Swaron OS: The Midnight Envisage

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Vaish what to say yaar!!😊 Firstly hats off to you👏 and second i swear, i literally swear that i cried whole time!! Sorry, i am quiet an emotional person and when it comes to Swaron i get very connected with them!! 😳

Each word and each sentence has it's own charm within it!! I just totally loved the OS!! Like seriously if someone ask me the rating, i will definitely give 10/10 with out a doubt! 🤗

First of all i liked Swaron not being married!! 😊I dunno why, but yeah i do.🤔

Though Swayam did not do anything on purpose but love happens where, there is also possessiveness and jealousy too!! 😳

The most touching part was when Swayam said "Surprising." to sharon when she announced that she is pregnant, god that would be like a tight slap n her face like the guy she is loving and carrying a baby of is saying her THIS.

Poor Swayam tried to convince her, but it's not easy for Sharon and i understand that!!😔

painful part was when he used to caress the baby bump, she got nervous and all cautions, that was killing but yeah of course she is been suffering from much bad!! 😭

loved the ending a lot!! how he said " Come on now give a mamma a smile you gave to me."😊

And then when she said "Hey baby."!!! 😃 they were the moment i felt like Awe!! 😳

Thanks for giving such a wonderful OS and converting it into SS version!! 🤗

Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 12 years ago

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing OS 😊

Swayam getting jealous n over-possessive towards Sharon n thus making damage into their lives

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Sanjana

@sweet_sanju

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Nice OS
Superb
Swayam's temper nd insecurity made him suffer alot
Loved ur writing

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome os & beautifully written👏

It starts with swayam's pov as how his perfect life become miserable becoz of his silly mistake & i was completely have a sympathy with him.

But after knowing what he had done i was really cursing him swayam😡 how can u do this.

Swayam & sharon's life was so perfect, they were in love😊 but one misunderstanding created the big problem

Swayam's jealousy & possessiveness just made him blind & couldn't see the sharon's pure love for him. And that to after knowing sharon is pregnant was really heart breaking💔

He did a very big mistake & now regretting it and wants his Sharon back And for that he done so many effort he read book, took classes which shows that he was really sorry for his behavior & regretting it😊

But for sharon it's really different for her too as she doesn't want to get hurt again as she was pregnant and doesn't want to stress herself and she really loves swayam so she was in confused state

But in the last the way swayam stands there to support her during delivery she realizes swayam is changed and really sorry for his behavior and his really caring and their baby is important for him too.

So all iz well in the last😃

Edited by arch2012 - 12 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

I don't know what I write in comment I already read kr version of all os so in short I love ur works n reading them once again on swaron is a treat ...:)

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Superb os !!!
M in luv wid ur works!!
U r an amazing writer!!

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sweet os :-) Swayam deserved the suffering

Please write more on SwaRon

Nikki <3

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

its awesome update...
d pain d sweet moments spent together..
how swayam's 1 stupid act changed their life n how they r now facing d outcome..
sharon forgave him but started avoiding him n gave him a tight slap for at he did to her..
swayam feeling bad for his behavior n waiting for his true sharon n trying to get her back...
it was fantastic..
sharon asking for time for al d damages done..
finally seeing swayam wit their baby she accepted for marriage knowing they r gonna ve a rocky start...
i really cherished readin d KR version n d same goes for this..
its true that a small moment ll change a persons life to hell n heaven...

Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago