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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

lol sowwie..didnt see u


was chatting on SOL

i am not fine :(

tu bata


kya hua 🤔 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
been under teh wetaher since last week

bukhaar ...URTI...

meds ke side effects :(


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

been under teh wetaher since last week


bukhaar ...URTI...

meds ke side effects :(




omg like me I m in bad health from more than month.hop u ll recover soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

How r u feeling now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating in few minutes
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb!!!!!!!!
Amazing
Loved each bit of the update... :)
amazing concept :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jazzu..tujhe kya hua? fel better tooo

@muski...better feeling today..purani beemari better hai./...bas meds ke side effect rang laing 🤢

how are teh munchkins? and whens u updating DA?
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE
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Many of you are confused about Geet's marital status
Want to clear it out


YES Geet was married in the past, why and to whom will be out in future updates.

The prologue mentions how her so called family ruined her life and now she is totally broken, shattered and homeless.

The rain washing away her Sindoor was symbolically used showing that she is free from her past henceforth and she meets Maan, Her Destiny.

Maan unknowingly filled her maang with his blood and he has accepted her as his wife.

Geet's POV on her filled maang will be out in this update

Read on...
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



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Part 4

Faint traces of sunlight broke my slumber it seemed after a lifetime I had such a peaceful sleep, I opened my eyes to the most heavenly sight in front of me My Maan and I was sleeping on his bare chest then slowly last night events came back to me our togetherness I shied at my own thought was it for real or a dream I immediately closed my eyes I was scared that if I opened my eyes my dream may disappear, some months back one such a pleasant morning dream has turned into my worst nightmare.

I slowly moved out his embrace I grabbed the spread from the bed and covered myself when my gaze shifted to the mirror as I scanned myself I shied at the thought of our moments together, my body was marked by him forever he had been wild but I knew it were our bottled up emotions, words which were never voiced found their way out as expression of our LOVE, I blushed at my own thoughts when a the prominent dark colour on my forehead stood out on my face caught my attention it seemed as blood, "MAAN", I gasped and turned around to check on him and saw a cut on his right palm it was indeed his blood but how did it come in my maang?

Wondering I picked up a pair of my clothes and headed to the washroom for a shower, "Babaji kyun aisi jhoothi umeed jaga rahe ho mere man mein, aap to sab jaante hein na, Maan rishton mein khaas kar shaadi mei vishwas nahi rakhte phir Yeh, par shayad mein jaanti hoon ab mujhe kya karna hein aaj tak mein man aur aatma se Maan se judi hui thi par ab mein poori tarah se unse jud chuki hoon chahe hamare iss rishtey ka koi naam na ho par mere liye yeh anmol hein. Mein kal bhi sirf MAAN KI THI aur HAMESHA SIRF UNKI HI RAHUNGI. Inn palon ko apne aatma mein basa ke hamesha ke liye unse door chali jaaongi".


What an irony I thought yesterday when my Sindoor was washed away I felt relieved, unburdened and free as it would not be a part of me from tomorrow though I wondered if it was ever a part of me, just a formality, and today I made it a point that the water doesn't even reach my maang which was filled by my Love. I wanted to leave from here as his wife.

I walked out of the washroom quickly I need to leave from here as soon as possilble before Maan wakes up, I can't face him, though I don't regret last night and can never regret it. It was the the most beautiful thing happened to me and will always cherish it but my staying here is not good for Maan by now my family must have known all the facts and will be hunting for me not out of concern but to punish me.

I don't want to drag Maan in this." Mein nahi chahti meri zindagi ke boj tale woh dab jaaye". Tears brimmed in my eyes as I slowly walked up to him one last time to picture his image for a lifetime. This will be the last time I'll be seeing him in person when unknowingly these words left my mouth,

" Kaise kahe ke dil ko teri arzoo nahi

yeh aur baat hein ke meri

kismat mein tu nahi..."

I slowly gathered myself, now is not the time to fall weak I picked up my bag and rushed downstairs turned back once to picture this dream house of mine it indeed was My Dream House which made me live my dream, just for some moments but enough to last for a lifetime.

I turned to open the door but couldn't The Voice which was a reason for my survival, only who had the power to hold me captive, stopped me, "Jaa rahi ho Geet mujhe chodke". I stood rooted his voice held so much pain.

"Kahan jaaogi, kab tak bhagogi, laut kar tumhe yahi aana hein waapis mere paas jaise mein aaya hoon thak kar, haar kar, apne aap se ladd kar, bahot koshish ki meine tumhe bhulaane ki, tumhe yaad na karne ki par haar gaya kyunki yaad usse kiya jaata hein jisse bhulaya jaaye par jo dil, dimaag aur sanson mein bas gaya ho usse koi kaise bhula sakta hein. Phir bhi tum koshish karna chahti ho to jao mein tumhe nahi rokunga par jaane se pehle meri amaanat jo tumhare paas hein usse mitta do aur tumhaari ek amaanat jo mere haath mein hein usse le jao".

I turned to see what he meant and stood shell shocked, "Woh, mein woh", I fumbled with words and shocked as how did he get them I looked at my bag.

She was averting her gaze by looking here and there but I needed answers walking towards her and holding her firmly I cleared her confusion, "Soch rahi ho mere paas yeh kaise aaye yeh to tumhari bag mein the hein na, tumhe shayad yaad nahi Geet, kal raat tumhari bag car mein reh gayi thi, mein kuch der pehle hi room mein laya tha tumhaare kapde nikaal te waqt yeh bahaar gir gaye the. Shaque to mujhe kal hi ho gaya tha jab tumne ek bhi suhaag ki nishaani nahi pehni thi aur tumhara sindoor jab baarish mein beh gaya tab bhi tumhe koi farak nahi pada, inhe apne saath inaam ki tarah lekar ghoom rahi ho? Bolo Geet mein kuch pooch raha hu JAWAAB DO GEET"?

"HAAN, haan yehi inaam mila hein mujhe apne parivaar ke faisle sar jhuka ke sunne ke liye,

YEH DIVORCE PAPERS"!!!

"Ek beti ,ek bahu aur ek biwi hone ka inaam. Meri zindagi bhar ki kamaai hein yeh...

Jinke liye meine apni zindagi de di unhone Yeh mere mooh par maare,

This is what I earned These Divorce papers,

My Priceless Possession"...


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Precap - Confrontation



NOTE : Priceless Possession were her Divorce papers for two reasons

1) She gave her life,her dreams and happiness for her so called family and this is what she got in return

2)These also mark her freedom from her bondage, her hell also.


Hope you all like the update


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Heytal
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Divorce papers

isko bolte hai googly 🤣

maan😡😡😡 aisa bol raha hai jaise ehsaan kar raha hai😡😡

jane kisne bola tha tereko😡

aur laut aaya..for himslef..not for her...so better keep quite😡😡

i lietrally hate ur maan😆

geet readyto accpet maan as part of her life by the maang filled scenario? or accept it as marriage?😕
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 12 years ago

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