New Story:My bubbly part 10 page 31 19/5/13 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HER NAME IS GEET AND MAAN IS FIDA ON HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing part
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved ur ff, so cute!! pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Awesome update
I really like gullu and bubbly
They are so cute!!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
awesome one
i really like gullu nd his bubbly
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
part 1
nice part...
she can talk?
how old is the baby?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys...


me updating part 2...

any one waiitng????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2:
maan and geet were busy playing and savitri was preparing lunch. the phone rang. it was the call of the mall security.
Mall: is this Khurana mansion?
savitri: yes. may i know who is this?
Mall: mam we are from the mall. today u took a girl from here and told to call if we get any information of their parents.
savitri: yes. so did u get any information?
Mall: yes mam. actually there was a couple searching for a child. i came to know from another customer. when we went to search them we found that they had an accident. and sorry to say that they are no more.
savitri: OMG. how did this happen? and where are their family members?
Mall: we found their address from their licence. o going there we found that they live alone and from neighbours we came to know that they came here 3 years ago and no one else is there in their family.
savitri: Oh. then what should we do for geet?
Mall: shall i suggest u something mam.
savitri: sure.
Mall: mam u give her in an orphanage.
savitri: (became angry) how can u say like this? she is a small girl. her age is only nearly 2.
Mall: sorry. i only gave u a suggestion. then what ever u want u can do.
savitri: thank u for the info.
Mall: thank u mam.
the call was over. savitri felt bad for geet. she thought to talk to raj and then take a decision.
after lunch maan went to do his homework and geet followed
maan took his notes out and started colouring. seeing him geet also took colour from maan's hand coloured in his note. when maan saw the note he became angry. it was his favourite note and geet scribbled on. he shouted on her. she started crying. hearing geet's cry savitri came up.
savitri: what happened maan?
maan: maa bubbly spoiled my note.
savitri: leave it maan. i will get u another note. she is a small girl only.
maan: i don't want any other note. she is very bad.
savitri: maan behave urself. i said that she is a small girl.
savitri turned to see geet. she was crying and her eyes were very puffy. she felt bad seeing her. she thought that it is better is geet goes to some orphanage. maan gets angry very soon and it won't be nice is geet stays here. maan won't see anything in his anger. she thought that she will tell her view to raj and then they will search for a good orphanage and will leave geet there.
savitri pampered her and took her down with her saying maan to complete his work. savitri was in kitchen with geet sitting on the slab. geet was asking silly questions of which more than half she couldn't understand and the remaining made her laugh.
thinking about her savitri started feeling guilty making her to go to orphanage. i a day she came so close to savitri that she can't leave her now. she thought that today she will give her enormous love since she will go soon.
maan completed his work and came down to see his mother busy with geet. suddenly he felt J. he went to her.
maan: u are my maa.
savitri: what are u saying maan? i am ur maa only.
maan: then why are u playing with her?
savitri: what are u saying maan? what happened to u?
maan: i don't know. but u will not play with her.
savitri: should i say to ur dad about ur behaviour?
maan: (turning to geet) see because of u i am getting scolding. u know i was happy when u came here but now i don't want u to be here. u go back.
savitri became angry. first geet lost her parent and she doesn't even know what is happening with her and now this maan s shouting on her. she slapped him.
maan: see. because of u now i got slap. if u be here then maa will only scold me. so u go back.
geet was crying more seeing all this and hearing the loud voice. after saying this maan ran back to his room crying. savitri started to pamper her to make her stop crying.
PRECAP: geet going to orphanage.

u might be angry with maan...but in next update u will like the same maan...maan became possessive of his parents. they were showering their full love on her. so his behaviour became like this.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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woaaa.. awwwnn shooo shweet choti si love story of choti si maaneet.. cont soon hun.. oh no geet lost her parents.. now wat?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
even he is a child so he also wants attention...

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