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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was a pleasant evening, anandi was ready to go out with shiv for dinner. She was happily waiting for shiv and was peeping out througb the window. The jeep's horn sound announced shiv's arrival. She smiled and went down to meet him. She was wearing a pink saree, she was tentatively waiting for his appreciative look and she was not disappointed. Shiv came inside,saw her waiting for him,smiled at her and said "anandi, you are looking reallypretty today and kissed her on her cheek. Anandi felt shy but said to shiv "you also fresh up and come i'll bring tea for you". She went to kitchen,shiv went to their bedroom. He came down after 10mins in blue shirt and a dark blue jeanandi came out with tea. Shiv drank it and said" ok let's go",They went to a fivestar hotl in jaipur. They had nice continental food,d and chattedhappily, occasionally lost in each others eyes. After dinner shiv took her to a saree shop, he bought
a saree for her. Later ansh reached home. Shiv had some file work he said i'll be working for sometime u go to bed". Anandi said i'll wait for you and anyway i have to clean the kitchen. Shiv smiled and went inside his office room. After halfan hour anandi went to see
shiv. He was immersed in his laptop wearing his spectacles. Anandi thought he looks so cute

cute with his specs. She felt a urge to pinch his cheeks naughtily. Instead she said " please it's getting late, take rest u should be tired and kissed him softly on his lips. Shic underatood her gestures, he kissed her back passionately. He broke the kiss and carries her to their bedroom. He said" you've become so naughty, wait i' ll show mine. He kissed her again. They lay in bed sharing passionate kisses. After some passionate moments of intimacy, they were breathless. Amd they slept peacefully in eachothers arms, finally uttering the magical words" i love you anandi," "i love u too shiv"

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOOKS LIKE THIS IS UR FIRST OS...I LIKED IT BUT IT WAS TOO SHORT...TRY MORE AND GIVE A SPACE OR WRITE THE DIALOGUES SEPRATELY...YOU CAN DO IT NEXT TIME...BUT DON'T GIVE UP BECAUSE U DO HAVE THE TALENT TO WRITE AN FF/OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for ur encouraging words libsrocks. It was indeed my first os. I'll try for a better one next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you for ur encouraging words libsrocks. It was indeed my second os, i'll try better next time.

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