Ssk ff update (part 4 updated)

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Guys , this is my ff update. Its starts with roli saying i love u to veeru, infront of bharadwaj parivaar and sid just enters the house. After hearing this, he drops his bag. With tat sound, everyone turns around. They are shocked to see sid. Veeru puts his hand on roli's shoulder. Roli is uncomfortable but she cannt remove in front of any1. Sid literally shatters. He sees roli z uncomfortable. Uma and pari taunts by saying roli tat u said u want money and 4 tat u go behind any1. No shame na. Mataji, who is in shock, says tat v r leaving the house immediately and simar call ur parents nw. Let them take roli, til she get divorce frm court, she belongs to our family. Til then she cnt stay with another man and nt even with us. Simar, tries to say something, but veeru says mataji , how dare you? Roli dekh na, bcoz of u they are staying here for one week, and they dont show the courtesy to you. They are trying to separate u and me? U tried to do good things for them and nw i wnt let them stay here. I wil do anything to get my roli. Saying so, he catches mataji's neck. Sid shouts and give a punch to veeru. Part 2 they start fighting , prem and sankalp help sid. So, veeru gets his goons. Roli stops veeru. She says tat no one can separate us. Let mataji cl my parents. Wat wil hpn nothing? After hearing this, sid breaks down more. Roli takes veeru inside. Meanwhile, uma and pari calls sim's parents. They ask them to come to delhi. They wnt say anything else. Next scene, sid standing alone in terrace thinking of roli. He finds sim and mano waiting for sme1 on the road. Sid sees sme1 coming there. Part 3next scene, roli and veeru in his room. He asks roli, y did she stopped him frm fighting wit sid? She says its unnecessary. Anyways they are going to leave the home na. Veeru i have doubt, for me u throwed khushi and in future, wat is gurantee tat u wnt throw me for another girl? At tat tym, i wnt be urs, sid's or rahul. Bcoz of u i broke up with rahul. And also, i took divorce with sid. And in future, he'll nt accept me. So, wat wil hpn to me? Veeru says no roli, i wnt do lyk tat. Roli says hw cn i trust u? Veeru says wat should i do to make u believe? Roli says no, u wnt do it? Veeru says say me wat ever u want? My life.. Roli says kk i dnt want ur lyf, i just want ur property to be mine, so tat in future even if u betray me , i wil hv sme security. Veeru doubts her . He says ur behaving as if u want to only property and u dnt love me. She says ya ofcourse, i want only property. I agreed to be wit u only 4 property. If u wnt give d property. I wil go back to sid. Veeru says no roli? I wil give u d property. I want u to be with me. For tat i'l do anything. He takes the property papers and signs it. Next scene, mano and sim tries to tel d truth to every1. Bt no one listens. They move out. Veeru and roli comes down. Roli signals sim and mano tat everything is done. Meanwhile, rosim's parents arrive. They are shockd to see bw family in poverty and to leaving the house. Sid is nowhere to be seen. Sim's dad greets mataji and asks y they are lyk this and wer are they going? Part 4Mataji in angry mood says aap hamare baat chodiye aur apke beti roli ki zimedari aapka hoga. Matlaab hai ki ab roli aur bw parivaar ko kohi rishta nahi. Sim's father: kya hua mataji aap aise kaise keha sakte ? Roli ne kya kiya? Pari: aap ye sawal mataji ko kyun pochte hai. Apke beti ko puchiye. Veeru shouts at bw parivaar for talking abt roli. He immediately goes to rosim's parents and introduces himself as their son in law. Sim's father slaps him. Veeru shouts back at him, saying how dare u? Roli stops veeru, saying he is her father.veeru asks so what? U left every1 for me na, th y r u stoppin? Roli couldnt answer. Roli was waiting for the call of the lawyer.Roli doesnt wat to do? She texts sim tat lawyer didnt call yet so she dont knw whether the registration of the property is done r nt. Sim's father shouts at roli asking her wat is happening there? He goes to slap her. Nw veeru stops him and about to hit him when roli catches his hand. She couldnt control anymore. She asks how dare u to raise ur hand on my dad? Nw , i cnt handle anymre. Get out of my house veeru. Everyone shocked . She says u urself wrote this property in my name. Dnt remember. I was lying to u. I am nt gonna marry u. Veru says i knw u 'l do lyk this one day, so i'm in my plan. U gave d papers to lawyer na. Call him and find out whether he has registered d property or nt. Roli shocked. She immediately calls him, but number is switched off. Veeru calls his goons. All the people their got house arrestd except roli. Bw men try to fight but couldnt. Veeru arranges for the marriage. He threatens roli saying that he'l kil her family. Wat happens next? Catch in my next update.
Edited by sinam1kana - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, i was waiting for the new ff updates of ssk. I got a dream abt mataji calling roli's parents. Based on it, i started my ff update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rosim parents??🥱 wanna some amnesia cvs nd rosim had 😆
anyway ur ff is so nice...continue it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting start ff
atleast you incluse Roli parents cvs totally forgetten them update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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eyyy yar i dont expect anything from stupid bharadwaj family they have no bloody common sense!if khushi can figure out the truth!then why cant our so called educated,mannered,wise mataji can figure out the truth!i dont expect anything from this family hate them!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved this part..!! very emotional..,😊
thanks for reminding roli's parents
and also a bit worried about Rosid..
thanks for updating..🤗
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seems interested. :)👏

Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sinam,
at first i have to admit, that i really got a shock because i dont know how i have began to read but i saw only roli says i love you veeru and i got a heart attack , then i thought this cant be and began fon front...thank god it is a ff...
so i like it, you know why because if this would be happen, sid could came to his sense when veeru says
they are staying here because of you, you tried to do good things for them and nw i wnt let them stay here.
this could be, the wake up for sid...

the beginning of you ff is nice, great at last you thought about the parents, i mean the cvs forgets them every time...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry dear missed it first now i have seen so i m commenting first of all i ll agree with bennu i was also shocked but phew!!! it is a ff update it soon it was short so waiting for next part and someone is here who noticed roli sim parents 😆they are gayab from the show 😉
thanks for ovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice part sid suspecting something great going continue soon😊

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