AnSh SS-Moments of separation and...last upt pg 11

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vasanthi.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

lol what an ending 😆

poor ansh... ye mahi bhi na 😡 hamesha wrong time pe tapak padta hai..

it was very sweet khushiji.. loved it 🤗

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Missesha

@Missesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

So cute...

Par Ye Mahi thodi der ke baad nahi aa sakta tha?

Moments of separation to khatam hi nahi hue... aur yeh dono phir se separate ho gaye.. 🥺

Very nice SS indeed...

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dsupriya

@dsupriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Hey Khushi tumahara bhi jawab nahin. i think you should write one suspense novel as well. You will surely keep them glued with them biting the fingers😉😉

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Blukitten

@Blukitten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

finally i managed to read the entire thing in one go.
its simply awesome... i loved it..n mahi is too good :-D
thanks for this wonderful FF

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dixie123

@dixie123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Really liked this final part Khusi. Liked how he was strict with her and didn't allow her to take care of him worrying for her health.. 😳

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Nandita

@Nandita_Siddian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

so cute kushiji...how caring he is to her ...bagwan kare sabko aisa patidev mile...thank you for this superb update..

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

aw..such a lovely OS!..thank you 😊

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Khusi

@khusi_*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

thank you so much guys...i know the last part was not up to the mark...😆

n guys the kiss...nehin hua!!...coz as per shiv...anandi has to come with full right as her own..but here in my SS..it was shiv who pulled her close...so i cant let shiv to break his promise...so plz bear with it😆...sowwie

@muku...credit toh banta hai...Ajee ke sath no competition ...🤣