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guys having real bad strep throat infection ...so was noot able to update...will try to update asap...sorry😕 for this delay
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NP, take are of your health first 😃
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u r awesome writer nice story...
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hey its over a week since u last updated...i didn't know dat u were unwell so i kept bugging u with my posts so sorry for that,...hope u recover soon...
plz update as soon as u get well...m missing it very badly...
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Not those fun updates but some action packed updates ...hope you guys will enjoy my amatuer writing...
chapter 28

Madhu :- RK TUM, ???

RK:- Haan biwi Main hi main

Madhu rubbed her eyes with her palms to cool her self down.

Madhu:- RK I am in need to go somewhere and it is a question of life and death. Now is not the time for your antics.

RK:- Get inside Biwi. We will talk on the way back.

Madhu:- you don't get it do you??

RK:- Last time , get in side Biwi. There is no point going onto my wrong side. It will not gain you anything.

Madhu knew that she did not stand a chance getting into any furthertussle with him. She had work around him so she got in the car.

RK:- Ordered the driver Ghar.

Madhu :- Switch off the hooter and the blinker.

RK:- You attach a lot of unneccesary value to this fanfare.

Madhu:- RK I need to go to Kamathipura. It is urgent. My entire hardwork is at stake.

RK:- And why should I care.

Madhu:- Because it is not about us. It is about a lot of your fans who love you who have made you what you are

RK:- Who writes your dialogues Biwi

Madhu:- RK I need to go to someone who has been helping us get closer to nabbing the drug lord.

RK:- carry on I am listening. This would make a good script BIwi. Narrate it with the entire action seqeuences too…

Madhu:- Ok what must I do so that you let me go?

RK:- Ahaan Bargaining……that too from me…Nice ….. try again

Madhu:- Let me go now and I will do 1 thing that you want me to do…

RK:- Only 1….not sold

Madhu:- arrey !!! what do you want???dont you even understand the gravity of this entire situation???

RK:- 5 minutes Biwi…only 5 minutes you have to give me an acceptable price …otherwise I will be off market???

Madhu stared at him as if he was the craziest person she had ever come across. She then said to her self " why did I even bother being sensible around you".

Madhu:- you name your price then?

RK:- OK two things …1 time for insulin along with a snack and 2 you are coming to USA with me.

Madhu wanted to protest with the USA thing but then she thought " I am not Harishchandra's daughter so chillax abhi kaam nikal Madhu baad ki baad mein dekheinge."

She was busy thinking her way out of USA trip when some thing pricked her upper arm she squealed in pain

Madhu:- Ouch!!! What??? You did not warn me…

RK:- he fixed his gaze at her and said don't even think of backing out…..we are going to USA. He started to bring his face closer to hers….

Madhu felt uncomfortable at his proximity. She tried to say something but even before she could utter a word RK stuffed her mouth with a big chunk of boiled sweet Potato..yucks . Madhu felt like throwing up but she swallowed. She felt a slight disappointment.

RK:- what were you thinking biwi?? He winked at her..

Madhu:- RK next time get something better to eat….

RK:- sorry biwi this is the best you could get, and finish it. Kamathipura Chalna hai…he yelled at the driver yikes biwi Kamathipura????????

Madhu:- yikes as if it is not inhabited by humans……

RK:- Oh No!!! no sermons please, By the way whom are you going to meet there?? I don't think you should go there in this dress

Madhu:- I don't even have my Service revolver….alll thanks to you.

RK took out her revolver from the bag on the floor and pointed it at her. She was startled…

RK:- all thanks to me.

Madhu tried to get it from him.

RK:- A..a.. ( he pulled his hand away) What do we say Biwi

Madhu:- Thanks Pati

She got her revolver along with bullets. She indeed was thankful.

RK:- what about your dress. Sorry to say no matter how expensive this one is but it makes you look like one……..

He left the sentence incomplete because he could see his words had caused a gape straight where he intended them to. What was new to him was that it hurt him too. Nevertheless he smiled a very toxic smile.

Madhu looked out of the window oh what a roller coaster past two days have been. If such was her life going to be could she really take it???

Madhu :- liberty Hotel ke pehle wali crossing par rok dena driver aur wireless on karna. Rk I will drop out at the crossing you go your way. It would not do you any good being seen with someone like ………

RK:-You r right biwi. He cut in really viciously.

It cut through her again. What was she expecting an apology, or may be an explanation. From whom one who could go to any extend to get married to her. Why in the first place did he want to marry her!!!! It brought back to her the slaps four slaps……how could she even dare to forget them. She realized every time he would rise higher with her only to make her fall greater. Her only escape not to let her expectations loose.

Driver:- Wireless madam.

She tuned into to the nearby police station and informed the Sub inspector to reach the spot with four policeman dressed as commoners.

RK:- Your stop. See you tomorrow.

Madhu:- yeah good night, and thankyou for all the kindness you have shown towards me. I really appreciate your concern.

Her words were as cold as frozen metal but RK appeared least bit concerned. He left Madhu and went straight ahead.

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Chapter 29

Madhu walked to the point. For the first time she felt insecured . The number of snide remarks she heard that day were good enough to give her tremors for a whole life. As soon as she reached liberty hotel she looked around her to locate where could Gafuran be hiding. She saw Chand Rangrez store, and then looked above it. There was a small residential kholi kind of thing. Gafuran could very well be there.

She looked around to check if her backup was there. She could not see anyone. She contemplated her situation and her options. In the end she decided though it was rash but she needed to take this rash step. She went around the store and at the back were the wooden old stair case quite like ruins. She managed to climb up without pulling any unnecessary attention to herself her dress was actually aiding her.

At the end of the steps was a small terrace in a very broken condition. She could hear someone coughing and then she heard a womans voice telling someone.

(though I really wanted to carry on in Hindi here as that gives the feel of the illiterate and really crude characters but for the benefit of non hindi speaking friends who requested me to not write in Hindi. I will carry on in English)

Woman:- give me a sip of water.

The voice was of Gafuran. Madhu literally wanted to barge in but she crept closer to the doorway of the room the sound was coming from as silently as she could. She heard Gafuran again

Gaf:- what you are looking for you will never get if you don't let me drink water.

She coughed violently again.

The man:- keys give me the keys you idiot. Give it to me or I reveal your daughter's identity to the whole world. I have heard she is getting married to some police officer.

Madhu could feel the long time illness of Gafuran getting the better of her. She thought to herself what keys was this man talking about. The man this time hit Gafuran with his booted toe in her abdomen. Gafuran let out a heart wrenching wail. Madhu could take it no more. She grabed her revolver and barged straight in. She screamed

Madhu:- Police (pointing the revolver to the man in his early thirties) police don't move or I shoot you.

Gafuran :- Huzur ….

Madhu looked at her and immediately got it that she was trying to hide Madhu's identity from this man otherwise she use to address her as choti chaudhrain.

Madhu:- who are you?

The man:- Devraj chaudhary and since when did police started employing chamiya's like you.

Madhu was taken aback by his name. It did not take long for her to understand that this was her brother. She lost her concentration for a mere second and Devraj hit the glass that was lying next to his toes. It went straight flying and onto Madhu's forehead. The glass was a worn out aluminum glass with blunt edges. It did nothing more than bringing her back to reality. She moved forward, and hit his groin with her knee.

Madhu:- this for calling me chamiya

DC:- Ouch….

He went rolling to the ground. She hit him again this time in his abdomen.

Madhu :- this for hitting an old helpless women. Why are you here??

DC somehow collected himself and tried to punch Madhu in her face. Madhu dodged the punch and shoved his head with much force into the wall behind her.

Madhu:- I can kill you with bare hands. Why are you here?

Gafuran:- Huzur……her voice was lost in another bout of a violent cough followed by a spurt of blood from her mouth…..Huzur go away from here fast. His men will be here any minute.

She labored hard to breathe. Madhu looked at her and felt a stab of pain in her gut. This was the woman who was responsible for their very survival. If not for her she and her mother both would have been murdered by her father Balraj Chaudhary.

She hit his head in the wall again. This time he lost his senses.

Gafuran :- choti chaudharain mallik….he is your brother….

Madhu bent down to her with a glass of water. She made her sip it.

Gafuran:- don't touch me …it is infectious ….

Madhu:- what did he want why was he here??

Gafuran:- he used to come to Rani the girl in that high society kehkashan Hotel in Juhu. His men killed her because she had come to know that they were drug smuglers. She managed to get hold of his consignment and she hid it in her bank locker and the keys with me. It is in that box. ( Gafuran pointed towards the little box that was lying open on the ground.) Choti Chaudhrain you should go…he is not alone…

Madhu:- where is my father ?? do you have any info on him….( she rubbed her chest again

Gafuran:- he is in America these days but mostly lives in Mexico. The mexico police is after him. I learnt it all from Rani.

Madhu:-Where in America?

Gafuran:- Las vegas.. he is in process to build a juakhana Rani said "Kaisina." Choti chadharain sarkar take this box with you. Break it's upper sheat I have hid the keys in it and address and number of rani's locker. It also has a necklace I wanted to give it to Trishna for her wedding but…I will not live to see it. You married that devil to save her did you not, or rather for me. Choti chaudhrain sarkar when there is a day in your life when you feel truly happy then wear this. This belongs to your mother. She had brought it from her mayka on her wedding. Your father had pulled this from her neck infront of me to give it to me as I had danced in their wedding. Tell your mother I could not serve her well. Please beg forgiveness on my behalf…..

Madhu wanted to stop her…but she heard some steps

Gafuran :- huzur run, run away from here fast. She coughed violently again but did not recover this time. She breathed her last. Madhu hugged her. She wanted to arrange for her funeral but now was not the time she needed to run….

She turned to grab the box and got up to get out of the room but on the door stood 4 huge and ugly men. She immediately pointed her gun towards them.

Madhu:- get out of my way or I will……

DC had come back to his senses long time back and heard their conversation. He grabed her hair from behind and pushed her full force towards those men. Madhu lost balance and fall down on her face. She did a somersault and grabed one of the men and twisted his neck with a plop sound he died, she threw him on to the other three.

This diverted the others for a few seconds. She noticed DC now had the box. She needed to cross the room to reach DC. The rest three were now surrounding her. One of them had a country made revolver and one had a knife. She saw the dead man's revolver in his back belt. As soon as the man infront of her fired at her she split down and grabed the revolver from the dead man. The bullet from the other man hit the man infront and bam he was gone too. Two dead two more to go. DC was now a little scared. He took out his pistol and shot at Madhu Madhu had seen DC moving from the corner of her eyes and knew the other two were not concentrating at her even before the man with the knife knew she pulled him down infront of her and the bullet from DC's pistol hit his chest area. He was injured beyond repair but was yet alive. Madhu got time to shoot on the knee of the last man alive. The shot shattered his knee and he doubled up in pain. Now she was face to face with her brother. Both pointing revolvers to each other. Madhu had kicked the revolver lying on the ground next to the injured man away from him. So he was rendered useless. It was now blood to blood. Both deadly and unforgiving. DC said,

DC:- so you are asp Madhubala Shamsher Mallik….Aka Madhubala Balraj chaudhary. Let us see what is more fiery blood in my veins or salt in yours.

Madhubala was concentrating on him she did not hear a word nor did she say a word…she heard more footsteps.

DC laughed and said "my men" no one can save you now… "If dad were here I would have taken you to him with love and respect and then killed you infront of him. Oh how happy he would have felt. So sorry he ain't here as you already know so no spare moments for you."

Madhubala was concentrating on his movements and was trying to guess who the upcoming men could be. From what she heard she knew his aid would be here any moment. She had just this minute to act. DC was busy talking and hurling insults at her. He did not notice her pace at him. Within a few second she had crossed the room and was now behind him. She had knife in one hand. She grabed him by his throat and kept the knife right on his throat. Three more men were now in front of her. All his men, he was now scared to death he had seen his sister had no inhibitions in killing. She actually was a killing machine. She said to those men "a step forward and I kill your boss." They all stopped then and there. They saw all their men gone and knew this woman could kill. So they backed a few inches off. Madhu looked down the broken window behind her and guessed she was atleast 15 feet above the ground. The ground was solid concrete. She knew she would not survive the jump down the window in one piece. She needed someone as her airbag and she knew who it would be. He still cluthed the box in his hands. She turned him in just one strong move and told him to jump. He looked down and even before he could say anything she braced herself on his back and Kicked hard on the window. Much as she expected the window caved in and she jumped in a blink. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

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Full on action packed epi.
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Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Full on action packed epi.

hope you liked it...😊
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exciting ... waiting for the next update ..
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wow...another update after a long wait...and i so much loved the action sequence in this update...thanku for a wonderful update...
hope u r fine now...

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