ArHi FF:4:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#661

wow u describe their dance so beautifully that I almas clap my hands...

felt sad for lav but wat never was meant for someone then wats the use of crying...aman will always support her

Anjali last words was kind of final blow...We can always buy new ones

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Mahnoor

@rockprincess123

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#662

Woowiee!! We finally get an update!!

I sooo enoyed reading this chapter tht it cnnot b conveyd in2 words!!

The dance b/ arnav and khushi ws magical!

It was as if all time stoppd and I was transfixed.. evn more thn khushi and arnav themselves!!

I felt really bad for lavanyaa... her feelings were protrayed soo well and the end comversation with lady anjali ws realli emotional.

Eagerly waiting for the balll!!

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#663

Hello Dear Aquilline (or Lin...as people in land of Arahasia like to call u),

Well...to begin with...honestly..it would have wrong of me to tell u a lie..tht i just read all of ur story. but that's not so...infact, i had like to let u know that its been a really long while since i have been making my trips to this Beautiful land...and to ur inn specifically. I m sure u must have noticed me atleast once around ur inn...for one thing i make sure of is to leave a badge of Prestige (like) for u for this marvellous story from the ancient book of the dark lady which u narrate to us with so much of passion...that it definitely leaves an astounding effect on every one of your visitors heart, one of them being definitly me. Truly,even though i have had my reasons, yet i have no excuse reasonable enough to tell you as to why i had not been making the best use of the quill and the book of comrades. But... today i just could not resist from moving out the shadows and make myself visible to all unwavering visitors of the inn.

I have loved ur story always...infact, i have been very closely following since around ur 85th narration. I m just head over heels in love with this story ever since i read it first. Infact, the title itself is so appealing tht i just couldn't stop myself from reading it, not that i wanted to. U know why i could not just hold myself back from telling u, because the Historical romances and fairy tales have always been a wekness for my knees...and when story is as amazing as this one where u get to taste the essence of both as one... there was no possible way...to not give away for it.

so... in short, i would say i have love your characters. I love the background, i Love the similarity yet so much of distinctness with which u have presented this story as from the original show. It's like re-living IPK.. but in ahighly unresistible and quaint manner.

I had been so far following this story on my own...but if u r still sending out birdies (PMs) to ur comrades and Readers.. i had love to receive one to...to follow u even more closely.

with love,

MEG 😊

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 13 years ago

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allzwell

@allzwell

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#664

the inevitable day arrived... and i am not talking about khushi and lord arnav dancing with each other in a blissfully ignorant, oblivious world of their own.. nope, i am not talking about that

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A_Soul

@A_Soul

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#665

M dancing, jumping, running here n there.. singing my fav song a loud...
Yes yes yes...
No its not effect of update, I hv not read it yet..
I know I hv not grab 1st place either, so that also not the reason..
Yes yes yes... It's d prenote..
my dearest darling has said such lovely kind words to me... MUAH..
Longest respond I ever had and longest among current ones... M so happy I cant tell u... Ur each word is like scoop of icecream to me..

Aaj me khush hoon, lo tum hi bolo main hoon khush kyun...

Going to read it 10th time linny.. hugs kisses n luv

Edited by A_Soul - 13 years ago

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#666

Thnxx for the update..

Their dancing made me speechless..

It seemed sensual..

The way u penned it down, I can nearly visualize them dancing to the tune...

wonderful update, lin..

keep updating...

waiting for the pigeon to come again...😊

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#667

👏
loved it
arhi dance was☺️
me blushing
loved it
poor aman and la
i hope they get paired together
loved it

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subiscs

@subiscs

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#668

Omggg...loveddd it😊 yes by ipk waala smile i meant all that u mentioned with an addition of forgetting where we r reading the story or watching it 😊 Omggg the dance...i am jus totally lost!!!penned down beautifully...and i am waiting to see what next..with lady la realising something..master aman and anjali also sensing the change in air...am so gonna read it again..and those lyrics...awww makeme whole again..take whats left of me...!!!!!

Edited by subiscs - 13 years ago