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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Awesome Chapter

Very nice one

m defending UV scene was very good

So UV finds out M is alive

great but I dint expect it 2 b so soon

Precap seems Fabulous

Do cont soon

thanks for de PM

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

chapter 2 was

amazing 👏👏

i kean manyata stood for uday...👍🏼

aww loved d whole manveer bus scene...❤️

precap was

MINDBLOWING...

DO cont soon...

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Nimrit

@arna753

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

so finally uday comes to know manyata is alive.

precap was just amazing.

cont.soon thnks for the pm

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

ayyee hayye loved the manveer scene!!!!!! thankfully udya ne wo letters padhli!!!!!!! precap was veryy intersting!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

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blockme

@blockme

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

AWESOME STORY DEAR.LOVED IT VERY MUCH.THANKS 4 UR PM.

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Awesome super duper awesome update the whole thing was awesome
The best part was the precap it was superb
Please update super soon
Waiting and waiting
Loved this chapter
It was awesome
Mindblowing
Terrific
Fantastic
Intersting
Intruding
Superb
Great
Wonderful
Beautifully written
Update soon waiting
Thanks for the pm
Love u muah

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

It was amazing pls pm me whenver u update

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Woww...that was awsomeee...update
precpe is amzing
plzz..update soon thanx for PM.

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

CHAPTER 3
The bright rays of the sun filled the entire snow covered hill .the mountain looked like glittering pearl as the rays of sun hit on it ,but major udayveer singh was busy admiring something more beautiful ,his manyata .he did not plan on reaviling his identity to her now ,he wanted her to mind it out herself like he did the last night .for five years he spend endless night being sleep derived wondering about her ,crying for her ,taking up this army life was also because of her .he had craved for her so long and finally it seemed to pay off ,she was still sleeping on his chest like an innocent water baby unaware of everything around her ,uday could not get his eyes away from her such perfect curves ,such heavenly beauty , he was enjoying her being so close to him while she shivered in cold ,noticing her shiver uday took out his army jacket from his bag and wrapped it around her body .after sometime she felt warm again and slept peacefully again.
UDAY POV
you will never change you had always been so innocent if you had not lie to me that day we would be together now but i really feel bad about your family it is fine you have me now and my family is all yours chotti will really treat you nicely as for dad i do think he will be warm towards you so just be with me
END OF POV
it was supposed to be hard for uday to keep his anger and his tempting feeling away when he had such a beauitful girl sleeping on his chest ,the only barrier between them was his shirt whom he had loved for so long. the bus was back in the hilly routes again and it was really frustating as with every move the bus made a jerk ,uday tried his best to keep her safe but it all went in vain as with a strong jerk she got up, she found herself sleeping on his chest ,for a moment everything stopped and there was a beautiful eye lock .but soon manyata being aware of her position got apart and broke the eye lock .she looked down at the jacket and made a move to take it off as he turned towards her with a smile
UDAY: wear it ,this will keep you warm
MANYATA:no thanks i am already warm
she folded it and handed it to him at this uday felt his anger eruopting in himself as he could see her shivering in her salwar and that freaking shwaal of her was doing her no good at all so he approached her again
UDAY:hey remember one two week back we meet😉
MANYATA:one week not two😡
He had fire in his eyes this girl was really pissing him off and he had no idea why was he being treated by such harshness maybe because the first encounter in ladakh he presented himself really rude ,he kept his temper down and with a smirk continued
UDAY:yea i am really sorry for being rude
MANYATA:its not your fault major
they shared a warm smile ,manyata was finally being good to him and now keeping her ego away she took a turn for friendship
UDAY : i prefer being called uday veer rather than major
MANYATA: ok hey uday i am manyata i guess you already know last week
UDAY: You seem to really have a good memory are you a history lover?
MANYATA: no a primary government school history teacher in ladakh
UDAY: woa thats great who knew that a rj could become as teacher
uday cursed himself a hundred times for his slip of tongue while she was awestruck at him
MANYATA: excuse me
UDAY: Nothing so you are going to haridwar for a holiday
MANYATA: no i am going i have some work with guru acharya khausik
UDAY:then i guess we can go together even i am going there
MANYATA: No its ok i will be fine alone
UDAY: come on you helped me last night you saved my life so it my turn
MANYATA: for so many days even you are fighting for my life in the border i never got a chance to thanks you so i did last night
UDAY: Ok fine you got a point but still let me help
He persuded her so much that she could not help but agree to him.they kept chatting and after sometime the bus came to halt it reached its destination haridwar .he took care of her luggage and she really felt weird to such alarming care from this unknown man in a alienated place .manveer went to a nearby dhabha ,as by now it was afternoon and both were hungry .a young boy of nearly 16 waited there as they started to place there order
UDAY: Give 2 paneer butter masala
WAITER: sorry sir there is no paneer in stock please order some other vegetable
UDAY:fine than give 2 mushroom
WAITER:there is no mushroom either
UDAY: theek hai give two carrot soup
WAITER:sir there is no carrot either
uday was fumed at the waiter while manyata broke into laughter ,uday crushing his teeth
UDAY: what exactly is in your stock?
WAITER: Sir allu
Uday kept one of his hands in the waiter 's shoulder and with a fake smile
UDAY: fine get that and please ok please make it fast
the waiter nodded and went away uday 's eyes finally fixed on manyata her check had turn red after laughing as even uday cooled himself and started to join in the laugh it had been a long time since they laughted
MANYATA; i do not remeber the last time i laughed so much
UDAY:all thanks to mr waiter
She again broke into a laughter as this time he kept stairing at her ,she looked so innocent but a fear crept in his mind how will he manage to keep her with him ,he had to think of something ,and he had to think really fast .so he continued
UDAY: So what are your plans after lunch
MANYATA: Go to the rest house that i booked and then settle my luggage than i guess during evening we can leave for ashraam
UDAY: which guest house
MANYATA: pradhan guest house
uday had no idea about this guest house but he already had a plan in his head
UDAY:but that guest house is closed
MANYATA:but i made a reservation last night
UDAY: oh that is why they did not say you actually the owner 's relative have died so they had to leave
MANYATA:oh shit
UDAY:why don't you stay with me i have a house here
MANYATA:no its ok i will manage
UDAY:what will you manage there are no hotels come on stay at my place BREAK TIME GUYS I WILL UPDATE ASAP

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago