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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

oyee mere Maan ko kuch nahi bolne ka 😡


WO alag Che 😳




ya ya bohut hi alag and dumb hai...
gadha kahin ka...
never his batti jalthi at the right time but always very late...
grrr...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal


Me just here
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Updating kab tak re ?? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating in few minutes
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part - 3


It was a very small beautiful cottage something which I always dreamt to have as my dream house but dreams were never meant for me I just have nightmares in my share. Now like tears even dreams refuse to come to my eyes.

"Geet chale", Maan called out to me to which I meekly nodded but the thought itself to share this house with Maan was burning the pits of my stomach, till now I had successfully avoided Maan's questioning gaze on me the presence of the driver had kept me safe but I knew now there was no escape the moment I enter the house Maan will make sure that he gets to the root of the cause," Kaise bachungi unke sawaalon se, kaise chupa paungi unse apni sacchaai, Babaji saare imtihaan kyun aapne mere hi hisse mein likhe hein".

"Geet tum poori tarah bheeg chuki ho upar kamre mein jaake change karlo".

"Jee" I nodded and moved towards the steps

As she went upstairs, I know Geet you are trying to avoid me,"nazaren chura rahi ho Geet iska matlab kuch chupa rahi ho, par tum chaahe kitni bhi koshish karlo mein sach ka pata laga kar hi rahunga, kisne tumhaari yeh haalat ki hein woh jaan kar hi rahunga tumhaari aankh se bahe har ek aansoon ki keemat chukani hogi unko, Maan Singh Khurana khud gin gin ke badlaa lega, mein khud bhi tumhaara gunehgaar hu tum jo chahe sazaa de do par iss waqt mujhe sach jaan na hein", promising myself I picked up my cell to make a call, "Hmmm Maan Singh Khurana, I want you to find out...".

I hurried up to the room and barged straight in the washroom as it seemed to be the safest place for me for now. I locked the door and stood below the cold shower the chilling water had no effect on my numb self I stood under the water recollecting the events never had in my dreams thought in one day I will face so much. Suddenly I felt something warm trickling down my cheeks were they my tears no can't be its been long since I have cried then why today, Is Maan's presence stirring the long lost emotions in me,

"Nahi Geet tu kamzor nahi pad sakti tu bahot aage nikal aayi hein apne jazbaaton pe kaabu rakh".

I could see my own reflection talking to me then another part of me also came up saying ,"Tujhe to khush hona chahiye Geet tum Maan ke paas ho woh aa gaye hein ab sab theek ho jaayega". Both my reflections started confronting me, I felt chocked and suffocated as if they were closing into me, " Nahi, chale jao yahan se mujhe akela chod do, jao ", I screamed and felt my head spinning and then everything just blanked out...

I had just finished the call when I heard her scream a panic gripped my heart I ran up to see the washroom door was locked and I could hear the water running what must have happened, I called out to her but to no avail I started banging the door seeing no other option I started to break open the door after a few attempts I succeeded, only to see Geet lying unconscious on the floor with shower running over her, she hadn't even changed her saree.

I picked her up in my arms and brought her out of the washroom her body had gone cold in the chilling weather and on top of it the freezing water. What is wrong with her why is she making it so difficult for me. I patted her to wake her up, checked her pulse which was dipping, a sudden fear encompassed my heart.

No Geet nothiing will happen to you, "Mein tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga, samjhi tum". I looked around for her clothes only to realize her bag was left behind in the car,I had no time to waste first and foremost need to change her wet clothes I pulled my Kurta which was lying on the bed there was no time for looking out for other clothes, closed the lights and changed her.

My heart pained to see her like a lifeless body she was so close to me yet all I could feel was fear. Yes I was scared for the first time of loosing her yet again. I brought her near the fireplace and also put on the heater so that she gains some warmth. She was shivering in my embrace I held her ever so tightly afterall she was MY LIFE, yes She was MY LOVE, MY LIFE, MY SOLE REASON TO LIVE though I realized it too late but now I know it and nobody can change this REALITY OF MY, MAAN SINGH KHURANA'S LIFE and as confirming my claim on her I realized that her maang was filled with my blood, my right hand was bleeding may be in attempt to break open the door I hurt myself and while dressing her I marked her as mine.Not only she was my life but now from this very moment she was MY WIFE!!!

Babaji had already signaled it when I met Geet her maang was washed away in the rain and she gazing the red coloured water sans any emotion said it all, I do have a fair share of idea what must have happened.

She had walked again into my life WITH NO TRACES OF HER PAST and I will ensure THIS WILL BE OUR NEW BEGINNING...

"Bas Geet mein aa gaya hu tumhaare paas hamesha ke liye aur ab tumhe kahi nahi jaane doonga, TUM MERI HO SIRF MERI aur ab tumhe mujhse duniya ki koi bhi taaqat alag nahi kar paayegi. Yeh Maan Singh Khurana ka vada hein tumse"!!!!!!

Like feeling secured in his arms a sense of calm n comfort enveloped her, she knew she is safe here he will never leave her but suddenly a hidden fear that always lingered in her heart of, what if he leaves her again she will again be left all alone... she started getting restless again Maan held her all the more tightly," Mein hoon Geet tumhare paas yahi hoon, kabhi tumhe chod ke nahi jaaunga" like understanding her fears he assured her.

He covered her in a blanket started rubbing her hands and legs.Slowly she started gaining warmth n consciousness too. Her pale face started gaining some colour I felt my life returning to me, I breathed a sense of relief.

She opened her eyes to see him worriedly looking at her,the next instant he just crushed her to him saying,"Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to...mein kitna darr gaya tha". She just hugged him to assure him she is fine nothing has happened to her. He broke the hug still not breaking the eye contact he started randomly kissing her to believe that she is fine, with him here so close in real and now forever...

Today his emotions were taking a toll on him the wall he had built around him shattered breaking all his controls...

He looked at her as if asking her permission and all he could see in her eyes was pure surrender no questions, no doubts nothing just PURE LOVE that had bound them forever from their very first meeting to their painful separation and now giving up all their restrictions and accepting their untold emotions listening to their hearts they became ONE. A UNION OF THEIR HEART, MIND, BODY AND SOUL...

Both remained in each others embrace treasuring their PRICELESS MOMENT with One promising to himself never to let them go and another to live this moment to the fullest so that it is inscribed in her soul as a memory of her LOVE for her lonely journey ahead...


Part - 4



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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
did they just do it😲

😡

hetz😡

what happened to maan ko tadpana😡

the last line does give me some relief 🥱 hope he has his work cut out for him 😉

Geet has endured a lot it seems n she doesnt hae any expectations it seems

Hope the rainbow comes soon after this stormy night

lovely update 🤗

THAP THAP THAP


P>S> ye itna chotu kyu tha😡

Edited by aashluvsmaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
babjiii

itni nautanki
Avi n heytz

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Edited by aashluvsmaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

babjiii


itni nautanki
Avi n heytz

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

it was the best till now..

their emotions made them one finally..

but i really want to know wats was in her past..

she was married tat is true but wat happened

and no please dont separate them
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part heytal..
maan asked the men to find about geets life..
he will not leave them...
geet is hiding herself from maan..just 2 escape from his questions..
geet unconscious..
maan filled her maang unknowingly..
i think this is what u said..
n both are one by all means as husband n wife..
loved the part dear..nice..
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di
want to know what is the past i mean geet forehead washed with rain water mean she was married kya

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