Door number 28 - a MG SS (completed) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful ! what an end ! never expected this ! had tears in my eyes. but cann't bear maaneet being dead even in a story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very different story and end was a shock...lovely..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow what an awesome meeting of souls...bodies r mortal but souls r eternal. lt was wonderful though brought loads of😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHAT AN AWESOME STORY
IT WAS MEETING OF THE SOULS AS THEIR HEARTS ALREADY BELONGED TO EACH OTHER
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read this a few hours after it was posted... it hasn't left me since and it hasn't allowed me to make a comment on it either. What would I have said if I'd talked about Door Number 28 after I'd finished reading it? 'Wow'? That'd hardly suffice...

Death... it feels like such a horror when we think about it as humans... it feels like such a no... But the dead, are they free from all of that? Is death for them horror-free? Fear-free? Want-free? Is it an end or a beginning of peace?

Geet and Maan... they live in death, unable to touch, unable to feel, unable to be truly, really free. Still... I can feel their peace to their very cores.

Their angst, their fear, their hesitation, all of it is washed away by their love. The love that allows them to overcome the worry that their very next action could take them away from each other forever, really, really forever.


"Don't you trust me?"

"With all of my soul."

This says everything I'm trying to. Lines of the like are often used in films, in books, in life, but I've never believed it, never felt it. Until this, until now. Here, in this indisputable masterpiece of yours, there is no question of it being untrue. Of course it's true. Of course.

Death is the end of all... all but one...

Oh Fozia... 🤗

I can see why you used the small font earlier. I loved it, to be honest, and, had you not changed it to help with your readers' ease, I would have made an ardent request for its return.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
oh god itz so unexpected ...awsuuum...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: yappingduck

never in my wildest dreams i had thought that the story would end like this...but this was really heartwarming and gave me goosebumps too, probbaly beacuse i am reading this during ungodly hours... hope i dont dream of spirits hovering over me

loved ur story👏


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: had2bu

She'd always be near to him, yet afar. She had to be, in order to survive the fate she had been given. Wherever he roamed, she would follow. Wherever he resided, she would find an opening and settle down. Whenever he'd move on the next day, not leaving a trace of him behind, she'd do the exact same.

How simply heart touching! An answer to all lovers out there who would never wish even death to part them.
You won't leave me unless I let you, you will stay in my breath, reside in my eyes and your love will flow through my veins forever and ever even if death does us part.
This has to be one of the sweetest love stories I have read.
Take a bow Fozia!
I enjoyed it a lot.
👏👏


Thank you very much! A little sad I will admit, but a great love is almost always tragic...

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

That was completely unexpected! I don't know what to say. Amazing!


Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

beautiful ! what an end ! never expected this ! had tears in my eyes. but cann't bear maaneet being dead even in a story...


At least their love is still alive... I hope that brings you some comfort over their deaths...

Originally posted by: dona86

totally unexpected update

loved it


Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: shabnam22

very different story and end was a shock...lovely..


Thank you, a little bit of shock is always good for the system... that's my justification 😆

Originally posted by: Asmi13

Wow what an awesome meeting of souls...bodies r mortal but souls r eternal. lt was wonderful though brought loads of😭😭


I should have forewarned you all to grab your MSK style handkerchiefs beforehand...

Originally posted by: punam2712

WHAT AN AWESOME STORY

IT WAS MEETING OF THE SOULS AS THEIR HEARTS ALREADY BELONGED TO EACH OTHER


That is a beautiful description of the story, I really like that 😳

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I read this a few hours after it was posted... it hasn't left me since and it hasn't allowed me to make a comment on it either. What would I have said if I'd talked about Door Number 28 after I'd finished reading it? 'Wow'? That'd hardly suffice...

Death... it feels like such a horror when we think about it as humans... it feels like such a no... But the dead, are they free from all of that? Is death for them horror-free? Fear-free? Want-free? Is it an end or a beginning of peace?

Geet and Maan... they live in death, unable to touch, unable to feel, unable to be truly, really free. Still... I can feel their peace to their very cores.

Their angst, their fear, their hesitation, all of it is washed away by their love. The love that allows them to overcome the worry that their very next action could take them away from each other forever, really, really forever.


"Don't you trust me?"

"With all of my soul."

This says everything I'm trying to. Lines of the like are often used in films, in books, in life, but I've never believed it, never felt it. Until this, until now. Here, in this indisputable masterpiece of yours, there is no question of it being untrue. Of course it's true. Of course.

Death is the end of all... all but one...

Oh Fozia... 🤗

I can see why you used the small font earlier. I loved it, to be honest, and, had you not changed it to help with your readers' ease, I would have made an ardent request for its return.


Oh Queen Z! Your comments make me sound like a much better writer than I actually am, this one has left me speechless! I don't really know what to say, so I shall thank you for the bottom of my heart 🤗

Yep, the small font did play its part in the story, but it would have been of no use if half of the readers couldn't read it...

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful

loved it dear


Thank you!


Thanks 😊


Thanks Jyoti 😳

Originally posted by: fantesy

oh god itz so unexpected ...awsuuum...loved it


Thank you so much!


Thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Once again, an earnest thank you to everyone who read and enjoyed the story. It was a little risky for me writing this and I was in two minds over whether I should post it or not, but I'm really glad I did, the feedback for this has been wonderful :)


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