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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyz.m riddhima...i have been a silent reader from a very long time and now wanted to start my own FF..
Well this is my 1st attempt and m scaread till death..m not a very good writer like you all but i pen down whatever comes to my mind..so here we go...this ff is basically about how lack of communication and misunderstanding can devastate every thing...ITS AN AR ff and the story revolves around life of Armaan Mallik, Riddhima Modi,Siddhant modi,Atul joshi,Anjali Gupta,Muskaan Chaddha,nikkita malhotra and Rahul garewal after a lea of 5yrz..how their life changed,how they got separated and the reunion..



Part 1
sec. pass...minutes pass...hours pass...and years pass...but why dont memories pass away..??

An old lady is sitting in her bedroom...looks pale...n sick...with a photograph..
Lady: kyu bhagwaan. kyu kar rahe ho aisa mere saath! y in this last stage of my life i cant see my son happy again? y have you given this much of pain to him.? what has he done.? for what are you punishing him.! M very angry with you..jab tumhare paas aungi to har ek ka jawab mangungi...She cries and cries...Uska bachpan...humari wajah se kharab hogaya...and jab use wo pyaar wo sahara mila...kyu cheen liya tune usse... !!!!



A HANDSOME YOUNG HUNK OF NEAR ABT 26 YRZ ENTERS...
Boy: maa...r u ok?
Lady: How beta...how will i be ok when i know my son is dying every day in past 4 yrs..
Boy:fir wai baat maa...maine kaha na...mai theek hun...look m smiling..he stretches his forceful smile!
Lady:Meri baankho mein dekh kar bolna ARMAAN...
Armaan: Maa...mai sach mein theek hun...pls aap apna khayal rakho...apko pata hai na aapke liye stress theek nahi hai...Trust me im a DOC.!( he winked at her )
Ananya: Bada aya i m a DOC. khud to apna ilaaj kar nahi sakta...aur kehta hai i m a doc.!
SUDDENLY the clock struck 12.!
Armaan:maa main jau.?
An:kaha ja raha hai itni raat mein?
Armaan:apne kamare mein maa...aur kaha( ke kissed his mother on her forehead and walked away from there..)
He walks towards a door in his room which used to be locked. He opens it...and...
Armaan: HAPPY 25th BDAY BASKET..he said to one her big photographs which were hanged among with many others in the room...
THE ROOM WAS FULL OF MEMORIES THAT HE AND HIS BASKET SPENT TOGETHER...Every moment was captured in a picture. His eyes was telling his hearts pain.
Armaan:(talking to one the same photo ) Main tumhare bina aaj bhi adhura hun riddhima..tum mujhe chod ke chali gayi...aur ek baar bhi nahi socha ki tumhare bina kaise jeeyunga main?
( Some one has said true LOVE IS LIKE FALLING DOWN.IN THE END...YOU ARE LEFT HURT..YOU GET ENTANGLED WITHIN MEMORIES AND FIND NO WAY OF COMING OUT FROM IT...)
Armaan: With his cracked voice: I miss you basket... :'( I...I..love you..
Armaan couldnt take it any more and sat down on his knees crying hard.
Armaan: Kyu Riddhima...kyu chali gayi tum... NAI ATA JEENA MUJHE TUMHARE BINA...please mujhe ye sikhado...His tears were making their continuous way down his eyes..he stood up took his guitar sat on his couch and started to sing...
GUYZ WHILE READING THE LYRICS...DO IMAGINE ARMAAN SINGING IT..Uh will definately get the feel of the story..)
bejaan dil ko
tere ishq ne zinda kiya
phir tere ishq ne hi
is dil ko tabah kiya

tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikalti rahi
mujko saza di pyar ki, aisa kya gunah kiya
to lut gaye, haan lut gaye
to lut gaye hum teri mohabbat mei.n --

ajab hai ishq yara
pal do pal ki khushiya.n
gham ke khazaane mei.n lutey hai
phir militi hai tanhaiyaa.n
kabhi ansoo, kabhi aahei.n
kabhi shikway, kabhi naalei.n
tera chehra nazar aaye

tera chehra nazar aaye
mujhe din ke ujalo mei.n
teri yaadein tadpaye

teri yaadein tadpaye
raato ke andhero mei.n
tera chehra nazar aaye

machal machal ke is dil se aah nikalti rahi
mujhko saza di pyar ki, aisa kya gunah kiya
to lut gaye, haan lut gaye
to lut gaye hum teri mohabbat mei.n

agar miley khuda to
poochoonga khudaya
jism mujhe de ke mitti ka
sheshay sa dil kyoo banaya
aur us pe diya fitrat
ke woh karta hai mohabbat
wah re wah teri kudrat

wah re wah teri kudrat
us pe de diya kismat
kabhi hai milan, kabhi furqat

kabhi hai milan, kabhi furqat
hai yahi kya woh mohabbat
wah re wah teri kudrat

sisak sisak ki is dil se aah nikalti rahi
mujhko saza di pyar ki, aisa kya gunah kiya
to lut gaye, haan lut gaye
to lut gaye hum teri mohabbat mei.n

tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikalti rahi
mujhko saza di pyar ki, aisa kya gunah kiya
to lut gaye, haan lut gaye
to lut gaye hum teri mohabbat mein.
His pain was now killing him..He didnt even realize his mom was standing beside him..She patted her son who was drowned in his own feelings by keeping her hand on his shoulder..He got scared! As he was 'The ARMAAN MALLIK'...he didnt want to show his pain,his tears to any one...and specially to his mom who was in 3rd stage of cancer. He silently wiped away his tears and turned...
Armaan: mom...aap kab aaye?
Ananya:jab tu ro raha tha..
Armaan: Are maa ro...ro nahi raha tha...gana gaa raha tha..dekho guitar bhi hai..He was trying hard to gulp his lump so that ananya doesnt see it.
She strikes his hairs and put her hands on his cheeks...
Ananya:Apne aap ko saza kyu de raha hai armaan. I m your mother. Tu mujhse apne aasun nahi chupa sakta bachhe..
Armaan knew he was failing to resist himself anymore..he wrapped his hands around his mother's waist...and hugged her as tightly as he could...and surrendered himself and his emotioins infront of his mom...
Armaan(ccrying): mai kya karu maa...jitna koshish karta hun usko bhulne ki...utna uske aur kareeb ajata hun...Mai nahi jee para raha uske bina maa...main nai jee sakta is dard ke saath...mom..aap meri har problem solve kardete the na...please mujhe is dard se bahar nikalo..bahot ghutan hoti hai maa...Mujhe un yaado se bahar nikaaldo maa please...please...
Although ananya knew about Armaan's mental state from past 4 years...she was thunderstrucked to see his son in such miserable condition. After all she was a mother and was feeling miserable and helpless when armaan was crying so hard...
Ananya: shhh...bas Armaan...its ok...bas thoda waqt do...khud ko bhi aur halat ko bhi...you know what Time is the best healer of every wound.. sab theek hojaye..and mera Armaan to bahot strong hai na..to wo aise kaise toot sakta hai?
She got worried when Armaan stopped responding to her...
Ananya: Beta...??( She slightly uplifted Armaan's face and found that her baby slept...she saw him sleeping on her embrace with his wet eyes..
Ananya felt as if she's gonna watch armaan like this for forever...he looked no less than a newly born child who sleeps stress free in his mother's lap. Her all motherly love was overflowing from her heart and tears started trickling down her eyes..
Ananya: Jo Armaan humesha sabki problems chutkiyo mein solve kardeta tha aaj khud ko nahi sambhal pa raha...Kab tak Apni yaado mein khud ko dard dete rahoge armaan...tu to mera strong hamesha muskurata hua beta tha na...aaj teri smile kaha chali gayi hai... tears were continuously coming down from her eyes...
She decided to not to move from there as it may awake armaan...she was scared to wake him up because she was aware of his every night nightmares...she has listened how armaan starts screaming at night in his sleeps and eventually wakes up...
suddenly armaan started to cough...
Ananya: armaan...(again stroking his hairs)
Armaan:hmmm...( still in sleep )
Ananya:ek min. uth beta paani lekar ati hun..( she tried to loosen up his grip but failed...armaan had hugged her so tightly as if he was too scared to loose her..)
Ananya was left with no other option than to wake him up. He was coughing badly,though in sleep...
Armaan:maa...kaha jaa rahi ho...
Ananya: Armaan...paani laarahi hun...tujhe bahot khasi arahi hai...
Armaan: Maa...ek baat bolu...
Ananya:haan bol beta...
Armaan: Aj mere saath so jao please...( again a small tear trickled down his left eye )
Ananya wanted to be strong infront of him and controlled her own tears while wiping away armaan's.
Ananya: theek hai..she smiled at him...
After drinking water..they both lied on Armaan's bed...
Armaan unknowingly or may be knowingly went closer to his mom...hugged her again down her waist and slept.
Ananya was left speechless at his innocence... and just smiled...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey riddhima
well nice name i must say! being a diehard fan of dmg i must love ur name! 😆
Coming to the story its amazing i like the concept and the first part was really good :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its QH forum.. U should post this in DMG forum
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is Qubool hai forum :) Please post it in fan fiction section

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