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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Awesome Part Chinni 👏

Loved the Masti 😆
Sach samne aagaya ab Kya hoga 😕


Thank you dear, yup truth is out. Lets see 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: beauty14

omg luved the update...and its so sad how badly geet is depressed that she gets panic attacks because of her dad evil deeds...and the end of the update was so suspensful and such a cliffhanger..how could u end it there?? plz plz update soon and thanks for the pm...i can't wait for geet and maan's reactions in the next update...


Thank you dear, glad you liked the update. Hehehe if i didnt stop there then the update would be much more long, heheh lame excuse i know but thats the fact 😳 Update in an hour i guess
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zee_News

Please don't seperate Maaneet again, it's too much now, at least Geet should trust her Maan yaar 😭




Trust me zee, you will enjoy for sure 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-

Superb update

Maaneet playing with water in the garden n wetting each other

Geet having a panic attack n Maan was not aware of it n is feeling guilty

Geet overheard Maan n Mr Raichand convo, waiting for Geet reaction on knowing who is her step bro


Thank you dear, they were enjoying their time. but suddenly so much happened. Hmmm wait for next update dear, you will get your answers
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 29


"Definitely not Mr. Khurana" came a voice, when they both turned back saw geet standing there folding her hands across her chest staring at maan painfully. Not even in her dreams geet expected maan will hide such thing. Here she was so impatient knowing about him but maan even after knowing everything about her hid it from her. She nodded her head in denial not able to accept the truth that her maan lied her. She don't want to believe, she is praying whatever maan told should be lie, an utter lie. She is not worried about who is her brother but she didn't expect maan to hide it from her. slowly painful tears formed in her eyes, she felt dejected, she is failed again. The person whom she trusted the most lied to her. That mere thought is killing her inside, suddenly she felt suffocated. She don't want to face anyone, she wants to be alone for some time. She again looked at maan, who is looking at her apologetically. His eyes are speaking volumes but geet don't want to believe anything. She felt betrayed, not able to believe her maan cheated her.

Seeing her painful eyes maan want to confront her and tell her each and everything, wipe off those tears. Today he is responsible for her tears. Not now even from start, he sent geet to London because of his stubbornness and over possessive nature, but he cant help he is so much worried for geet and his family. Then after coming here she came to know the true color of her dad, though it helped them to know the truth but geet lost herself in all this. She lost her childhood, those days they use to enjoy, the days where geet always be with maan. with in a blink of a eye everything has changed. They stayed away from each other which was not less than a torture for them. Again they met, they cried, laughed, talked again this truth.

Geet closed her eyes to let out those hurtful and angry tears fall down, how many more tears she has to shed in her life. past is not enough that she is suffering even now that too because of maan. What is happening in her, when she thought everything is going fine something happens which snatch her smile. Why it is happening with her, why she is not able to live her life on her own. Why she need to depend on one or the other, then one day the same ONE will hurt her with their acts. She is fed up, frustrated and more than all she is hurt.

Maan who is observing her want to confront her and clear her everything, he was about to go to her Mr. Raichand stopped him holding his hand. Maan looked at him confused but he just blinked his eyes. Maan is not sure what to do expecr stare at geet. "Come on geet, speak up enough of everything, scold your friend maan for hiding such big thing from you. React react react" thought Mr. Raichand. He want geet to react but not keep quiet, since she came to his house, whenever abay teased her or anything she used to be quiet, after her slight recovery she started reacting. But again today she is quiet when she came to know such a big thing. She is not reacting anything, but what does Mr. Raichand know there is a storm inside her which may burst at any time. And the time has come, today she will break all her shell and pour out everything. Today all are going to have a very long day. So much happened in a day and may be today is the last day after that they may get the glimpse of old geet or after that they may get the glimpse of strong geet.

As Mr. Raichand expected few words came out of geet's mouth which killed maan. "You cheated me maan" accused geet, she didn't listen to maan full and at this point of time she don't want to listen. There is only one thing bothering is that her maan lied her. "You lied maan, you lied to me, to your geet" these words are enough for maan to kill him, he want her to give him a chance to explain, to clear her misunderstanding. He never did anything to hurt her, but few things went out of his hand.

Geet clutched her stole over her chest, just then something cold touched her fingers. When she looked at the LORD DURGA locket which maan tied around her neck when someone tried to kill her. For once she looked at maan, her answer is infront of her. yes her answer is maan, whom she trusted more than her life. Till today he is there with her in her each and every decision but today how can she accuse him for hiding this truth from her. "He never lied to me at the same time didn't tell me the truth too" thought geet. Whenever she is tensed or in any trouble this locket helped her. When ever she touched the locket in tension some one or the other came for her help or she by herself found the answer. For example, last year she was still unsure how to punish mohinder, days are passing and he is living his life happily. Here geet is suffering everyday thinking about his fathers betrayl.

She is tensed don't know what to do, she took the locket in her fist and prayed her babaji. Next day she found the answer from her informer that the whole Handa Property is on her name. This made her easy to execute her plan. Today again, she didn't pray to babaji but seems like babaji wants to help her, so he brought maan in front of her with the truth. Her heart is telling to listen maan, but her mind is telling he betrayed her. She closed her eyes at once to clear her confusion, trying to listen only her heart but not mind. She should not doubt her maan, who did so much for her without expecting anything in return.

But before he answer anything she want to ask him why he did like that, she want to shout at him. She can never doubt her maan, if she doubted maan then its like she doubted herself. She listened to her heart and opened her eyes, there is a glow in her eyes with determination. "I should not be weak and I cannot doubt maan but I am definitely angry on him for hiding such thing and what he did is wrong he should not have hid the truth from me, but he did I want to ask him why he did so?" thought geet and looked at maan angrily.

"I am expecting an answer from you Mr. Khurana" asked geet looking into his eyes sharp. Maan too looked at her eyes and sighed in relief, he is definitely not seeing any hatred for him but can see those angry eyes. Today he has to act on her finger tips or else he is definitely gone and well he deserves this, all thanks to his dad. "Dad, because of you today I am facing geet's anger. I told you that day only to tell everything to geet but no. see now" cursed maan under his breath giving a nervous smile to geet in return he got only an very dangerous angry glare from geet.

"Let me call karan first" told maan not getting any response from geet, he just got in, he and karan came out. Karan is confused what happened to maan suddenly. When he saw geet, he just want to take his baby sister in his arms and hug her tight taking out all her pain but alas he cant do that at least not now.

"I am sorry geet for hiding truth from you. Well I know about karan long back but didn't tell you because we know about him from long. He is my friend from school and you too know that how nice he is. Geet dad traced Mohinder handa's calls and got to know about karan when we confronted him he told he has no ties with his dad, if you want to know anything karan is in front of you. I really didn't mean to hurt you geet, I know one or the other day you have to know. That's the reason I forced karan to come here. So that you both can meet and talk, and you can also understand how he is?" told maan finally.

"Well I can only say Handa's are good at acting, what if your so called friend is doing the same?" questioned geet. "And how can I trust you maan now, ok you know about him. Why you didn't tell me. you are also hiding things from me maan, why all are playing with me. why?? I don't know why my life changed so much, I don't know why I am living? Everyone betrayed me, even you too maan" cried geet out of helplessness, though what maan did is for good but it is giving her pain. "Kya main itni buri hu ki sab log'. " cried geet.

"Geet'" called out karan. "No" shouted geet. "Don't take my name, I don't want to hear anything not even my name from your mouth. You are his son and what if you are also cheating" questioned geet. "I know its very hard for you to trust anyone but because of me you don't be angry on maan. There is no fault of his. I told you maan me coming to London will bring out worst and that happened least I expect that geet doubting you. Please geet, you have every right to hate me and I will accept but maan don't hate him. How he was desperate to meet and when you both are happy who am I to come in the middle. No, your friendship should not spoil because of me. you don't want me to be here then fine, I will go back to India and I promise I will never ever show my face to you. I am habituated of living alone but some where a small relief that I saw you" told karan, trying hard to control his tears. He left from there to guest house immediately cursing his fate and his dad for putting him such situation where there is no fault of his but also his sister is hating him. well he deserves all that hatred.

Maan wants to stop karan but now dealing with geet is more important. He can talk with karan tomorrow also its not that he is going to India now. Maan looked here and there but didn't find Mr. Raichand he understood he left long pack to deal with geet. because more than anyone she needs maan by her side. "Geet" called maan. "I don't want to talk anything now" told geet angrily. But how can maan leave her like that, sure he is going to convince her. Maan dragged geet towards the swing in the garden and made her sit on it. He kneeled on his knees in front of her looking directly into her eyes.

"Mishty, I know that you are angry. But you listened to karan right? Geet don't you believe your maan?" asked maan hurt. How can she say no, of course she trust him more than her life. "Its not that I don't trust you maan, I felt betrayed again when I heard talking you to papa about karan. All these days you know about him and didn't bother to tell me. that killed me maan, chakar bhi main tumko nafrat nahi kar sakti. Today I am living is just because of you" cried geet in his chest. Maan sat beside her pulling her on his lap. He hugged her close to his heart soothing her.


Mr. Raichand who is observing everything from the balcony is happy. She is totally out of her shell, if maan met geet long back then all these panic attacks and the depression wouldn't have taken place. The only heal to geet is maan. now she can be back to herself for sure that too with in no time.


precap: Back to normal???? 😕😉

Glimpse of Love story or say possessive maan 😆😉


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Ok friends, here is part 28. How is it?? 😕


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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

me was scared ki kya hoga

bjt u handled it very good
though geet is angry but maan will bring her back
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Geet angry at Maan! Poor Karan! Bt she knows Maan loves her! Wel written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superbbb update...
Geet recovered from her panick attack just bcoz of Maan...
Oh god did Geet hear tht Karan is her brother????
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updt...so geeet is only angry on maan, thank god!...poor karan...interesting precap ...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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