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Posted: 12 years ago
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raj loves nani n decided to marry her.tej also loves nani.nani n raj marriage is decided.nani is pregnent now.everyone think its raj child.tej claim that it is his child.gunwanti want the varis of bundela so she decided to arrange marriage of nani and tej. 1 day kasa kaka raped nani.nani is crying leave bundela house.nani first go railway station 4 complain where plice wala peoples beat nani with hunter,nani slap plice wala.then a bus come and send nani to pagalkhane from there.nani is givem electric shock.then nani escope from there n dog beat nani.nani run n reach prostitution bar,a customer come there n nani dance for him n behosh ho gae,when he opened his eye he saw gunwanti in front of her.gunwanti ask her to come bundela. raj sttary hating nani.tej see nani n slap her.nani ask u love me.tej replied ur truth revealed.nani ask what tej replied.ur truth tha\t that vishnu chai wala is tumhare and dadaji ke nagayaz aulad ha.nani shocked kasa come there and slap him .nani is crying.nani reveal the truth yes i agree but this child belong to neither tej nor kasa kaka nor raj.i agree i m in relationship with u all.but this child belong to umed.gunwanti shocked n asked kya bakte ha n slap nani. umed accept the truth n throw gunwanti out of house.gunwanti drunk that day alot n go to jungle alone.a snake come there beat him n die. she go to plice station but a pagal come there n kiss her n rape her.a vain come n put her on vain to pagalkhana.she reached pagal khone gone mental shock.she escape from there a ox uske picha pad gaya.vo kichhad me girr gae.vo vaha se bahar nikal ne bundela house gae to vahi nani ni shadi ho rahe the,gunwanti ne puchaa kisse,to sab daar gae ye kichaad se bhikaraan kaha se aa gae.gunwanti cry n say me gunwanti hu.gunwanti go near mundap n see dulha face n die.bcs dulha is that same pagal who kiss n rape gunwanti,gunwanti ghost appear there n ask nani y u didnt marry kasa/raj/tej/umed.nani say i want new boy friend now i was boared of all of them .gunwanti ghost kill nani.nani die.gunwanti n nani ghost now come face to face of each other n became best friends n reached hell n both decided to marry yumraj...to be continoue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz reply howz the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yu can make funny stories but pls dont add these rape things and prostitution stuffs... Story base s funny.. But yu can b more creative without these stuff! Everyone will b pleased to read that! Dont mistake me... Its just my point of view... Hereafter make funny mai-nani stories without these rape nd all stuff related to this... Instead of telling illegal child/pregnancy, yu can make it triangle love... It will b much better... Cuz though its for fun, all those characters are done by senior actors... Pls take it as a friendly advice... Cuz nobody is perfect... Even am not that perfect to say this! But mistakes can b rectified! Sorry if i hurt yu!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol frst tym didnt undrstood it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like the idea- it just shows how ridiculous serials are. Only, use better punctuation and shorter sentences so people find it easier to understand.
Also, please note- Rape isn't funny ever. Don't make jokes about rape.

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