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Posted: 12 years ago
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This short story on how Virman had come together with biji to reunite the ever green couple virike together. This start:

Part 1

Jeevika pack her bags to go to Rishikesh and think "Please Viren ji stop me from going I can't live with out for day. I live with your anger and your hatred but not without don't sperate me from you." Viren looking window crying "Jeevika you taken my anger the wrong way how can you leave like this in middle path when I need you the most. Is it important leave me. Don't you love me." Viren turn to Jeevika see her tear eyes and with just love as Jeevika say " I love the most and this family. I am doing this for you and my family you happy without me. But please say to me don't leave and stay I can't anger toward any more." Viren see Jeevika "I won't stop because I love you should understand" and back ground from chalta chalta...To be continue I know it short but please enjoy reading and leave your comments on what you think.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vItE2Wst0Pg&feature=youtube_gdata_player

Part 2:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3409641&TPN=2&#74926093
Edited by indian10 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue soon.
Will be waiting.
Like the whole idea.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome cannot wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh wooow this is a neice concept continue soon,
and plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great start ! Continue soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was lovely...😊

great start...!!!
looking forward to next part...!!

and its good to see u again after long time...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
continue soon n plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
good to see u back
do continue n pm me!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome start
plz continue soon n do pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2:

Jeevika had left an hour ago Viren kept looking window and kept thinking "Why Jeevika did leave me, I accept that been mad and anger at you but I love you more then my life and I can not live without." On the other side Jeevika on train her where try as no more tear out eyes but her heart ached as thought "Why Virenji not once you stop me. Your anger more then love for me. But they won't be a day that think of you and love as all my heart know I love and love until my dying. When you anger fire in heart calm please forgive for mistake mine for love we had."

While thought "Badi Maa now better and has example to me what happen that night. You did not even given chance sorry and left on middle way path but where love and understanding their no space for sorry thank you. Today you fail understand my feeling and love left me. I love you Jeevika until my heart beating I'll continue Iove you. I sorry I hurt you.."

Then Maanvi came from behind tap Viren shoulder and said " Jiju kya hua, I been knocking on door for five minutes but no response". Then Viren quickly wipes tears and say " Nothing Maanvi I just thinking case that all" Maanvi realize that something was not right, and she reply "Jiju why do lie when you can't why just tell me what matters is. Any way where is Jeevika di. "

Then Viren could look into Maanvi and turn said "Actual Jeevika gone Rishikesh for few days" Maanvi was shocked and "But why Jiju did you two have fight." Viren nods his head and trying not be emotional "It nothing like Me and Jeevika decide she for few days due badi maa does stress as doctor too keep out stress that all."



Here song this part from favouite movie chalta chalta : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLNQP2HxQoE&feature=youtube_gdata_player

To be continue enjoy reading please leave your comments and thank pervious comments enjoying my story.
Edited by indian10 - 12 years ago

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