thanks dearOriginally posted by: edward123
I knew it was Uday
Just read both the update and yeah I know I was late
I just hope Manveer remain 1 in the end
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thanks dearOriginally posted by: edward123
I knew it was Uday
Just read both the update and yeah I know I was late
I just hope Manveer remain 1 in the end
Chapter 19: A LOOK IN THE PAST FEW WEEKS
Uday sat in his room holding his drink. He took a small sip of it and remembered his conversation with manyata . how could she degrade his family in that way? Nobody knew the truth nor did anyone bother to find about it.
He had to finish her forever, before she made him weak by her intoxicating effect. She made him feel many things that he hid deep inside his body and soul. She reminded him that he was a man- with flesh and blood and all desires.he remembered his family when she was around, Manyata initially was just a toy for him, an rich spoilt bit*h with a heavenly body any man would like to make his own but now…………….
As alcohol seeped into his veins he began to remember the day he got the contract to kill manyata kumari
Flashback
uday received a call in the morning. A client wanted to see him to finish a person. Uday owned a place deep inside the slum. It was over there he met his clients. He disguised himself as an old fellow and reached that place half an hour before the meeting was to start. He covered his face with a scary mask and got ready to meet his new client
Half an hour later, a middle aged woman entered that place. It was clear she felt disgusted seeing this place. She was slim and looked nice. she wore a saree with matching ornaments and very little makeup. Uday recognized her. She was komal , a well known personality who regularly appeared in page 3 news, she was married twice . Maybe she wanted to give a deal against her beautician. Uday adjusted the pen camera to get a clear view of the conversation he was to have with komal.
Komals pov
The place was dark and stinking. Never in that person's life did she visit a place like this. But it was her need and she needed to get the deal done. She told him whom to kill
The person in front of him was masked . the masked man spoke" it can be done"
The eerie voice sent a shiver in the spine of the person
Here she was talking face to face to a cold blooded assassin whose record was perfect . he never missed a single killing and till now nobody could frame him or even reveal his identity .it was so clean.komal drew courage and spoke
K:"here is the advance 50 lakhs in cash, the remaining when the deal is done, the day she is pronounced dead. this is the photo. Make it look like an accident. How long will it take for the deal to happen?
U:"3 months"
K:"how will I contact you in these months.i have nt seen your face , your always masked "
U:"it doesn't matter if you didn't see me and don't worry ill contact you "
K:"atleast tell me your name . it's a huge sum iam giving you"
U:"what is in a name or a face as long as you get results ok you can call me the shark"
K:"ok ,it's a deal mr shark"
U:"one more thing I hate non believers. If you don't want to hire me you can pls leave
K:"no mr shark I do believe you "
As komal left uday pinned the photo on the wall. The face was a known one. He had seen her name in the business section of the newspaper.the famous manyata kumari , yuvarani of devgarh, owner of many successful business venters. Till date, he had not done any deals with her, but she was one hot chick who men craved . She was cute but now she was his prey and he was her predator
To create an accident was a simple task . but he wanted to enjoy this killing. The sweet smile on the girl face was going to be wiped soon. He laughed like a maniac thinking this.
Operation manyata had began
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The next crutial part was to meet her and gain her trust, he never wanted to force himself on her. He wanted her to give herself to him fully before he killed her
they had met at a business conference 2 weeks after uday agreed to finish manyata. Rohan ,her best friend introduced them. Uday was talking about some deal which manyata had won recently and rohan was happy to introduce him to his 'mannu'. Uday disliked rohan as he felt he would distract manyata from being close to uday
to make manyata fall for his charm was just a simple matter. He was dashing, handsome, hot and a heartthrob of girls. Any girl would be attracted to him just by his smile and if if he spoke, they would fall head over heels for him. Manyata was no exception. He had done great research on her likes and dislikes in the past two weeks
manyata did fall for him, it was not his wealth but his humble nature that attracted her to him. At first the conversation was purely business, then she felt something going between then ,something that bound them together . he had called her that day asking her to spend some time together. She happily agreed.
The car stopped in front of a restaurant
What followed was a carefully planned drama by uday. He took her to her favorite hotel and presented it as his favorite
Uday: this is my favorite restaurant . actually the food and the location is so good I keep coming over here.i am not sure whether you will like it or not
Manyata: my!! Even it is my favorite location. It's a strange coincidence no?
Uday: yes even I feel so
And he laughed loud in his mind. Step 1 was a success
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When he was sure she had fallen for him, he planned a date. It would be a surprise. He would tell her that they were going outside for a business deal and then he would take her to a restaurant were they would have a romantic date. Any girl would love such an experience
She was genuinely surprised when she took her over there. Her eyes showed how well she enjoyed the surprise. They sat down on the table and talked for sometime. Then uday excused himself to use the washroom.
Unaware to her was a pair of eyes that was fixed on her. The chocholate brown eyes of uday watched her with great interest. Such a beautiful piece of natures work ,that milky complexion, that lips, that curves – oh it was driving him crazy. A simple push down, the poor thing would be down , broken and dead .but not now he wanted her , to kiss those lips ,feel her breasts with his hands, love her maybe even try using whips and chains on her- oh he was getting high. His thoughts were interrupted as he realised it was time for him to meet her as he was standing there for for quite a long time
U: so how did you like the restaurant
M: its lovely and so romantic place to be alone ,you will be able to think clearly from there
U: no I disagree, its not romantic when your alone . its becomes romantic when you have someone special with you
M: and now do you think its romantic
U: (looking straight into her eyes)yes
Uday said this delibratly to make her feel that he loved her the same way as she loved him
Manyata blushed hearing that comment.she puts her head down able to look into that mesmerizing eyes
U: tell me don't you think you are being exploited by your family .they are not even your own, I mean your stepdad and stepsister
Uday was mentally laughing as he was well aware that her family had wmployed him to kill her, he wanted to know how her relationship with her family was
M: uday please don't bring in the word step over here. They are my own dad and sis they love me more than themselves. No body is exploiting me. how could it be exploitation when you do it out of your own will, I love my family so I spoil them
U: ok princess no more of this conversation, he felt it was time to stop this particular conversation
They left the restaurant and headed towards udays car parked on the opposite side of the road as manyata was crossing the road a speeding car headed towards her. Manyata was dumbstruck she didn't know what to do . uday saw the speeding car. He needed to do something before anything happened. uday pulled her away from the path of the speeding car in a nick of a second. the car passed them the distance between them and the car about 10 cm
U: (shaking manyata) princess are you ok?please princess say something please
M; (manyata was still in shock) iam ok uday ,lets go
U: are you sure princess?
M: yes, can we leave this place, please
U: sure you don't want to visit the hospital
M: no uday I am ok
She held udays hand as they crossed the road and uday started the car. His anger grew
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Mr shark (uday) was angry, very very angry as he drove his car away with manyata
who is that guy trying to spoil his plans
he was trying hard to finish this assignment soon and here comes a guy trying to spoil his whole plan. If manyata was killed today then he would get his money but what about the pleasure part. All this romantic dates and drama he was playing for the past one month. No, he would never let his effort go waste. He would make sure of it
the driver will pay for his mistake
he had noted the car's number. Today night that fellow will die
that night uday went and killed that fellow who came forward to destroy his plans. He hacked his body into pieces and took the car to the forest close to the underbridge. He hid the car using leaves and other weeds over there. Uday wanted to know how long it would take before the body was discovered
it took two weeks . Many boys who had gone for a picnic discovered the car and the rotting body in it and informed the police
uday made sure manyata knew about it and he told her about this incident as they drove to the site where uday wanted to build a school for illiterates
Uday was reading the newspaper. Manyata was looking out of the window
Uday speaks with disgust
U: oh does today's world have any humanity. Seethe headlines , a man was hacked to dead and body was left in the car under that suspension bridge in that forest down there. Three boys who had gone for a picnic saw this and informed the police , the forensics estimate the body is about 2 weeks old ,it had started to decay
M: even i hate medias attitude. I don't even read the newspaper nowadays . it is just killing suicide and others
U: I agree.
Uday said this with pride, no one would ever guess that he was behind this killing . uday got his revenge and some real romantic moments with mnayata
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Guys this is part one of the update
Will update the next part soon
The chapter turned to be too long for one update, so I cut it into two
Do comment and hit the like button
i am not sure how to do it but will try nowOriginally posted by: panchaali
very nice plot dear!!!!
but can you hyperlink your index?
it will be easier to read then 😊
thanks zinaHello Andy😛
hi zina
A huge sorry for delaying my comment,😭 as per i thought that i have commented but today going through my posts i found out that i did not comment till now...😭SORRY!no problem dear
the chapter was just amazing!!👏 what!!😲 uday is Mr. Shark? what!!😲 what!!😲 what!!😲 okay enough of my star plus drama😆 actually i knew that uday is Mr. Shark, but was not that sure...!! why doesn't this manyata understands him😡 stupid was saying bad to his family, only he knows the truth😭 i hope she gets to know about his past, but somewhere i think🤔 even manyata has feelings for uday😃...does she?😕 she must be having because his coming near her makes her lose her senses!!😳 she is so clever she was keeping an eye😲 on him and already knew that uday is Mr. Shark!! i think i am mixing the two latest chapters...am i? well andy you are a superb writer more than i can say👏now make up the love which exists between the two☺️!! i am eagerly waiting for the next cahpter, please update soon!!😉
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