ASYA OS ~ Finally found You ~

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FINALLY FOUND YOU!

ASAD: Virat is the best cricketer in today's date Ms. Farooqi'whether you believe it or not.

ZOYA: Allah Miyaan 'watz wrong with you'No, Mr. Khan'M.S.Dhoni is the best.

A: Zo'Ms. Farooqi, I am not saying Dhoni is a bad player, he is a very brilliant player but Virat Kohli is much better, why don't we ask Ammi and Najma!

(He turned to Dilshad and Najma who were sitting on the centre sofa as they watched Asad and Zoya bickering over two most awesome Indian Cricket players. A cute smile adored Najma's face as she spoke as soon as Asad took her name.)

N: Sorry Zoya, but I agree with Bhaijaan this time, Virat is the best player in Indian Team as of now. Young, Dashing, Smart, Aggressive, Passionate, Cute and most important his game'he plays so well.

D: I agree Zoya, Asad and Najma are right. Even I like Virat.

(Zoya was shocked to hear this and a cute yet naughty smirk came to Asad's face.)

Z: Phoophi, I don't believe you are taking Mr. Khan's side.

Dilshad chuckled hearing this and said, "No Zoya, I am just saying what I think'I don't mean any offense beta"

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Tears started rolling down her cheeks as she remembered that day sitting in the Airport's Lounge. It had been more than 3 weeks since the Mangalpur incident. Initially she didn't realized that she had actually fallen in love with Mr. Akdoo Ahmed Khan but as soon as the realization seeped in she couldn't take Asad's ignorance anymore so she had decided to leave Bhopal and go back to New York. Meanwhile she had tried a lot to find her Abbu but all her efforts were in vain. So she decided to move back to New York. So, this morning she had told Dilshad that how all her attempts in finding her Abbu have failed. Dilshad tried a lot to convince her to stay back but she said that her Visa won't get renewed and so she has to leave but she will miss them a lot and will be in touch with Najma. She thanked Dilshad and Najma for all their love and support and left a "SORRY" to Mr. Khan for her misbehavior and being a "Musibat" in his life. She left hugging Dilshad and Najma.

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Voice: Ms. Faroqi!! Aap khud ko samajhti kya hain?

(Zoya got up with a jerk getting back from her thoughts not believing her ears to turn around and see her Jahapanah Six Packs.

Z: Mr. Khan! Aap yahaan??

A: Yes, Ms. Farooqi! Ab kya mujhe yahaan aane ke liye bhi aapki permission leni padegi?

(Zoya was alarmed by his curt tone and hurt in his eyes.)

Z: Nai'Who'Main'Mr. Khan'

A: Ms. Farooqi, aapko kya lagta hai'aap jab chaahe kisi ki zindagi main aa sakti hain and jab mann kiya toh chal di?

(Zoya was stunned to hear what he just now said.)

Z: Mr. Khan'mera Visa expire hone waala tha...

A: Toh? Aap mujhse nikaah bhi kar sakti thi'

(Zoya now taking it to fun level as she got to know about AAK's feelings)

Z: Mr. Khan'thi matlab?? Ab nai kar sakti?? Allah Miyaan'Achha hua that I am leaving.

(It was Asad's turn to get stunned but he didn't missed the naughty blink in her eyes so he decided to play on.)

A: yeah'actually you are right..! Good that you are leaving'have a happy and a safe journey'

(Again, Zoya's turn to get stunned')

{HEHE'I wonder if they were playing ome stunning-game}😉😆😛

(She thumped her foot and started leaving.)

(Asad just chuckled at her 'Nautanki'' But what followed that chuckle of his was out anyone's imagination in this whole world)

A: TERA MUJHSE HAI PEHLE KA NAATA KOI'YUN HI NAHI DIL LUBHAATA KOI'JAANE TU YA JAANE NA'MAANE TU YA MAANE NA'I LOVE YOU MS. MUSIBAT FAROOQI'

(Zoya shocked by his bizarre behavior.)

Z: Mr. Khan are you alright?

(That was all she can manage)

A: yeah completely.

Z: Then what was this?

A: uhmm'yeah actually I had to do something out-of-the-way to tell you that I love you and I need you. And, I know how much filmy you are.

(Zoya just gave her million dollar smile and ran towards him taking him into a tight hug.)

{BG- our fav. MITWAAAA...ISHQ PE ZOR NAHI} 😉

Z: I love you too Mr. Jahapanah six packs akdoo ahmed khan.

A: I am glad that Ammi told me everything at right time and I came and "FINALLY FOUND YOU"

Hey all'this is My first writing ever'like except the school essays'😆 😛

and seriously sorry if u didn't like the OS and think dat it was waste of time..😭

soorrryy for the mistakes...and thanks for the co-operation..! 😊

so the confession credit goes to Jaane tu ya jaane na 😆

title credit...of course my favorite Enrique...just in luv wid dis infact every song of his. 😉

and Cricket fyt credit to me..🤣 as VK and KSG are lyk obsession to me! 😆 😛

please say whatever you feel no need to lie...haan bura lagega but tabhi I can improve if you guyz leave me alive after this kachra! 🤣😳

good-day! 😃


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crazy4KASH_AR thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited

I'm so sorry for this Nitya

By mistake reserved post edit karna bhool gayi yaar

This happens with me whenever I reserve posts.That's why I don't reserve posts now

This is ur first OS

I still remember that when I read it late night,I was smiling like a fool.

It was soo cute to see the whole Khan Family on one side and Zoe on other side while arguing over Dhoni n Virat😆

Next I was quite sad to see Zoe crying at the airport.But then Mr. Khan did wonders again

He sang tera mujhse hai...

I was like wow!!OMG!! Asad can sing to pataofy his Ms. Farooqui😆

The cute bickering of ASYA was quite fun to read

I liked it how Asad said I love especially his I love u dialogue...

All in all this OS didn't seem like you were writing for the first time.👏

I loved this OS t the core.It was very sweet and beautiful

Keep writing sweety

You know na that I love u🤗

Plz don't be upset with me😭

Take care!

Muah!







Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its a good one,
i love Enrique too ❤️❤️ title was the reason i hopped in to see the post
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames

its a good one,

i love Enrique too ❤️❤️ title was the reason i hopped in to see the post



😃 Thanku..!! yehh enrique is awesome..! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a cuttoo peice, made my night :-* *hugs hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

such a cuttoo peice, made my night :-* *hugs hugs*



aww..really?? 😲 thankkuu soo muchh! 🤗 ur comment made my nyt! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice i liked it, especially the parts i could understand,sorry i don't understand your language.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaaww.. This was sooo cute.. Lolz loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nits 🤗
Haha i enjoyed this os
Virat in first line 😆
Keep writing these kinda stuff coz i loved it n make it longer nxt time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww... Amazing OS! Absolutely loved it...
I got sooo happy seeing Virat's name in the first line... 😃.. Such a cutee fight! I love anything cricket/VK based... Really made my day!
And the confession was so adorable... Totally crazy coming from Mr Sixpacks! Love that confession scene from JTYJN... 😆

Atm, my obsessions are VK and KSG too!!! ❤️

Keep writing. 👏

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