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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 9

I was shifting aimlessly on my bed, all because of the vivid colorful dreams I was dreaming. I didn't wanted to leave this nest of peace and comfort where I felt all cozy and warm. But suddenly I could feel vibration on the ribs of my hand. It felt so uneasy' disorienting. I could no longer concentrate on my beautiful dream. I writhed and moaned and finally woke when the vibration became intolerable.

After rubbing my eyes several times, the vision of my cell ringing & vibrating came in view. Maan, I read. Oh hell. I immediately picked up the call.

Hello. I murmured, my voice still groggy.

Geet.. I'm calling u since half an hour.. Where the hell were u.. I was so worried.. Why didn't u picked up the phone..?

Hey hey, calm down. I was just sleeping. What was there to worry about?

What was there to worry about? You were not picking up my call.. n you're asking what was there to worry about.. For once I thought.. he stopped mid-sentence.

What? Thought what?

Nothing.

Now this is what I don't like. Please tell me. What did you thought?

That you.. you know maybe your mind started working and the screws of your mind finally fell in place and you.. you decided to stay away from me.. And I would have appreciated that.. just that I would have been relieved if you would have told me instead of ignoring me.. I..

God.. stop.. are you like mad or what? Still undergoing 'I'm-the-worst-choice-for-you' thing? Stop it, okay? To bring some light upon the fact that just isn't settling well in your mind, let me tell you.. you were the one all hell bent for leaving me.. I convinced you to stay.. with me.. I told u a hundred times that I love u.. and just so that you don't forget it.. atleast for today.. let me tell you again.. I love you.. okay..

He just chuckled.

Bas meri basanti.. take a breath.. calm down.. so much of anger is not good for your health.

What did you call me?

Basanti. He chucked again.

What?

You don't understand? Let me spell out.. b-a-s-a-n..

I cut him mid-way

You don't need to spell it.. my hearing power has not been all consumed by you yet.. I can fathom what your speaking.. but Mr Idiotic.. let me tell you.. I'm not basanti..

Oh, so you are Miss stubborn.

I'm not stubborn.

And I'm not idiotic. But stubborn and basanti is definitely what you are.

No, It's not. I whined.

He laughed

Ur such a child geet. Specially when you whine like this. Wish I could see your face right now. I really want to see your expressions. Would have helped me more.

Shut up. And helped, how?

Reducing my Blood Pressure.

How so?

Oh miss basanti, don't you know? You can make me laugh like hell! Your cute antics.. oh!

I rolled my eyes.

Stop with this basanti stuff. And when was your BP high?

Just about 15 minutes before.. when for half an hour I was trying to call you and you were busy snoring.

I don't snore. I whined again.

He laughed again.

Well, I'll find that out one day myself.

I felt my cheeks going red when I fathomed what he meant.

Sure, you will. I whispered.

Will you allow me one day? He asked in a husky voice.

Yes.. I whispered.. Only if..

Only if?

Only if u promise to be my side forever. I might just need some time.. you know.. to get to that level.. I mean..

I know geet.. You have all my life.. I'll wait for you.. forever

I'm sure it wont take forever for me to come running in your arms and kiss..

I stopped.. realizing what I just said.

Um.. I mean

He chuckled.

So miss basanti will come running in my arms without taking forever?

You're such a tease!

Tease is my middle name. And you wont know how lovely it is to tease you. You made my morning!

I tried to suppress my smile but ended up giggling.

I love this.

Love what?

The sound of you giggling.. feels so divine to hear..

So Mr tease turned into Mr I'm-all-up-for-complimenting-you-today? When, how? I tried to sound a little melodramatic.

When miss basanti started giggling and my heart started jumping with joy!

Oh, I thought normal human organs don't jump!

Well.. don't worry.. if that's what you want.. I'll restrict it from even moving.. but oh that can lead to me being snached away from this world.. and you.. and..

Hey, stop. I shouted on him.

No jokes like this. Aisi sab baatein nahi kartein hain please.

I was just kidding geet..

No.. just don't..

Okay ma'am.. whatever you say.

Good..

And let me tell u this once again because you tend to forget things real quick.. I love you.. and you are just not allowed to leave me..

Okay ma'am.. I'll keep that in mind.. for ever

And back at you.

Oh.. I'll oblige this one command of yours so seriously that even if you ask me to leave you, I wont.

That's good.. Always remember this.. even if I ask you to leave me.. don't leave me. Suddenly all humor was gone from his voice and it was full of seriousness.

I don't think you would dare do such a thing.. nobody messes with me, you see!

Geet.. you never know.. I don't believe myself in such matters.. my anger always tends to ruin everything..

And suddenly his voice was so sad.. so full of distress.

With me.. nothing will ruin anything.. I wont let any such thing happen.. ever

Oh I so hope you are true..

I am.

I love you geet.

I love you too.

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Love,

Mahima

Edited by mahimak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
got an update after a long time ! but loved it ! maan's insecurities are going to be there for long time to come. even a small thing like not picking up phone for an hour brings him to the edge.are they going to increase with time or reduce with their togetherness... loved their conversation... but when will they meet personally...waiting already...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

got an update after a long time ! but loved it ! maan's insecurities are going to be there for long time to come. even a small thing like not picking up phone for an hour brings him to the edge.are they going to increase with time or reduce with their togetherness... loved their conversation... but when will they meet personally...waiting already...


Thanx a lot deary 😃
And well.. they will meet soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update

maan saying geet basanti was cute

loved it update
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...loved d way maan was teasing geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb conversation. Waiting 4 maaneet meeting, amne samne wali.
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Posted: 12 years ago
he is afraid that he might say or do something to make her go away...
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Posted: 12 years ago
THOUGH THIS STORY IS DIFFERENT, BUT SOMEHOW GEET DOESNT SOUND 15, SHE FEELS MORE MATURE
AND HOW CAN THEY BOTH FALL IN LOVE OVER THE PHONE LOOKING AT THE AGE DIFFERENCE
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 9
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update..
maan's insecurities are still lingering..
seems like geet vl have a tough tym in winning his trust on ds matter..

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