Door number 28 - a MG SS (completed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: had2bu

She'd always be near to him, yet afar. She had to be, in order to survive the fate she had been given. Wherever he roamed, she would follow. Wherever he resided, she would find an opening and settle down. Whenever he'd move on the next day, not leaving a trace of him behind, she'd do the exact same.

How simply heart touching! An answer to all lovers out there who would never wish even death to part them.

You won't leave me unless I let you, you will stay in my breath, reside in my eyes and your love will flow through my veins forever and ever even if death does us part.

This has to be one of the sweetest love stories I have read.

Take a bow Fozia!

I enjoyed it a lot.

👏👏

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

That was completely unexpected! I don't know what to say. Amazing!

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

beautiful ! what an end ! never expected this ! had tears in my eyes. but cann't bear maaneet being dead even in a story...

Originally posted by: dona86

totally unexpected update

loved it

Originally posted by: shabnam22

very different story and end was a shock...lovely..

Originally posted by: Asmi13

Wow what an awesome meeting of souls...bodies r mortal but souls r eternal. lt was wonderful though brought loads of😭😭

Originally posted by: punam2712

WHAT AN AWESOME STORY

IT WAS MEETING OF THE SOULS AS THEIR HEARTS ALREADY BELONGED TO EACH OTHER

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I read this a few hours after it was posted... it hasn't left me since and it hasn't allowed me to make a comment on it either. What would I have said if I'd talked about Door Number 28 after I'd finished reading it? 'Wow'? That'd hardly suffice...

Death... it feels like such a horror when we think about it as humans... it feels like such a no... But the dead, are they free from all of that? Is death for them horror-free? Fear-free? Want-free? Is it an end or a beginning of peace?

Geet and Maan... they live in death, unable to touch, unable to feel, unable to be truly, really free. Still... I can feel their peace to their very cores.

Their angst, their fear, their hesitation, all of it is washed away by their love. The love that allows them to overcome the worry that their very next action could take them away from each other forever, really, really forever.

"Don't you trust me?"

"With all of my soul."

This says everything I'm trying to. Lines of the like are often used in films, in books, in life, but I've never believed it, never felt it. Until this, until now. Here, in this indisputable masterpiece of yours, there is no question of it being untrue. Of course it's true. Of course.

Death is the end of all... all but one...

Oh Fozia... 🤗

I can see why you used the small font earlier. I loved it, to be honest, and, had you not changed it to help with your readers' ease, I would have made an ardent request for its return.

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful

loved it dear

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

amazing

Originally posted by: Tyro

beautiful...👏

Originally posted by: fantesy

oh god itz so unexpected ...awsuuum...loved it

Originally posted by: flowers4u

very beautiful