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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 25

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Her lifted her up and took her to their room and put her on the bed. She said

Madhu:- couch it is big enough

RK:- It is not a question of big or small??

Madhu:- but it is not big enough for you….It is small… you are taller than me.

RK:- Thankyou for telling me that atleast you consider me better in one department.

Madhu:- whoever said that being tall was better??

RK:- don't make me teach you the science of evolution….

Madhu:- Oh no please no!!! For I am sure you can, being a doctor and all…

RK:- Whatever

Madhu:- You are leaving in the evening

RK:- Nope ….You asked me to stay back. AUr mein apni eklauti BIWI itni prembhari request kaise thukra sakta tha. Wo bhi Iss halat mein jab ussey sab se zada meri zarurat hain.

He made it sound as if she was pregnant or something

Madhu:- What , Kiss halat mein…. Are you out of your mind. I never requested you to stay back. You must be dreaming.

RK:- Chalo atleast in my dreams you are loving but for you even in your dreams I will be a demon. Do you want to know how you are in my dreams?

Madhu:- J..u..st go. She glared at him.

RK:- Order??

Madhu:- No my lord request I am sleepy…

RK:- 2:30 we have an appointment with your nutritionist.

Madhu :- I don't want to go anywhere….

RK:- she will come home.

He also came to lie down on the same bed. She panicked again. RK looked at her and said. "I cannot let you sleep on the couch and I don't fit on the couch. You and me both sleep on the same bed…I promise to behave….Trust me …..BIWI look I never say this but for you….PLEASE."

Madhu nodded but later proceeded to built a wall pillows between them….

RK:- given your health people will come to see you here. And what are they going to think about this wall. More importantly, we have servants who are not sworn to secrecy. If they leek this out tomorrow don't cry if you are hunted down by papparazi and bullied by millions of girls whose dreams you have shattered as RK torturer...apply your mind O! Strong woman… Great great great grand daughter of Hercules.

Madhu gave in and slept. Around three there was buzz on the intercom and she woke up with a startle. She tried to make out where the sound was coming from but she could not. She poked RK

Madhu:- sh..sh… Rk…Rk.. Rk…wake up..

RK:- what ? ( he growled) let me sleep

Madhu:- where is this sound coming from?

RK:- Phir question what is wrong with you har samay police thane mein hi rehti ho kya.

Madhu took the glass of water from the bed side table and poured the entire content on RK's head

Madhu:- Hosh aaya ki do glass aur daloon Pati…..

RK went up to answer the intercom and said.

RK:- we will be there in five mins.

He walked like an angry tiger towards her. Water dripping from his hair he pulled her dupatta from her neck and she was totally startled. She literally jumped and shouted RK…

RK:- is baar yeh tha next time…….. he looked at her kurta…and left the sentence to be interpreted by her. He started wiping his hair with her dupatta and literally ruined it. He threw it back to a stunned Madhu . She wrapped it around her immediately. He changed his shirt and combed his hair. All the time Madhu kept sitting their she did not dare to move. RK came to her and was about to pick her up.

Madhu:- what???

RK:- the nutritionist is here.

Bittuji entered anannounced

Bittuji:- Chief Bhabhiji ki nutritionist aa gayi hai.

RK:- pata hai.

Bittuji:- Bhabhiji aapki chunni ko kya hua.

RK:- bittuji aap apne kapdo ka dhyaan rakhiye aur apni fikar kariye samjhey.

Without any effort he lifted Madhu in his arms.

Madhu:- main chal sakti hoon.

RK:- I know, I did not marry a crippled woman.

He was in a nasty mood. So Madhu kept quite.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arya.nair

Very nice update dear 😊

😊Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148

Nthng can change my mind and now i really think his father lost his son due to his mistake. A father who can't apeericiate his son success, shame on him. Hmm nyc update and left on cliffhanger

I agree that when parents dont appreciate there children for what they are, that is the biggest letdown for any person. Yes he did loose his son's affection because of his own misgivings. The ciffhanger will be there hanging for a few more chapters before it becomes clear as to what exactly is wrong with madhu...It will also make clear how keen an observer RK is...
Thanks for commenting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Lovelly post. Please do me pm.

😊 Thankyou sure I will
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Awesome Updates.

I hope Madhu gets to know more about Dr Rishabh Kundra soon.

😊 yes she will ...Thanks for commenting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali.12

Amazing FF👏..Read in one go..😃Loved the story line & Character sketch.Very different & with lot of different shades & filled with mystery .Very interesting & keep u in toes to read more.Really appreciate the long updates & regular ones too..😃Plzz add me to pm list..Love to read your updates & don't want to miss it..😃

a ww Thankyou soo much for your comments...so far the looong updates well somehow I am not good at shortcuts... though I so want to reduce the lengths of my chapters...Regular because I am enjoying wrting it a lot...😊 I will PM you
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smilydear

Keep writing ... Its wonderful n different ... Pl. PM me when u r ready with the update .

Thanks and I will PM you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroran

How can a father be soo rude to his son 😔
Good to see Madhu is Back 😃
Will she go with him ...
Waiting for update

Not sure if she will or not...let us see in future chapters... well at time fathers want to see their reflection in their sons and that too taller in size...it is this kind of desires that makes them rude and at time whimsical...and yes for now Madhu is back😊
Thanks for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aksuji

as always both the parts were awesome👏 ...thanku for these beautiful updates

Thankyou so much dear I have updated the next two chapters for you... was a little late because IF said that I am only allowed to post a few posts in a day ...I am not allowed to spam...lol replying to all your posts IF thought i was spamming😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya


It was a very pleasant surprise that he is a doctor. I really like that. Oh boy we will get to see more of her evilness, that has got to be entertaining. I am glad Madhu is going to get better soon. I saw your earlier reply, I had to comment on this FF because it is very well written, and I really like the story, both the characters have different shades to them. 😊

Thanks alot soujanya...😊 when you guys take out time to comment it means a lot to me...

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