kar do...dekho avhi mumma aapko hug karti hai...

Yug:no...ab nahi chahiye...yug ko aap se baat nahi karni hai...

Ta:achha...yug mumma se baat nahi karega ...to phir to aap chocilate cake bhi nahi khayenge jo me ab banane wali hu vo bhi aap nahi khayenge...hai na?

Yuug (in his mind):wow...chocolate cake...yummy ...(then to taani)aa...nahi...yug nahi khayega...

Ta:oh...to thik hai...mumma aur dadu akele hi khayenge...then taani call her dad...her dad come there...

Td:kya chal raha hai?

Ta:vo yug na mujhse baat nahi kar raha...aur ab vo chocolate cake bhi nahi khayega...

Td:to to phir hum dono hi khayenge hai na?

Ta:yes pops...aur agar yug ko bhi chahiye to unhe humse baat karni hogi...aur hug karna hoga . ...

Yuh(think):chocolate cake...isse to yuug jane nahi dega aur isi bahane mumma se ek aur hug mil jayega...to ye to double fayda hai yug...

Taani is standing there...yug is not answering...so she said:lagta hai yug ko nahi chahiye...pops hum chalte hai...

Yug:no...yug ko chahiye...he run and hug taani around her legs...taani take him in her hands and hug him...and kiss him...

Ta:ab to yug ko chocolate cake milega...

Yug:ye...jaldi...phir mujhe na park me jana hai...

Ta:ok...lets go...uug and pops will help me ok?

Yug and td:ok mam...

All go in the kitchen.

Here sharon rey neha simmi nil swayam and vicky are talking on phone.

Sh:guys...vishakha kuch jyada hi bol gai ...

Rey:ha...but vishakha aur naughty bird ekdusre ko kaise jante hai?

Ne:dont know...

Nil:ho sakta hai vo pehle kahi mile ho...

Sh:guys guys guys ...kisiko pata hai vishakha ka hai kaha rehta hai?

Vi:ya ...jodhpur me...

Sh:what jodhpur me?

Rey:par tum itni shocked kyu ho?

Sh:actually vishakha's brother is taani's ex.

All:what??

Rey:kya??

Sh:ha...

Rey:par esa kya hua un dono ke bich ki dono alag ho gaye?

Sh:ye to mujhe taani ne nahi bataya but itna pata hai ki usne taani ko dhokha diya...badi,mushkil se taani ne apneaap ko sambhala...vo na kisiko apna dard diikhane nahi deti...sabkuch apne andar rakhti hai...

Rey:ha...mene dekha hai usse rote hue aur dance karte hue... .she is very good in dance...

Ne nil vi si:dance?

Sh:dance?lekiin usne kabhi ye bataya nahi ki vo dance karti hai...

Rey:lagta hai uske piche bhi jarur koi baat hogi...tabhi usne chupaya...

Sh:may be...hey guys...me usse bhi convo me connect karti hu aur puchti hu...aap log chip rehna ok?kyuki vo sabko apno baate nahi batati hai...

All:ok...

Rey:sharon one minute...agar vo dance k bare me abhi tumhe kuch bataye to pkx baad me usse hamari team join karne ke liye kehna...she is very good and can match up with our level ...

Sh:ok...

Taani is in kitchen...almost done with cake ...her cell rang and she pick it up...

Ta:hey shar...

Sh:hi taani...kya kar rahi ho...

Ta:tumhari aur meri fav chocolate cake bana rahi hu...bana rahi hu nahi...ban gayi...just decoration baaki hai... .

Sh:wow...chocolate cake...

Rey(think):chocolate cake...i love it...aur naughty ird ko bhi pasand hai...chalo ek baat to common hai ..

Ta:yes... Aa jao na ghar pe...

Sh:are nahi taani...baad me aati hu...

Ta:baad me nahi...aana hoga...aaj bhi tum yaha dinner karogi ...aur nahi aayi to me lene aa jaungi...sirf do minute lagege tumhare ghar aane me mujhe...

Sh:ok ok aa jaungi...btw...u dance really well...

Ta:tu...tumhe kaise pata ki me dance karti hu?

Sh:vo...vo...mene dekha tha tumhe dance karte hue but mujhe kuch kam tha so me chali gayi...varna ussi waqt tumhare paas aati.

Ta:thanks...u know I loved dance...but not now...

Sh:why??

Ta:because of vihan...

Sh:for god sake taani...vihan ki vajah se apni khushi kyu bhul rahi ho tum?

Ta:vo hi meri life me dance karne ki vajah tha shar... Aur me usse yad nahi karna chahti ...jiske liye mene dance karna start kiya tha usi ne last muujhe dhoka diya...

Sh:taani par tumne kabhi bataya nahi ki tum dance bhi karti ho...

Ta:vo...me...

Sh:ok now listen...me abhi aa rahi hu...phir tum mujhe batana...and remember I m always there with you . ..

Ta:ok...come...

Taani cut the call...

Sh:dekha guys...kitna dard chupati hai vo apne andar...

Rey:aur vo uski aankho me dikhta hai...

Nil vi:tune uski aankho me kab dekha rey?

Rey:bahot baar dekha hai...lekin iss baar dekha to uski aankho me bahot dard tha...

Sh:ok guys...me baad me baat karti hu...

All:ok...

Sharon go to taani's home...

Sharon enter and see yug eating chocolate cake...his mouth and face is covered with chocolate...

Sh:yug...

Yug saw sharon and sais:mom...

Sharon come there and sit with him.

Sh:akele akele kha rahe ho...mom ko nahi doge??

Yug:ha ha...le lo na...

Sh:no no...tum khao...mumma kaha hai...??

Yug:mumma apne room me hai ...

Sh:ok aap khao ...me mumma se milke aati hu.

Here with rey:

Vihan ...agar mujhe kahin mil gaya na to uska esa haal karunga...ki khud ko pehchan bhi nahi paayega ...how dare he hurt taani??how dare he hurt my taani??wait rey...my taani...what r u talking...

Then again he think:of course my taani...my friend taani...he close his eyes and can see her crying face...oh god...mujhe phirse vo dikh rahi hai...ye kya ho raha hai??me pagal ho raha hu...har waqt uske baare me sochta hu...aankh band karta hu to vo hi dikhti hai ...ye kya ho raha hai??oh god...plz help...kyu me taani ke liye itna pareshan ho raha hu?kyu usse hasta hua dekhna chahta hu?kyu jab vo hurt hoti hai to mujhe taklif hoti hai...kyu??is it l...o...no no rey...esa kuch nahi hai...

Meanwhile with shani:

Sharon enter in room and see that taani is looking into something...sharon go near and see a that she is sitting with a photo in her hand.

Sh:hi taani...

Ta:oh...hi...shar...

Sh:yug...

Ta:ha...

http://www.hdwallpapers.in/walls/cute_baby_boy_mobile-normal.jpg

Sh:wow...looking so cute...

Dusra bhi hai dekho...shaitani kar raha hai...

http://image.shutterstock.com/display_pic_with_logo/105682/105682,1299608610,1/stock-photo--years-old-baby-boy-paintings-without-paintbrush-72741211.jpg

Sh:ye to bahot hi cute haii...

Ta:yes... Cutie cutie...aur abhi abhi hum jab jodjpur me the tab bhi ekk photo liya tha...vo bhi dikhti hu ...ek min...

Taani go and take a photoframe from a table.Yug Is Looking Like This Now.

http://wac.450f.edgecastcdn.net/80450F/popcrush.com/files/2011/04/matty.jpg

Sh:ye to bahot handsome lag raha hai...

Ta:ya...wo to hai.

Here with rey:

Rey tu kya soch raha hai ye...

He call swayam...

Sw:hey rey...

R:hi swayam ..

Sw:kya baat hai...u r sounding low...

R:are yar m confused...mere sath kya ho raha hai...

Sw:kyu kya hua?

R:are jab bhi aankhe band karta hu mujhe taani dikhti hai...

Sw:what?

R:ha. ..usse hurt dekhta hu to taklif hoti hai...pata nahi kyu par hamesha uske baare me sochta hu...jab vo khush hoti hai to dil ko ajib si khushi milti hai ...

Sw:dude ...tu ue sab keh raha hai...

R:me matlab?

Sw:vo...jo pyar pe yakin nahi karta...

R:pyar??

Sw:yes dude...tumhari sari baato se lagta hai...lagta hai nahi m sure that u r in love with taani...

R:what??esa kuch bhi nahi hai...

Sw:esa hi hai...

Rey:no...

Sw:yes...

R:no...

Sw:ok ok...me na tujhe kal milta hu...abhi mujhe kuch kam hai...

Rey:ok...

Both hang up.

Rey thinks:swayam ne jo kaha...kya sach me taani se pyar...no no rey...esa nahi hai...

He look at watch and said:hey...chalo park me jane ka time ho gaya...he get ready and go.

Precap:

Rey:taani...mujhe na ek ladki dikhti hai jab bhi me aankhe band karta hu.
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Ta:sach me aap ko ye sab ho raha hai...

Rey:ha...

Taani laugh...

Rey:why r u laughing...

Ta:rey...u r in love...

Rey:what?
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r:yes...i m in love...i m in love with taani...

Taani's past reveal...

So guys...hows it??