KUCH KASME AUR PYAR- (A-K)4TH EPI UPDT

guys this my first fan-fic... hope u all will lyk it... since i lyk adventure type of stories wid love in it...so my fan-fic will b a "hatke" one...but it'll continue wid the regular fights of angad kripa (lyk the beginnin episodes of kyph) i mite also take few scenes from kyph...but i'll create most of it...(sum of u mite not ven lyk it...coz therez action...)

SO FWENDY PRESENTS U WID A DRAMA () CALLED:

KUCH KASMEIN...AUR PYAR

Characters:

Zaib Khanna(iqbal khan): One of the best officers in India. He doesn't only possess intelligence, but also good-looks, voice and GIRLS!...girls are crazy about him (for his achievement not only his proffessional career but also his interest in music!) He's a big time flirt and not looking for any girl of his dreams or anything because he does NOT beleive in love!...

His parents:

Rishi Khanna: Zaib's dad. Business man with lot of attitude and arrogance but at the same time soft and warm0hearted, caring for closed-ones but can't express how much he loves his son Zaib.

Naina Khanna: Zaib's mom. Business woman and money-minded. She loves her son but sometimes for money she even forgets that she has a son!

Kripa Sharma (Neha Bamb): An individual, dependent, bold, adventurous, beautiful and sweet girl. Always thinking of helping others and becoming one of the best officers in india...just lyk Zaib Khanna. Singing is also her passion but to help out people is more important to her. (from a middle class family.) She doen't beleive in love either..but respects other ppl's love...ZAIB KHANNA IS HER IDOL as a rockstar and as the best officer...

Ajay Sharma: kripa's dad. He was a accountant manager and enned enough for living and saving money. He's really loving and caring towards his wife and children.

Aarti Sharma: kripa's mom. She's loving and caring housewife. Best friend of her two darling daughters (prity and priya)

Priya sharma: kripa's younger sister. Always dreaming of getting married and really shy about stuff. Loves her sister and parents and always willing to sacrifice anything for her family.

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Side characters:

Josh: Zaib's best friend. girls love him but looking for the girl of his dreams...

Pinky: kripa's best friend, always after guys, a big time flirt and guys love her...She doesn't beleive in love and love is nothing but just crap for her.

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Di: Zaib's aunt. She'z old but she is the only one who caredd about zaib since he was a child and she wa s the one who taught him to help people int he times of need.

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these r the characters...well main ones...so i'll update part one by Sunday....till then pleaase do reply wether u guyz intersted or not....

PART 1

Someone is climbing the stairs of the "KHANNA MANSION" and knocked on the door of famous cid officer and rock star Zaib Khanna. (the camera zooms in from the eyes of the person knowcking on the door and then the whole face, it is our very own Naina Khanna).

Naina: "Zaib, subhe ke sare aat (8:30) baj chuke hai, aur kitna soge. Abb uth bhi jaon. Breakfast bhi ready hai"

She waits for few seconds and there's no reply. So she opens the door and sees the messy room and discovering the bed empty. She checks the washroom but no one's there either. She was worried, so she calls Di (the same lady as dadi…they zoom in as usual as her entry) up and asks her if she knows where Zaib is. Di was about o say something, when Naina's cell rang. She answered, seeing it's her secretary from the office:
Naina: "haan sanjana, bolo…Kya?? Meeting abhike abhi hai??...lekin mein to..nahin mein bilkul bhi busy nahin hoon. Nahin mein yeh contract itni asani se nahin jani dungi. Nothing is more important than this contract."
Saying this, naina leaves from there leaving Di behind. Di was nodding her head thinking that when will her sister (naina) will think about Zaib, her own son! And di winders where zaib is, she calls him on his cell but it's busy as usual and there can be only two reasons:
Whether he's talking to one of his girlfriends
Or he's at some kind of mission.
Di smiles to herself and leaves.

**************first break***************

They show a beautiful town, with a beautiful lake, trees and flowers. They show a girl standing at the top of a hill (wearing blue tracksuit), stretching her hands and her cells rings. She answers:
The girl: "yes mom, I'm almost there!...nahin papa uthne se pehle mein chali ayungi. Bye mom, love ya."
The girl keeps the phone and starts jogging towards her bicycle. She was riding her bicycle (they still didn't show her face yet)…Then another girl joins her (her best friend) pinky.
Pinky: mornin' kripa!...aaj ke subha kuch khaas hi hai!
They show the girl (kripa) smiling and slowly shows her eyes and they show her from side to side from bottom to up and yea!...
kripa: mornin' saach mein…aaj ki mausam bohot hi accha hai…I'm lovin' it!"
PinkyFriend: array yaar, mein mausam ki baat kahan karrahi thi, mein to teri "unki" baat karahi thi! U noe the one only ZAIB KHANNA!"
kripa (getting irritated): dekh, ek baar maine tujhse keh diya, ke who sirf mere idol hai. Aur phir maine sirf ekhi baar hi to kaha tha ke woh cute hai, bas usi din se tu mujhe pareshan karahi hai! He has a great voice and great intelligence. HATS OFF TO ZAIB!
pinky: whatever yaar!...humari college mein ek bhi cute ladka nahin hai!
Kripa (smiling): yeh tu kya kehrahi hai??? I thought u found rohan really cute, didn't you?
PinkyFiend: array who to peechle hafte ki baat thi…iss hafte ke liye to koi aur chahiya!
kripa bursts out laughing and nods her head saying yes yes ur rite!
( after few seconds…)Pinky: hey kripa..dekh who ladka kaise mujhe ghur raha hai…don't you think he's cute!...aue who meri taraf he dekh raha hai!"
Kripa luking at the guy…"tujhe ahin lagta ke who teri umar se woh chota hai!"
Pinky: "toh kya hua…aaj kaal yeh hi fashion he…ke ladki umar mein badi ho aur ladka chota!!..combination bhi acchi hai!!! Newayz the guy is cute…hey he's approaching towards me!..oh my god!"
The guy comes up and then picks up something from the ground "didi!!!" (kripa burst out laughing but controls herself! Her friend makes a face…"aapka rumal gir gaya!!! Main bohot pehle se notice kar raha tha!!!...anyways didi…mein iss sheher mein naya hoon! (Pinky thinking..woh to dik hi raha hai!..he called me "didi!") kya aap mujhe koi jaage ki naam denge jahan mein jaa sakta hoon apne girlfriend ke saath!??"
Pinky: "chal hatt!"
And then they leave..leaving the guy behind with a confused face "yeh kaunsi jage ka naam hai "chal hatt"??? koi naya club hai kya…?"


*************second break**************

Kripa returns home and sees her dad sitting on the dining table, waiting for kripa!...kripa comesand hugs her dad from the back and says "morning papa!...i'm sorry mein thodi si late hogayi, woh kya haina ke woh…"
Before she cud finish it…her dad smiles and says "maine kya koi safai mangi hai tujhse…chalo aab bhetho, jaldi se nashta khao aur tumhare interview ke bhi waqt hogaya!"
By hearin this kripa stops eating and replies "papa maine aapse pehle bhi kahatha ke mujhe yeh naukhri kuch thik nahin lagraha hai…and besides my dream is to become one of the best cid officers in India. You know…I ain't really into jobs…!"
Kripa's dad: "dekho beta…yeh saab tumhe shobha nahin deta…(kripa luks up at him) mera matlab yeh ke, main nahin chahta ke tumhe kuch hojaye, yeh cid officer jo kuch bhi hai…in saab mein bohot khatra hai…tum ek ladki ho to…" before he could finish his senence…
Kripa stands up and leaves
Kripa stays in her room, her dad comes and tries to to talk to her but the door was locked and she didn't let anyone. And then her mom comes and : "kripa u darwaza khol, tujhe meri kasam hai!" and then kripa just opens the door and goes back to her bed. And then her mom comes and runs her hands in kripa's hair…kripa starts crying sayin" kya yeh hi meri galti hai, ke meein ek ladki hoon to mein iss desh ke liye kuch bhi nahin kar sakti… I mean papa aisi kaise kehsakt hai…agar aaj unke samne unke ek beta aise hi kuch mangta to kya tab woh use manah karte…??"
Kripa's mom: "tujhe yeh kisne kehdiya ke tere papa tujhe cid officer banne nahin denge kyunki tu ek ladki hai???...tera kya deemag thik hai ya…kuch hogaya ise…ur dad just doesn't want you to stay away from him. U'll be gone for training and all those stuff…who'll greet him everyday in the morning and hug him from the back and make up excuses for being late for breakfast!!!"
Her moms tarts crying and then kripa consoles and her and says…"yea mom I understand…theek hai (taking a deep breath) mein aab iske bare mein aur koi baat nahin karungi…thee hai?!"
"nahin…"
kripa's mom and kripa herself looks up and sees her dad standing in front of them, tears in his eyes but smiling…mom and kripa are shocked to see tears in her dad's eyes for the first time…

**********first episode finished*********

DAY AFTER TOMORROW HIGHLIGHTS:
Kripa's dad saying : "kripa tum waha jaa rahi hon…aurr yeh mera faisla hai!...mein chahta hoon ke…meri bacchi apni ek khud ki pehchaan kar sake!"
Di on the other hand calls up Zaib informing him for his show in Delhi…but no trace of him!!!!
(they still didn't show zaib yet…)

great part1!!!!!!

continue sooooonn and show ZAIB soooooooooonn

Originally posted by: brainychild92

great part1!!!!!!

continue sooooonn and show ZAIB soooooooooonn

thats the suspense part😃...buh don worry he'll be shown soon😛...even i cant wait for his entry...lollzzz

the new promo:
they show di in a color ful background wid a worried face sayin :"zaib kaha hai..."
naina wid cell phone "zaib ki khabar mujhe chahiye...uska show shuru hone wala hai!"
then in black background they show a guy holding a gun on to sum1's face...(the guy holding the gun...they jus show his eyes!)

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the guy holding the gun says: "kyun gandhi ji ki desh mein eh sab karte ho...mere show ke liye mujhe late kardiya na...iske liye extra treatment hai!
and they show the guy smiling...just his mouth....

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they don show the whole face.... 😊

guyz...zaib's entry is comin soon!!!!

awsome fic 👏 👏 👏
i m keen to c zaib's entry and i hope a-k(i mean z-k) will meet soon.
cont soon 😊 😊 😊

no replies...don u guyz lyk it 😭

Originally posted by: Fwendy

no replies...don u guyz lyk it 😭

i loved it and do con twice a day if u can its awsoe ur really mindblowing and i have seen almost all ur vid mixes as well and they were awsome as well😳

Originally posted by: armaghan0

i loved it and do con twice a day if u can its awsoe ur really mindblowing and i have seen almost all ur vid mixes as well and they were awsome as well😳

thnxx😃😛.....lollzzz...but i can post twice a day coz... my updates r kinda long so yea...and plus i have work and stuff fo yea..but i'll try my best...😊

Part 2

Recap: kripa's mom and kripa herself looks up and sees her dad standing in front of them, tears in his eyes but smiling…mom and kripa are shocked to see tears in her dad's eyes for the first time…

Kripa ran towards her dad: "papa, aap kyun ro rahe hai…maine abhi bhi yeh faisla kiya hai ke mein iss bare mein koi baat nahin karungi aur app logo ko job hi accha lage wohi meri faile hai…lekin papa, aap yeh rona bandh kijiye!" (wiping off her dad's tears)
K Dad: "nahin beta…tum waha jaaogi…aur sabse acchi officer banke dikhao gi..aur yehi mera faisla hai!"
Kripa: "par papa.."
K Dad: "maine keh diya na…abhi bhi to tum kehrahithi ke jo bhi mera faisla hai who hi tumhari hogi..to yehi mera faisla hai and I AM THE BOSS!"
Kripa smiling…hugged her dad sayin "I love u papa…u simply rock"
K Dad: "tell me something I don't know!"
And everyone bursts out laughing…


In Mumbai, they show the khanna mansion…and showing di all worried. It's been 2 days and she didn't c zaib…nor did his parents but they hardly cared as they were busy with their meetings.
Di is all angry saying "Teddy (their head servant), mujhe zaib ka pata chahiye…aisa to pehle kabhi bhi nahin hua ke who mujhe kuch kahe bina kahin chala jaye!!!...kya ko emergency that ya kisi larki ke saath…"
Teddy: "no ma'am…jahan tak mujhe pata hai ke Mr.Zaib bohot hi busy the unke concert contracts ke saath and that's all…that's the last time I saw him!"
Di is really angry now : "to aab khar khar mera moo kya dikhrahe ho…jao use dhoondo…aur cid office mein call karke uski secretary se meri baat karvao…jao…!
Teddy runs and gets the phone and calls up Zaib's secretary in the cid office…(tina)
Tina: "hello, good morning"
Teddy: "Hello tina, di aapse baat karma chahte hai!"
Di: "hello, tine…zaib kahan hai!...haan haan mujhe pata hai ke humein ghar se uski office pe nahi phone karma chahiye lekin…kaal se uska koi pata nahin hai isilye mein majboor hokar cid office call kiya…aab choro…aur bolo zaib kahan hai!"
Tina: "ma'am…sir to …kaal se … office hi nahin aye aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai…unka koi case (mission) bhi nahin hai…toh I don really noe!"
Di (shocked) : "kya"…(they zoom In her face various times (just lyk ekta's shows)…)

*******Break 1*******

Kripa calls up her friends and tells everyone that after two weeks she'z going to Mumbai for her test and trainings to become an officer. So they all get together (all friends) And they all start teasin her wid Zaib again!...Kripa gets irritated and she leaves the place. Pinky follows her and says "kripa c'mon…u noe we're always joking…!"

Kripa looking at her with an angry face and for few seconds (pinky was kinda nervous because she never saw kripa this angry)…and then afta few secs…kripa starts smiling…and later laughs by lukin at pinky's terrified face!...
Kripa (laughing) : "tub hi na…mujh se itna darti kyun hai huh??"
Pinky: "oyye main kisise darti varti nahin…main to sifr shock hogayi thi jab tujhe aise dekha..i mean I've neva seens u this angry b4!"
Kripa: "whatever…mujhe kjoi fark nahi parta jab tum log mujhe tease karte ho…kyunki yeh saab to kabhi sach nahin hoga! (kind of day dreaming)…uske aage peeche bohot se larkiya hai aur kya pata uska koi pyar bhi hai…I respect him in everyway…lekin yeh pyar vyar pe chakkar mein main nahin parna chahti..its jus a waste of time…!"
Pinky making a face :"accha aab chal…teri yeh bhashan bandh kar!"

Kripa and Pinky walks home…while walking they were talking and laughing,..and they see sum drunk guyz on the street…and they were approaching towards kripa and pinky…

********Break 2*******

but kripa wasn't much concerned…they come up and surround pinky and kripa…pinky got nervous and she held on to kripa!
One of the guys starts laughing :"array who larki hai…aaj teri kismet tere saath nahin hai..kyun ke tere saath koi larka nahn hai na!"
And they come and touch pinky…when they were about touch pinky…Kripa holds the guy's hand and says "dekhiye..humein jaane dijiye…warna…!"
The otha guy comes "warna kya kar legit u…waise tubhi kuch kam nahin hai…haan to tu kya karlegi zara hum bhi to sune…!
Kripa: "main kuch nahin karundi lekin dikhaungi…!"
T2nd guy asks: "kya…"

Kripa simling: "LAL RANG YA…MIRCH!!" (she takes out a small squarish pot wid red pepper (mirch powder "gur" (wateva its called)…) she takes it and opens it quickly and throws at the all the guyz face and kick each one of them…quickly and ran away wid Pinky…the guyz were still screaming coz their eyes were killing them with the red pepper powder!!!

Kripa and Pinky runs as fast as they can and when they came to their house (in fronta ther house)…they luk at each other trying still breathing hard…and starts laughing…and hug sayin good night!


Di still worried "zaib kahan gaya hoga!!!...yeh larka bhi na!!!"

Teddy consoles her saying "don't worry ma'am…Sir can take care of himself really good…you don't have to worry…who shayad kisi ko musibat se bachane ke liye kahin par ruke hue hai…u neva noe!!


They show a guy wearing black…holding a gun in his hand and hiding at a place…
There are two terrorists holding a gun on a child's head and telling the guy to come out…
1st terrosrist: "jaldi se bahar aaja nahin to iss bacche ko ura dunga!!!"
the guy smiling (shows his mouth only): "accha…jaldi se karma…mere show ka waqt hogaya!!!!"

2nd terrosrist: "hum mazak nahin kar rahe hai…hum sach mein kehrahe hai ke…agar teen tak ginne se pehle tum bahr nahin aye to hum sach mein ise goli mar denge…!"

the guy hiding behind the bush …relaxes and says "accha…wow…lekin ek suggestion dena chahunga…marne se phle aapni banduk zara check karlena..kyunki…bullet to mere paas hai to…isilye dus tak ginne..take tuumko bhi tym mile gun load karne ke liye.."

the terrorists luk at each other and then while checking their gun…ZAIB CUMS OUT AND SHOOTS THEM!!!!! When the terrorists were dead…they show ZAIB standing…smiling at the dead bodies of the terrorists and they zoom him..from top to bottom…(he was wearing a black jachekt wid a whitev-vest inside with blue denims/jeans)…

***********Break 3**********


Zaib still staring at those dead bodies saying out loud :

"yehi saza hai kyunki tum logo ki wajai se mein show pe late pohchunga…agar mere paas time hota to…shayad tum log abhi bhi khare rehte…" making a face face and smiling…(his killer smile!!!!!!) and then he luks at the child…and asks him wether hes alrite and then he notices that the terrorists actually attached a time bomb with child…Zaib was shocked but he was calm…the child was crying…(because he din't know wat was goin on…a 6 year old kid)…Zaib slowly tried to take off the bomb later on he realized that..if he takes it off..then it'll just burst/explode…so zaib was concerned now…he slowly tuk out a knife…the kid gets scared and asks him "uncle yeh chaku kislye"
Zaib smiling : "aise hi..mujhe chaku se khelna accha lagta hai..waise tumhara favourite color kaunsa hai…pick one red, blue, yello or gree (the wire colors)..??""
The kid thinks for a sec and answers : "green!"
Zaib makes a face : "nahin aaj se tumhara favourite color red ha…kyuinki (he slowly cuts off the red wire)…kyunki iss hi lal wire ne aapka jaan bachaya hai!..aab dusra kaun sa hai…??"
The kid: "blue…"
Zaib : "nahin yello…"(he cuts off the yello wire carefully)
And then the kid nods
Zaib asks again : "next??"
The kid: "yellow…"
Zaib" array nahin who to gaya na..to aab green…"(he cuts off the green wiressss….)
The kid gets irritated..: "agar aap hi mere liye decide karahe ho ke mere fav color kaun se hai…to mujhe pooch kyun reahe ho?"
Zaib: (he quickly cuts off the blue wire)…kyunki main kisiko koi choice nahin deta…mein jo buhi decide karta hoon wohi theek hai…(he was luking around while saying this *serious n kindofsmiling*)!
The kid make a confused face (coz he didn't noe wat zaib was talking bout)
Zaib calls up his bid ppl and tells them about his location but b4 he cud finisht he his battery was runnin low…and he jus got angry and threw the cell!!!...he then asks the child about where to go…as he was getting late for his show in delhi…the kid playfully tells him.."I duon't know uncle..!"
Zaib: "great!!!!...aaabd hum sare zindegi yehi pe hi guzarenge!!!!.." Zaib was about to get something…the kid screams!!!

And ZAIB QUICKLY TURNS AROUND SEES THE KID'S NOT THERE ANYMORE…


************Second episode done*********

Day after tomorrow highlights:
Zaib is searching for the kid
Kripa is getting ready and packing her stuff
Zaib attends his show
Kripa comes to Mumbai…