MG OS: Will she ever be... Prologue pg 1 5th feb

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Hii i am her with an OS (Only 2 parts). Hope you enjoy, this is not a sad os i promise, We may see this kind of geet in our daily life, may be one of your friend is like geet.



WILL SHE EVER BE...



A new morning, a new ray of hope, we always welcome a fresh morning with a small smile so that the day goes well as per our wish. But everyday wont be same, every day we face so much in our life, we learn so much, we laugh, we cry and many more. This is life, but this is a story of a girl who starts her morning with tension. Thinking the whole night what will happen the next day. Tension is part of life. Some people get tensed for very small things, its their nature no one can change.

This is the story of Geet Handa who is very shy, don't have a habit of sharing her pain to anyone. She doesn't talk much, but has many friends. But none is her best friend. She is in contact with her school friend, the only girl read her loneliness. A friend whom geet can never miss in her life. But geet is full of life, loves to tease others, her favorite hobby is to listen to music 24*7. She is the girl every men dream off, a perfect life partner. She is the only child to their parents, who is most pampered girl but at the same time strict. She don't like seeing anyone hurt that too because of her. She is also a short tempered, but never hurts anyone. When she is angry she locks herself in her room and cry her heart out. A typical girl, who knows only how to love others, never hates anyone.

Even though she doesn't share her pain to anyone, but there is a person who can read her eyes, and can easily understand in what state of mind she is. And that person is Maan Khurana, geet's friend from school and also family friends. They know about each other very well, their likes, dis-likes but they don't talk much. They wish on each others birthday and talk when they meet in any birthday party or any marriage. He is 2 years elder to geet. Maan's brother and geet are class mates.

Both geet and maan are middle class families, maan completed his engineering a year back but still jobless. He is trying his level best to crack in the upcoming interview. He don't want to miss this opportunity. From past an year he attended so many interviews but none cracked. He want to clear the loans which his parents took for their studies, he don't want them to suffer more because of them anymore. In this year maan did part time job and sent the money to his younger brother who is still studying. He is responsible as well as caring about his family. Though maan and geet talk occasionally still they are besties.

Maan knows geet is very shy and is scared of small small things, he tried many times not to get scared and tensed. That time geet thinks she should be brave but when it comes to implementation she again get scared and fell low of herself and thinks she cant do anything other than to depend on others.

As I told before geet don't share anything with anyone not even to her parents. One such thing is that she loves maan insanely, crazily. But afraid of expressing her feelings to him thinking may be he don't love her. if she express her love to him, it may effect their friendship. Will she be ever confess her feelings to maan, does maan has feelings to geet? or just treats her as friend? There are so manu questions but there is no answer.

Will geet ever be open herself to anyone? At least maan whom she loves crazily? She will be thinking about him 24*7. She loves when he teases her, she loves when he tells everything single thing which happens in his life. He tells her about his friends, his pranks, his happy moments, his sad moments. Geet listens to everything with a smile, but she never tells anything about her or her friends. Will maan be able to recognize her love? Or their paths are different and never be able to meet each other.

This is a OS which has only 2 parts.


I dont know how much response i get for this, and even i am not expecting much. But this kind of people are there around us, who are shy and cant express themselves, some people may over some their fear and be successful in their life and some people cant. So here is a small try to bring out the emotions how they feel and suffer..


Waiting for your response.


Love

Chinni 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a lovely start..
In most cases geet resembles me..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept dear

and u are true there are such people around who are shy and all
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Prologue Story Dear
waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow beautiful concept.

loved it.

geet & me are quite similar in shyness.😳

upd.soon.

Tfd pm.

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nice concept will be seeing futher ..😊
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Superbbb prologue..
Waiting for first part..
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Good start

Will be waiting for update
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will be wating for update prolouge sounds good
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its nice
geet n her lv unknown to maanu
waiting to kniow more

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