nu ff - Kismat Ka Faisla

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey my ka parivaar๐Ÿค— i am writin a fan-fic for da first time so if its not very good plz be honest and tell me so i can improve ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿค—. anyway my ff is called Kismat Ka Faisla and i hope u all like it. here it goes:

character intro:

Malhotra's

Mr. Jai Malhotra is a very rich businessman who's wife is dead and has three daughters. The youngest is called kajal, middle one is called anjali and the oldest is called kaya. dey all luv each ova to bits but kaya sumtyms get a lil competitive. kajal is 20 years old and wants to bcum a big doctor. she is very sanscari and into reading. anjali is 22 years old and is training to becum a lawyer. she is also very sanscari and wears simple suits. kaya is 25 years old and and wants to manage da family business afta her dad. she is quite modern and wears jeanz and t-shirts unlike anjali and kajal.

Nanda's

the nandas r da same as in da actual kavyanjali exept nitya is not evil and kavya also wants to bcum a lawyer instead of businessman. kavya is 26 years old and has jus cum bak from doin his studies abroad. he still has sum training left to do b4 he can actually bcum a lwyer. da nandas and malothras r very friendly but da 3 sisters av neva met kavya and vice versa.

i hope u liked my character intro. i no it wasn dat gd, im sorry. ๐Ÿ˜ญ but i need to no if u still want me to continue. plz reply and tell me if u do want me to carry on or not. will wait for ur reply guys. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

luv metoubearscrazy๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey hun itz good continue soon ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice ff.... keep going... ๐Ÿ‘

Waiting for u to continue sonal... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

but Malhotra sound a bit weird... Walia would hav been better.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs kavya nanda

Nice ff.... keep going... ๐Ÿ‘

Waiting for u to continue sonal... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

but Malhotra sound a bit weird... Walia would hav been better.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

thx di, jai walia? hmm lol ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† 2 hotties togetha, like fatha like son ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue soooooooooooon plz๐Ÿ˜‰

luvz ya

luv Noori๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 19 years ago
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the introduction part is pweety good n yeah plz do continue!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thx every1, will continue soon! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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