An Evening in the Life of Ansh...a small OS

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Khusi

@khusi_*

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

so sweet...anandi the equal dominating...n shiv the equal let her dominate...and result is so cute!!😆

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vasanthi.m

@vasanthimrao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hey this one is really cute😳. Keep writing😊

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MercurialMedusa

@MercurialMedusa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Adi 🤗

This was so sweet yaar.. something totally which any normal couple would do after a long days work 😳 hope to see something on this lines in the show too 😳

Too good yaar.. looking forward for more stories from u 🤗

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Uma

@adi2512

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: GoldenDew
Adi 🤗

This was so sweet yaar.. something totally which any normal couple would do after a long days work 😳 hope to see something on this lines in the show too 😳

Too good yaar.. looking forward for more stories from u 🤗

Sou...

Thanks a lot for ur sweet words...

yeah...Indeed its such a pleasure you can have ...with your life partner who can do his / her bit to relax you, after u have a hard day's work...

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

that was so cute os.. i love everything about this os.. just amazing..

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itsRitzi

@itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

too good and very well written loved it

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Pragya

@Siya_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

I hadn't seen this, and it's so lovely I had to bring it to the front.

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Uma

@adi2512

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Shivandi
I hadn't seen this, and it's so lovely I had to bring it to the front.

Oh...!! Thanks..!!!.😳

That was my first ever story..☺️😆

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Pragya

@Siya_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: adi2512
Oh...!! Thanks..!!!.😳

That was my first ever story..☺️😆

No wonder the rest of your stories are so lovely, since you started on such a beautiful note! 👏

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Kurup

@Kurup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

This was so very amazing, reallly beautiful, and a very superb first attempt...

My strong suggestion to u is to continue ur writing and better to extend this OS to an SS...

since u started with an evening in ANSH life, continue from where u ended, after anandi relaxing and her headache being decreased, her preparation for dinner, their night, their morning, and how shiv woos her, comforts her, helps her both professionally and also in their personal life...

Good going and never stop writing...Keep continuing...

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